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	'''Mike:''' How long has he been flying with you?<br>		'''Mike:''' How long has he been flying with you?<br>
	'''Rina:''' 26 June, 2520<br>		'''Rina:''' 26 June, 2520<br>
	'''Mike:''' You can’t … You mean you didn’t know any of this? He never seemed … a little odd to you?<br>		'''Mike:''' You can’t … You mean you didn’t know any of this? He never seemed … a little odd to you?<br><br>
	That’s a loaded question.<br>
			That’s a loaded question.<br><br>

	'''Rina:''' Anybody looking at us on that ship would think we were all crazy as foxes.<br>		'''Rina:''' Anybody looking at us on that ship would think we were all crazy as foxes.<br>
	'''Mike:''' But if it’s anything like his MO, he will try to seem sympathetic, perhaps helpless, earn your trust. Somehow try to gain your affections. But it’s … He’s just like us. There’s nothing inside him that’s real. He’s on a mission.<br>		'''Mike:''' But if it’s anything like his MO, he will try to seem sympathetic, perhaps helpless, earn your trust. Somehow try to gain your affections. But it’s … He’s just like us. There’s nothing inside him that’s real. He’s on a mission.<br>
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	'''Rina:''' Which slimy bastard?<br>		'''Rina:''' Which slimy bastard?<br>
	'''Joshua:''' Gibbons. The point is Mike was saying something about he couldn’t talk because it would mess up the plan. Which is what Gibbons was saying. Now maybe it’s a happy-go-~~luck~~ coincidence Gibbons shows up and asks “Oh by the way has he talked? Is he talking?” Or maybe, you know, there’s some direct connection there.<br>		'''Joshua:''' Gibbons. The point is Mike was saying something about he couldn’t talk because it would mess up the plan. Which is what Gibbons was saying. Now maybe it’s a happy-go-lucky coincidence Gibbons shows up and asks “Oh by the way has he talked? Is he talking?” Or maybe, you know, there’s some direct connection there.<br>
	'''Nika:''' And the other thing is he’s talking about atonement because they broke him. He gave up a number of operatives, they were Nguyen’s operatives and it is highly possible that in attempting to get them off his back, he agreed to do this job for them and keep his mouth shut. Period.<br>		'''Nika:''' And the other thing is he’s talking about atonement because they broke him. He gave up a number of operatives, they were Nguyen’s operatives and it is highly possible that in attempting to get them off his back, he agreed to do this job for them and keep his mouth shut. Period.<br>
	'''Joshua:''' Possible. It is possible this way.<br>		'''Joshua:''' Possible. It is possible this way.<br>

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	'''Mike:''' You’ll have to trust me.<br><br>		'''Mike:''' You’ll have to trust me.<br><br>

	And that’s it, right ~~thre~~. Does she trust him? Mike looks at her narrowly.<br><br>		And that’s it, right there. Does she trust him? Mike looks at her narrowly.<br><br>

	'''Mike:''' How long has he been flying with you?<br>		'''Mike:''' How long has he been flying with you?<br>

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	'''Rina:''' I had a little more time to prepare for that. I had two whole days.<br>		'''Rina:''' I had a little more time to prepare for that. I had two whole days.<br>
	'''Mike:''' Only your life depends on it. And possibly the lives of your crew.<br>		'''Mike:''' Only your life depends on it. And possibly the lives of your crew.<br><br>
	She’s trapped between two men: Mike. Joshua.<br>
			She’s trapped between two men: Mike. Joshua.<br><br>

	'''Mike:''' And then, if we both survive this, then … we’ll try. We’ll just have to try to put this behind us. And do it again if we have to.<br>		'''Mike:''' And then, if we both survive this, then … we’ll try. We’ll just have to try to put this behind us. And do it again if we have to.<br>
	'''Rina:''' Who else is left to kill, Mike?<br>		'''Rina:''' Who else is left to kill, Mike?<br>

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	'''Joshua:''' I don’t know, I don’t know. I’d say Gibbons but that’s because I don’t trust him any farther than I can kick him out into the Black.<br><br>		'''Joshua:''' I don’t know, I don’t know. I’d say Gibbons but that’s because I don’t trust him any farther than I can kick him out into the Black.<br><br>

