Forgotten Freedom:Birthday - Revision history

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	~~Alkran: Well the party started normal enough. There was food and booze... you even got a few presents.~~

	~~The scene fades once again changing into the image of a bright sun.~~

	~~Alkran: Nice disolve.~~

	~~FXDemon: Thanks, sure beats working for most of the other entities with their flashy effects.~~


	~~----~~
	~~The camera pans down to the deck of the Forgotten Freedom where the party is in full swing. Jarlot is already stumbling around even more drunk than normal as Chalky approaches dragging a bundle.~~

	~~Chalky: Happy birthday Jarlot.~~

	~~Jarlot: Gee thanks Chalky... Is that for me?~~

	~~Chalky: Yeah, I got you a narrator for your birthday, but I couldn't resist chewing a little on the way here.~~

	~~Chalky produces the narrator who is cowering in fear and missing most of his left foot. Jarlot leans down and whispers into the narrators ear.~~

	~~Narrator: Are you serious I have some standards... I studied Shakespere.~~

	~~Jarlot: I can give you back to Chalky.~~

	~~Narrator: :twitch: ...fine.~~

	~~Narrator: Suddenly dozens of beautiful women rush out to see to Jarlots every need.~~

	~~Jarlot: :D It's just what I always wanted.~~


	~~----~~
	~~Back in the present~~

	~~Jarlot: Well that was awesome but what happened to my narrator?~~

	~~Alkran: That's a good question...~~


	~~----~~
	~~Jarlot stumbles out of Dooj's room wrapped in a bedsheet with a look of terror on his face. He sees the Narrator he got the night before sitting on the floor waiting for him.~~

	~~Jarlot: Can your narrations control me?~~

	~~Narrator: Well you belong to many entities so you have to want to be controled.~~

	~~Jarlot: That won't be a problem for the moment, here is what I need you to do.~~

	~~Jarlot whispers into Narrator's ear and then stands up and prepares himself to follow the suggestions of the psudo-entity.~~

	Narrator: After stumbling out of someone's room Jarlot begins to run a crazed look in his eye. He runs until he no longer can then falls to the ground in a corner weeping. When he comes back to his senses he can't seem to remember what he was running from or why he is only wearing a bedsheet. He quickly decides it isn't important and heads off to Erk's Place to catch up on the drinking he seems to be missing out on. He has completely forgotten everything that happened so far that morning... and the present Chalky game him last night.

	~~Narrator: Finally I am free!!~~

	~~Narrator: Narrator hobbles down the hall making his way to Mickey's office to get his foot healed so he can be on his way.~~


	~~----~~
	~~Back in the present~~

	~~Jarlot: That sneaky bastard.~~

	~~Alkran: Tricked by an NPC that has to hurt.~~

	~~Jarlot: I feel dirty inside. So what else happened at this party?~~

	~~Alkran: Well it went on like most parties do until people started to pass out.~~

	~~Jarlot: From the booze?~~

	~~Alkran: Kind of but it seemed to be far to early, you know almost no one on the ship has a low tolerance for alcohol but they were still passing out after only a few drinks.~~

	~~Jarlot: So what did we do?~~

	~~Alkran: Well most of the people that didn't feel to far above helping others were more than a little drunk so we called in some detectives...~~


	~~----~~
	~~The Hardly Boys two young whippersnappers with a knack for solving mysteries. The Hardly Boys in the mystery of the powerful booze.~~

	~~Alkran: They didn't really work out... said something about a raging clue grabbed a couple of bottles of booze and wandered off, so we found someone else.~~


	~~----~~
	~~Spoony Doony Doo,Where are you~~
	~~We got some work to do~~

	~~Spoony Doony Doo, Where are you~~
	~~We need some help from you now~~

	~~Come on,Spoony Doo,I see you~~
	~~pretending you got a sliver~~

	~~But you're not foolin' me, cause I can see~~
	~~the way you shake and shiver~~

	~~You know we got a mystery to solve and Spoony Doo,~~
	~~be ready for your act~~
	~~Don't hold back!~~

	~~And Spoony Doo if you come through you're gonna have~~
	~~yourself a~~
	~~Spoony Snack!~~

	~~Spoony Doony Doo, where are you~~
	~~You're ready and you're willing~~

	~~If we can count on you Spoony Doo~~
	~~I know you'll catch that villian~~

	Standing in a group near one of the walls is Tirmek, wearing a blue and white ascot, Sarah, dressed in purple, Elina, wearing a pair of glasses, Lilly, for some reason on all fours, and Gregory, with a rough goatee and a green shirt.

