Episode 501: Shakedown Cruise, Part Five - Revision history

Taimdala at 05:04, 7 February 2011

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	'''Arden:''' But that’s not how fast we’re gonna get her back.<br><br>		'''Arden:''' But that’s not how fast we’re gonna get her back.<br><br>

	Nika. Not Rina. You know, the ''other'' missing woman.<br>		Nika. Not Rina. You know, the ''other'' missing woman.<br><br>

	'''Kiera:''' (agreeing) No. Well, hopefully he’ll set her up in a nice comfortable place so she can recover a little better.<br>		'''Kiera:''' (agreeing) No. Well, hopefully he’ll set her up in a nice comfortable place so she can recover a little better.<br>

Taimdala at 05:01, 7 February 2011

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	How hard can it be to steal a gun? After all, we did it.<br><br>		How hard can it be to steal a gun? After all, we did it.<br><br>

	Joshua: Anyway, back to my point. They have her at Berth—.<br><br>		'''Joshua:''' Anyway, back to my point. They have her at Berth—.<br><br>

	He gives them the berth number and realizes something.<br><br>		He gives them the berth number and realizes something.<br><br>

Taimdala at 04:56, 7 February 2011

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	She stands over the goon on the ground and kicks him again for good measure.<br><br>		She stands over the goon on the ground and kicks him again for good measure.<br><br>

	Kiera: Didn’t even pay for the sale. Gave us some counterfeit money. (to Arden) Get the stuff and let’s go.<br><br>		'''Kiera:''' Didn’t even pay for the sale. Gave us some counterfeit money. (to Arden) Get the stuff and let’s go.<br><br>

	They get the impression that though people are hanging back and looking on, someone or several have called the cops already. Time to go. Arden gestures at the prone goon with the shotgun.<br><br>		They get the impression that though people are hanging back and looking on, someone or several have called the cops already. Time to go. Arden gestures at the prone goon with the shotgun.<br><br>

Taimdala at 04:55, 7 February 2011

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	'''Nika:''' You’re going to be able to correct this and I’m actually going to be able to see at the time that you’re finished?<br>		'''Nika:''' You’re going to be able to correct this and I’m actually going to be able to see at the time that you’re finished?<br>
	'''Chu:''' Ahhm …. by the time you wake up. It may take some training. If you have access to a Core physician, you might be able to expedite your recovery. It should take a few weeks to fully return to your previous acuity. If there’s an infection you should take some—<br>		'''Chu:''' Ahhm …. by the time you wake up. It may take some training. If you have access to a Core physician, you might be able to expedite your recovery. It should take a few weeks to fully return to your previous acuity. If there’s an infection you should take some—<br>
	'''Nika:~~'''~~''' What exactly are you going to do?<br>		'''Nika:''' What exactly are you going to do?<br>
	'''Chu: I am going to replace your eyes. Trust me. The eyes that I have are quite good. Pretty healthy. No sign of disease. They’re really quite pretty.<br><br>		'''Chu:''' I am going to replace your eyes. Trust me. The eyes that I have are quite good. Pretty healthy. No sign of disease. They’re really quite pretty.<br><br>

	Chu starts rolling up her sleeve.<br><br>		Chu starts rolling up her sleeve.<br><br>

Taimdala at 04:54, 7 February 2011

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	'''Kiera:''' (snarling) That’s what you get for stealin’ my stuff!<br><br>		'''Kiera:''' (snarling) That’s what you get for stealin’ my stuff!<br><br>

	Meanwhile, Joshua’s following his target. He watches as the man talks into his collar, listens, and shakes his head. The man turns around and walks off. Joshua fades back into the shadows, lets the man pass his position and follows him to a different berth, a different ship where a bald headed man who is clearly the boss is waiting. He’s dressed in a duster, too. Joshua’s man approaches his ~~boos~~ and swack! gets a whip-slap across the face for his trouble. A further beating is halted by a call, which the boss takes.<br><br>		Meanwhile, Joshua’s following his target. He watches as the man talks into his collar, listens, and shakes his head. The man turns around and walks off. Joshua fades back into the shadows, lets the man pass his position and follows him to a different berth, a different ship where a bald headed man who is clearly the boss is waiting. He’s dressed in a duster, too. Joshua’s man approaches his boss and ''swack!'' gets a whip-slap across the face for his trouble. A further beating is halted by a call, which the boss takes.<br><br>

	Who ''are'' these guys? <br><br>		Who ''are'' these guys? <br><br>

Taimdala at 03:10, 7 February 2011

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	Kiera and Joshua rejoin the rest, Joshua following in Kiera’s footsteps with Chu’s characteristic stride. Kiera’s talking as she walks in.<br><br>		Kiera and Joshua rejoin the rest, Joshua following in Kiera’s footsteps with Chu’s characteristic stride. Kiera’s talking as she walks in.<br><br>

	'''Kiera:''' (continuing) … Chu also knows that I am Kiera and I will hunt him down for a very long time. And '''I''' know what he looks like.<br>		'''Kiera:''' (continuing) … Chu also knows that ''I am Kiera'' and I will hunt him down for a very long time. And '''I''' know what he looks like.<br>
	'''Joshua:''' All right. Let’s do this.<br>		'''Joshua:''' All right. Let’s do this.<br>
	'''Beglan:''' You know what he looks like ''now''.<br>		'''Beglan:''' You know what he looks like ''now''.<br>
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	'''Nika:''' Let’s hope.<br>		'''Nika:''' Let’s hope.<br>
	'''Rina:''' All right. Look out for pickpockets.<br>		'''Rina:''' All right. Look out for pickpockets.<br>
	'''Nika:''' (dryly) I’m supposed to see them?<br><br>		'''Nika:''' (dryly) I’m supposed to ''see'' them?<br><br>

	Because the streets are so crowded, instead of driving to the fountain Arden and Kiera will walk with Nika to it. Nika will carry the satchel with the money. It’ll take them a good part of the hour to get to the fountain, but they can make it. Joshua and Rina will leave for Chu’s ship, with yet another revision in the plan. Joshua will walk like himself, with a hat pulled down low to hide his disguise and will openly enter Chu’s ship with Rina in tow, just like any other customer. Once aboard and out of sight, he’ll throw off his coat and reveal his disguised self and exit as Chu, again with Rina in tow. They’ll walk together for a distance and then Joshua will play aggravated doctor fed up with all the cloak-and-dagger crap and send Rina on her way, leaving Joshua to lead the watchers on a wild goose chase to give the real Chu a chance to bug out from the ship and pick up Nika. Rina will pull a fade and follow anyone who follows Joshua.<br><br>		Because the streets are so crowded, instead of driving to the fountain Arden and Kiera will walk with Nika to it. Nika will carry the satchel with the money. It’ll take them a good part of the hour to get to the fountain, but they can make it. Joshua and Rina will leave for Chu’s ship, with yet another revision in the plan. Joshua will walk like himself, with a hat pulled down low to hide his disguise and will openly enter Chu’s ship with Rina in tow, just like any other customer. Once aboard and out of sight, he’ll throw off his coat and reveal his disguised self and exit as Chu, again with Rina in tow. They’ll walk together for a distance and then Joshua will play aggravated doctor fed up with all the cloak-and-dagger crap and send Rina on her way, leaving Joshua to lead the watchers on a wild goose chase to give the real Chu a chance to bug out from the ship and pick up Nika. Rina will pull a fade and follow anyone who follows Joshua.<br><br>

Taimdala at 02:55, 7 February 2011

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