	Kiera finds it hard to believe that anyone would infiltrate the bunker but suggests we try to find out their guard schedule, shift changes and whatnot. Just because it’s curious and it seems to be important and if it’s five men, it’s an amazing coincidence. Nika counters by saying she doesn’t know if she has a friend on the inside who can tell her that. What about ''Decatur'', Kiera asks. Sure, they promised they wouldn’t do nothin’ but the Captain up there has already mentioned us being crazy in the past, what’s a few more crazy questions gonna hurt. Nika warns that she might ask those questions and then it won’t be clear to Decatur that they still aren’t doing something they shouldn’t be doing. How about finding some people to go drinking with and pumping them for information, Kiera wants to know. Kiera and Nika start planning an intel gathering mission disguised as a bar crawl. It gets loud and silly as they go through come-on-sailor scenarios. Kiera suggests they slap a patch on Joshua and Rina to spare everyone babysitting duties while they do their bar crawl. After all, it’s not fair to saddle Arden with those two while still conscious…<br><br>		Kiera finds it hard to believe that anyone would infiltrate the bunker but suggests we try to find out their guard schedule, shift changes and whatnot. Just because it’s curious and it seems to be important and if it’s five men, it’s an amazing coincidence. Nika counters by saying she doesn’t know if she has a friend on the inside who can tell her that. What about ''Decatur'', Kiera asks. Sure, they promised they wouldn’t do nothin’ but the Captain up there has already mentioned us being crazy in the past, what’s a few more crazy questions gonna hurt. Nika warns that she might ask those questions and then it won’t be clear to ''Decatur'' that they still aren’t doing something they shouldn’t be doing. How about finding some people to go drinking with and pumping them for information, Kiera wants to know. Kiera and Nika start planning an intel gathering mission disguised as a bar crawl. It gets loud and silly as they go through come-on-sailor scenarios. Kiera suggests they slap a patch on Joshua and Rina to spare everyone babysitting duties while they do their bar crawl. After all, it’s not fair to saddle Arden with those two while still conscious…<br><br>

	Rina’s still pacing, drinking and almost halfway through her bottle and it still tastes disgusting.<br><br>		Rina’s still pacing, drinking and almost halfway through her bottle and it still tastes disgusting.<br><br>

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	'''Joshua:''' I don’t know, I don’t know. I’d say Gibbons but that’s because I don’t trust him any farther than I can kick him out into the Black.<br><br>		'''Joshua:''' I don’t know, I don’t know. I’d say Gibbons but that’s because I don’t trust him any farther than I can kick him out into the Black.<br><br>

	Kiera finds it hard to believe that anyone would infiltrate the bunker but suggests we try to find out their guard schedule, shift changes and whatnot. Just because it’s curious and it seems to be important and if it’s five men, it’s an amazing coincidence. Nika counters by saying she doesn’t know if she has a friend on the inside who can tell her that. What about Decatur, Kiera asks. Sure, they promised they wouldn’t do nothin’ but the Captain up there has already mentioned us being crazy in the past, what’s a few more crazy questions gonna hurt. Nika warns that she might ask those questions and then it won’t be clear to Decatur that they still aren’t doing something they shouldn’t be doing. How about finding some people to go drinking with and pumping them for information, Kiera wants to know. Kiera and Nika start planning an intel gathering mission disguised as a bar crawl. It gets loud and silly as they go through come-on-sailor scenarios. Kiera suggests they slap a patch on Joshua and Rina to spare everyone babysitting duties while they do their bar crawl. After all, it’s not fair to saddle Arden with those two while still conscious…<br><br>		Kiera finds it hard to believe that anyone would infiltrate the bunker but suggests we try to find out their guard schedule, shift changes and whatnot. Just because it’s curious and it seems to be important and if it’s five men, it’s an amazing coincidence. Nika counters by saying she doesn’t know if she has a friend on the inside who can tell her that. What about ''Decatur'', Kiera asks. Sure, they promised they wouldn’t do nothin’ but the Captain up there has already mentioned us being crazy in the past, what’s a few more crazy questions gonna hurt. Nika warns that she might ask those questions and then it won’t be clear to Decatur that they still aren’t doing something they shouldn’t be doing. How about finding some people to go drinking with and pumping them for information, Kiera wants to know. Kiera and Nika start planning an intel gathering mission disguised as a bar crawl. It gets loud and silly as they go through come-on-sailor scenarios. Kiera suggests they slap a patch on Joshua and Rina to spare everyone babysitting duties while they do their bar crawl. After all, it’s not fair to saddle Arden with those two while still conscious…<br><br>

