Episode 501: Shakedown Cruise, Part Two - Revision history

Taimdala at 20:06, 9 March 2011

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Taimdala at 03:58, 7 February 2011

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	'''Rina:''' (quietly) Hey. What happened in there? Dirty old man? Getting fresh?<br>		'''Rina:''' (quietly) Hey. What happened in there? Dirty old man? Getting fresh?<br>
	'''Joshua:''' He was accosting Kiera. I solved the problem.<br>		'''Joshua:''' He was accosting Kiera. I solved the problem.<br>
	'''Rina:''' Okay. Could you show me where the man was smoking?<br>		'''Rina:''' Okay. Could you show me where the man was smoking?<br><br>

	Kiera seemed fine, no matter what really happened, but there was still the issue of the smoke setting off the fire alarm. Rina takes a deep sniff but can barely smell the smoke.<br><br>		Kiera seemed fine, no matter what really happened, but there was still the issue of the smoke setting off the fire alarm. Rina takes a deep sniff but can barely smell the smoke.<br><br>

Taimdala at 03:50, 7 February 2011

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	'''Nika:''' Yeah, I would say that’s an adequate assessment of the situation, yes. Stay right here.<br><br>		'''Nika:''' Yeah, I would say that’s an adequate assessment of the situation, yes. Stay right here.<br><br>

	Arden has managed to make it to the bridge in time to hear that last from Nika.<br>		Arden has managed to make it to the bridge in time to hear that last from Nika.<br><br>

	'''Arden:''' Beginning to think this ship is a bad design flaw.<br>		'''Arden:''' Beginning to think this ship is a bad design flaw.<br>

Taimdala at 06:48, 5 February 2011

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	'''Nika:''' Do these stupid little manholes actually go all the way down to where they are? Why don’t we tell’em to come up?<br>		'''Nika:''' Do these stupid little manholes actually go all the way down to where they are? Why don’t we tell’em to come up?<br>
	'''Rina:''' (calling up) Well the problem is, is it comes out on the cargo deck behind the airlock door.<br>		'''Rina:''' (calling up) Well the problem is, is it comes out on the cargo deck ''behind'' the airlock door.<br>
	'''Nika:''' Oh.<br>		'''Nika:''' Oh.<br>
	'''Rina:''' Yeah. So hopefully when I come out on this end, it’s not going to decompress on me.<br>		'''Rina:''' Yeah. So hopefully when I come out on this end, it’s not going to decompress on me.<br>

Taimdala at 06:46, 5 February 2011

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	'''Nika:''' Go back to your staterooms.<br>		'''Nika:''' Go back to your staterooms.<br>
	'''Passenger:''' (faintly) Which one is mine again—? (a bump!) Ow!<br>		'''Passenger One:''' (faintly) Which one is mine again—? (a bump!) Ow!<br>
	'''Nika:''' Please clear the hallways. Navigate off the walls.<br>		'''Nika:''' Please clear the hallways. Navigate off the walls.<br>
	'''Passenger:''' You know, I served once aboard a ship if you need any help with anything ... Nika: I’ll keep that in mind, thank you much.<br><br>		'''Passenger One:''' You know, I served once aboard a ship if you need any help with anything ...<br>
			'''Nika:''' I’ll keep that in mind, thank you much.<br><br>

