Episode 11. Part 2 - Revision history

Taimdala at 04:23, 4 July 2009

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Taimdala at 20:24, 6 March 2009

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	Arden and Christian start yelling for Martha over their headsets. Mike’s still under the Chempliance. One can hope he will obey our direct order and ''come pick us the hell up!''		Arden and Christian start yelling for Martha over their headsets. Mike’s still under the Chempliance. One can hope he will obey our direct order and ''come pick us the hell up!''


	One of our shots gets lucky. It connects and takes one of the plain-armored Feds down. Finally! The odds edge a little more towards even. We outnumber the Feds two to one to their out-firepowering us two to one. Not much, but we’ll take what we can get.		One of our shots gets lucky. It connects and takes one of the plain-armored Feds down. Finally! The odds edge a little more towards even. We outnumber the Feds two to one to their out-firepowering us two to one. Not much, but we’ll take what we can get.

Taimdala at 20:19, 6 March 2009

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	Outside, Arden and Nika and Christian are taking fire from the sonic rifles and taking damage. They are also scoring hits on the Feds. Gunfire volleys back and forth and it’s rapidly becoming apparent that our rounds are not going to pierce the armor our opponents are wearing. Unless we can target the vulnerable points of the neck and the joints, lacking anything heavier, it’s all about distraction and delay til Mike can arrive.		Outside, Arden and Nika and Christian are taking fire from the sonic rifles and taking damage. They are also scoring hits on the Feds. Gunfire volleys back and forth and it’s rapidly becoming apparent that our rounds are not going to pierce the armor our opponents are wearing. Unless we can target the vulnerable points of the neck and the joints, lacking anything heavier, it’s all about distraction and delay til Mike can arrive.

	'''Where the hell is our ride?'''		''Where the hell is our ride?''

	Christian lays down suppression fire. Nika aims for the Fed with the assault rifle. Even though there is only one of those to the two sonic rifles, it’s the more deadly, and Nika’s looking to neutralize the bigger threats first. Arden shoots for the fuel cartridge. He hits. It explodes. It makes the armored shuttle rock a little. Some of the fuel splatters the interior through the open hatch…but nothing critical is damaged. The Feds stand fast, and then continue their assault.		Christian lays down suppression fire. Nika aims for the Fed with the assault rifle. Even though there is only one of those to the two sonic rifles, it’s the more deadly, and Nika’s looking to neutralize the bigger threats first. Arden shoots for the fuel cartridge. He hits. It explodes. It makes the armored shuttle rock a little. Some of the fuel splatters the interior through the open hatch…but nothing critical is damaged. The Feds stand fast, and then continue their assault.

Taimdala at 20:19, 6 March 2009

2009-03-06T20:19:12Z

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Taimdala at 06:49, 3 March 2009

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Arden dives out and turns the corner of the stair shack, and glues himself to the side of it, using it for scant cover while he pulls his gun from his doctor’s bag. It’s the best he can do—there is nothing else on the roof to hide behind. Not a ventilation shaft or a HVAC unit in sight. Nothing but the stair shack and the shallow rise of the helipad.

Nika is right behind Arden. She has even less cover than Arden, opting to go prone on the roof instead of standing next to Arden and risk shooting him by accident. She fires off a quick shot and it bounces off the roof. Damn.

Inside the stair shack, Rina pulls her mini blow torch from her tool bag, yanks the fuel cartridge and hands it to Christian.

'''Rina:''' You toss. I’ll shoot.

And she draws her gun, nodding at the open door and the advancing enemy. Christian throws it and it flies through the air in a beautiful arc, landing in the sweet spot in the middle of the enemy grouping.

Nika scrambles backward toward the stairs shack, hoping to find more cover at its side. Arden shoots, hits and the bullet bounces off the enemy’s armor with a big spark.

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