	Rina’s still pacing, drinking and almost halfway through her bottle and it still tastes disgusting.<br><br>		Rina’s still pacing, drinking and almost halfway through her bottle and it still tastes disgusting.<br><br>

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	'''Rina:''' If you have a pardon in your pocket I would love to see it.<br>		'''Rina:''' If you have a pardon in your pocket I would love to see it.<br>
	'''Gibbons:''' I wouldn’t say a pardon … but there is a movement afoot to suggest alternate sentencing. But it does require certain things remain, how shall I say? unsaid. If his plan is to remain quiet, then that might be adequate.<br>		'''Gibbons:''' I wouldn’t say a pardon … but there is a movement afoot to suggest alternate sentencing. But it does require certain things remain, how shall I say? unsaid. If his plan is to remain quiet, then that might be adequate.<br>
	'''Rina:''' (very softly to self) ''Oh, God, I ''''knew''' it…'' (louder, to Gibbons) So. Things need to remain unsaid. There’s a lot of ''unsaid'' going on around here.<br>		'''Rina:''' (very softly to self) ''Oh, God, I '''knew''' it…'' (louder, to Gibbons) So. Things need to remain unsaid. There’s a lot of ''unsaid'' going on around here.<br>
	'''Gibbons:''' (sighs) Ah, yes. If only the wheels of democracy were … if only it were unnecessary to lube those wheels with crude oil, but things aren’t always as straightforward as they might seem.<br>		'''Gibbons:''' (sighs) Ah, yes. If only the wheels of democracy were … if only it were unnecessary to lube those wheels with crude oil, but things aren’t always as straightforward as they might seem.<br>
	'''Rina:''' I was wondering when we’d get around to the oil angle of You Go Industries.<br><br>		'''Rina:''' I was wondering when we’d get around to the oil angle of You Go Industries.<br><br>
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	The clock ticks on and the media circus grows bigger, the court date approaches and with it, the future of an entire system hangs in the balance… and with it, the future of everyone on ''Summer’s Gift''. One thing is certain: no matter the outcome, nothing will ever be the same again.<br><br>		The clock ticks on and the media circus grows bigger, the court date approaches and with it, the future of an entire system hangs in the balance… and with it, the future of everyone on ''Summer’s Gift''. One thing is certain: no matter the outcome, nothing will ever be the same again.<br><br>

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	The Non-com is looking a mite weirded out over this new development. This is clearly not the sort of thing he was expecting. It sure the hell wasn’t what Rina expected, either.<br><br>		The Non-com is looking a mite weirded out over this new development. This is clearly not the sort of thing he was expecting. It sure the hell wasn’t what Rina expected, either.<br><br>

	Rina~~: (~~silently mouths) Take care of him?<br><br>		Rina silently mouths: ''Take care of him?''<br><br>

	And she mimes putting a pistol under her chin and pulling the trigger.<br><br>		And she mimes putting a pistol under her chin and pulling the trigger.<br><br>
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	She can’t move. She can’t breathe.<br><br>		She can’t move. She can’t breathe.<br><br>

	Mike: You have to focus. You know the goal. You can’t let yourself be betrayed by emotion. <br>		Mike: You have to focus. You know the goal. You can’t let yourself be betrayed by emotion. <br><br>
	All she can do is stare at the man she loves. <br>
			All she can do is stare at the man she loves.<br><br>

	Mike: I was able to do it. You can do it. I know you can.<br><br>		Mike: I was able to do it. You can do it. I know you can.<br><br>

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	Rina: When?<br>		Rina: When?<br>
	Mike: As soon as you can. (a beat) Obviously, not here. But where it’s safe enough. He’ll be suspicious. So you have to convince him. You have to … have to … (taps his temple) Two minds. Just like you did when you were Strachan.<br>		Mike: As soon as you can. (a beat) Obviously, not here. But where it’s safe enough. He’ll be suspicious. So you have to convince him. You have to … have to … (taps his temple) Two minds. Just like you did when you were Strachan.<br><br>
	And she thinks: Dear God, what have I done?<br>
			And she thinks: ''Dear God, what have I done?''<br><br>

	Rina: I had a little more time to prepare for that. I had two whole days.<br>		Rina: I had a little more time to prepare for that. I had two whole days.<br>
	Mike: Only your life depends on it. And possibly the lives of your crew.<br>		Mike: Only your life depends on it. And possibly the lives of your crew.<br>

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