	[[image:Seeders.jpg\|left\|Johnny Appleseed Salesmen: Shelley Levene - Dave Moss - George Aaronow]]<br><br><br><br><br><br><br><br><br><br><br><br>		[[image:Seeders.jpg\|left\|Johnny Appleseed Salesmen: Shelley Levene - Dave Moss - George Aaronow]]<br><br><br><br><br><br><br><br><br><br><br><br>
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	'''Joshua:''' Yeah, it’s over this way. He was smoking somewhere over there.(a beat) Can we get back up there? It’s dark down here. I mean, really dark down here if you haven’t noticed.<br>		'''Joshua:''' Yeah, it’s over this way. He was smoking somewhere over there.(a beat) Can we get back up there? It’s dark down here. I mean, really dark down here if you haven’t noticed.<br>
	'''Rina:''' Then why don’t you go up without me. I’m going to see if I can’t find that cigarette butt and really take it out.<br>		'''Rina:''' Then why don’t you go up without me. I’m going to see if I can’t find that cigarette butt and ''really'' take it out.<br>
	'''Joshua:''' I believe we got the cigarette butt. I think it’s done. (off her look) All right. All right.<br>		'''Joshua:''' I believe we got the cigarette butt. I think it’s done. (off her look) All right. All right.<br>
	'''Rina:''' Fine. I’m going in.<br>		'''Rina:''' Fine. I’m going in.<br>
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	'''Rina:''' The hold.<br>		'''Rina:''' The hold.<br>
	'''Joshua:''' The cigarette’s taken care of.<br>		'''Joshua:''' The cigarette’s taken care of.<br>
	'''Rina:''' How do you know it’s a cigarette?<br>		'''Rina:''' ''How do you know it’s a cigarette?''<br>
	'''Joshua:''' Because we watched him smoke it.<br>		'''Joshua:''' Because we watched him ''smoke'' it.<br>
	'''Rina:''' So?!<br>		'''Rina:''' '''''So?!'''''<br>
	'''Joshua:''' Okay. I’m not leaving. I’m not leaving until you come up.<br><br>		'''Joshua:''' Okay. I’m ''not'' leaving. I’m not leaving until you come up.<br><br>

	She’s thinking that nothing normal would have set off the alarm. What if the passenger had something other than a cigarette? Something worse? Maybe it’s the hour or the fact that she’d been rudely awakened in the middle of the night but Rina’s twitchiness won’t let her rest until she’s investigated the matter for herself. Joshua waits at the cargo doors as she goes in. Sometimes it’s easier not to argue with the woman.<br><br>		She’s thinking that nothing normal would have set off the alarm. What if the passenger had something other than a cigarette? Something worse? Maybe it’s the hour or the fact that she’d been rudely awakened in the middle of the night but Rina’s twitchiness won’t let her rest until she’s investigated the matter for herself. Joshua waits at the cargo doors as she goes in. Sometimes it’s easier not to argue with the woman.<br><br>
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	Nika got tired of waiting for them and has just stepped off the bottom rung when she hears this last exchange.<br><br>		Nika got tired of waiting for them and has just stepped off the bottom rung when she hears this last exchange.<br><br>

	'''Nika:''' What in the bloody hell is going on down here?<br>		'''Nika:''' What ''in the bloody hell'' is going on down here?<br>
	'''Rina:''' (calling back) Fishing out the butt.<br>		'''Rina:''' (calling back) Fishing out the butt.<br>
	'''Joshua:''' (off Nika’s squick) ''Not'' a metaphor.<br>		'''Joshua:''' (off Nika’s squick) ''Not'' a metaphor.<br>

Taimdala at 06:01, 30 January 2011

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	'''Salesman:''' Was that your boyfriend?<br>		'''Salesman:''' Was that your boyfriend?<br>
	'''Kiera:''' No … He’s kinda like an older brother. Kinda really protective sometimes. He’s just odd. Don’t worry about it.<br>		'''Kiera:''' No … He’s kinda like an older brother. Kinda really protective sometimes. He’s just odd. Don’t worry about it.<br>
	'''~~Joshua~~:''' He’s got good night vision. He’s got implants?<br>		'''Salesman:''' He’s got good night vision. He’s got implants?<br>
	'''Kiera:''' You know what? Maybe. Some people are born with vision like a cat. But that’s why we have a flashlight though. Is there anything we can get for you?<br>		'''Kiera:''' You know what? Maybe. Some people are born with vision like a cat. But that’s why we have a flashlight though. Is there anything we can get for you?<br>
	'''Salesman:''' Well, there was this farmer back out on the Rim somewhere, he had this beautiful daughter. Beautiful daughter …<br><br>		'''Salesman:''' Well, there was this farmer back out on the Rim somewhere, he had this beautiful daughter. Beautiful daughter …<br><br>

Taimdala at 07:22, 25 January 2011

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	'''Kiera:''' (lightly) Oh, I know. I know. <br>		'''Kiera:''' (lightly) Oh, I know. I know. <br>
	'''Salesman:''' Was that your boyfriend?<br>		'''Salesman:''' Was that your boyfriend?<br>
	'''Kiera:''' No … He’s kinda like an older brother. Kinda really protective sometimes. He’s just odd. Don’t worry about it.		'''Kiera:''' No … He’s kinda like an older brother. Kinda really protective sometimes. He’s just odd. Don’t worry about it.<br>
	'''Joshua:''' He’s got good night vision. He’s got implants?<br>		'''Joshua:''' He’s got good night vision. He’s got implants?<br>
	'''Kiera:''' You know what? Maybe. Some people are born with vision like a cat. But that’s why we have a flashlight though. Is there anything we can get for you?<br>		'''Kiera:''' You know what? Maybe. Some people are born with vision like a cat. But that’s why we have a flashlight though. Is there anything we can get for you?<br>
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	'''Joshua:''' Yes.<br>		'''Joshua:''' Yes.<br>
	'''Beglan:''' No one’s out the airlock? <br>		'''Beglan:''' No one’s out the airlock? <br>
	'''Joshua: Nope. We’re all good.<br>		'''Joshua:''' Nope. We’re all good.<br>
	'''Beglan:''' No fires?<br>		'''Beglan:''' No fires?<br>
	'''Rina:''' (over the comms) ''Yet''.<br>		'''Rina:''' (over the comms) ''Yet''.<br>

Taimdala at 07:18, 25 January 2011

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	'''Passenger:''' (faintly) Which one is mine again—? (a bump!) Ow!<br>		'''Passenger:''' (faintly) Which one is mine again—? (a bump!) Ow!<br>
	'''Nika:''' Please clear the hallways. Navigate off the walls.<br>		'''Nika:''' Please clear the hallways. Navigate off the walls.<br>
	'''Passenger:''' You know, I served once aboard a ship if you need any help with anything ... Nika: I’ll keep that in mind, thank you much.<br>		'''Passenger:''' You know, I served once aboard a ship if you need any help with anything ... Nika: I’ll keep that in mind, thank you much.<br><br>

	[[image:Seeders.jpg\|left\|Johnny Appleseed Salesmen: Shelley Levene - Dave Moss - George Aaronow]]<br><br><br><br><br><br><br><br><br>		[[image:Seeders.jpg\|left\|Johnny Appleseed Salesmen: Shelley Levene - Dave Moss - George Aaronow]]<br><br><br><br><br><br><br><br><br><br><br><br>

	From the bottom of the stairs, we hear a second passenger address the first.<br><br>		From the bottom of the stairs, we hear a second passenger address the first.<br><br>

Taimdala at 07:16, 25 January 2011

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	Our passenger reaches out and grabs, but it’s not Kiera’s arm he’s grabbing. Kiera calmly takes his hand off her.<br><br>		Our passenger reaches out and grabs, but it’s not Kiera’s arm he’s grabbing. Kiera calmly takes his hand off her.<br><br>

	Kiera: Here, let me show you where my arm is. There, that’s my arm. Thank you.<br><br>		'''Kiera:''' Here, let me show you where my arm is. There, that’s my arm. Thank you.<br><br>

	And just above the threshold of hearing, Joshua catches Kiera’s purring growl. Grr-rr.<br><br>		And just above the threshold of hearing, Joshua catches Kiera’s purring growl. Grr-rr.<br><br>

Scholz at 01:40, 23 January 2011

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	'''Passenger:''' (faintly) Which one is mine again—? (a bump!) Ow!<br>		'''Passenger:''' (faintly) Which one is mine again—? (a bump!) Ow!<br>
	'''Nika:''' Please clear the hallways. Navigate off the walls.<br>		'''Nika:''' Please clear the hallways. Navigate off the walls.<br>
	'''Passenger:''' You know, I served once aboard a ship if you need any help with anything ... Nika: I’ll keep that in mind, thank you much.<br><br>		'''Passenger:''' You know, I served once aboard a ship if you need any help with anything ... Nika: I’ll keep that in mind, thank you much.<br>

			[[image:Seeders.jpg\|left\|Johnny Appleseed Salesmen: Shelley Levene - Dave Moss - George Aaronow]]<br><br><br><br><br><br><br><br><br>

	From the bottom of the stairs, we hear a second passenger address the first.<br><br>		From the bottom of the stairs, we hear a second passenger address the first.<br><br>