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		Alkran: Well the party started normal enough. There was food and booze... you even got a few presents.

		The scene fades once again changing into the image of a bright sun.

		Alkran: Nice disolve.

		FXDemon: Thanks, sure beats working for most of the other entities with their flashy effects.


		----
		The camera pans down to the deck of the Forgotten Freedom where the party is in full swing. Jarlot is already stumbling around even more drunk than normal as Chalky approaches dragging a bundle.

		Chalky: Happy birthday Jarlot.

		Jarlot: Gee thanks Chalky... Is that for me?

		Chalky: Yeah, I got you a narrator for your birthday, but I couldn't resist chewing a little on the way here.

		Chalky produces the narrator who is cowering in fear and missing most of his left foot. Jarlot leans down and whispers into the narrators ear.

		Narrator: Are you serious I have some standards... I studied Shakespere.

		Jarlot: I can give you back to Chalky.

		Narrator: :twitch: ...fine.

		Narrator: Suddenly dozens of beautiful women rush out to see to Jarlots every need.

		Jarlot: :D It's just what I always wanted.


		----
		Back in the present

		Jarlot: Well that was awesome but what happened to my narrator?

		Alkran: That's a good question...


		----
		Jarlot stumbles out of Dooj's room wrapped in a bedsheet with a look of terror on his face. He sees the Narrator he got the night before sitting on the floor waiting for him.

		Jarlot: Can your narrations control me?

		Narrator: Well you belong to many entities so you have to want to be controled.

		Jarlot: That won't be a problem for the moment, here is what I need you to do.

		Jarlot whispers into Narrator's ear and then stands up and prepares himself to follow the suggestions of the psudo-entity.

		Narrator: After stumbling out of someone's room Jarlot begins to run a crazed look in his eye. He runs until he no longer can then falls to the ground in a corner weeping. When he comes back to his senses he can't seem to remember what he was running from or why he is only wearing a bedsheet. He quickly decides it isn't important and heads off to Erk's Place to catch up on the drinking he seems to be missing out on. He has completely forgotten everything that happened so far that morning... and the present Chalky game him last night.

		Narrator: Finally I am free!!

		Narrator: Narrator hobbles down the hall making his way to Mickey's office to get his foot healed so he can be on his way.


		----
		Back in the present

		Jarlot: That sneaky bastard.

		Alkran: Tricked by an NPC that has to hurt.

		Jarlot: I feel dirty inside. So what else happened at this party?

		Alkran: Well it went on like most parties do until people started to pass out.

		Jarlot: From the booze?

		Alkran: Kind of but it seemed to be far to early, you know almost no one on the ship has a low tolerance for alcohol but they were still passing out after only a few drinks.

		Jarlot: So what did we do?

		Alkran: Well most of the people that didn't feel to far above helping others were more than a little drunk so we called in some detectives...


		----
		The Hardly Boys two young whippersnappers with a knack for solving mysteries. The Hardly Boys in the mystery of the powerful booze.

		Alkran: They didn't really work out... said something about a raging clue grabbed a couple of bottles of booze and wandered off, so we found someone else.


		----
		Spoony Doony Doo,Where are you
		We got some work to do

		Spoony Doony Doo, Where are you
		We need some help from you now

		Come on,Spoony Doo,I see you
		pretending you got a sliver

		But you're not foolin' me, cause I can see
		the way you shake and shiver

		You know we got a mystery to solve and Spoony Doo,
		be ready for your act
		Don't hold back!

		And Spoony Doo if you come through you're gonna have
		yourself a
		Spoony Snack!

		Spoony Doony Doo, where are you
		You're ready and you're willing

		If we can count on you Spoony Doo
		I know you'll catch that villian

		Standing in a group near one of the walls is Tirmek, wearing a blue and white ascot, Sarah, dressed in purple, Elina, wearing a pair of glasses, Lilly, for some reason on all fours, and Gregory, with a rough goatee and a green shirt.

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	Targets suppliers are wark giving Target the majority of the power in their relationship. Target demonstrates their power by enforcing quality stadards back onto suppliers for the goods that they place in the store. This includes some suppliers that are in exclusive contracts with Target so that their goods are sold in only Target stores. Should Target decide to pull the items from the shelves it would seriously damage the supplier in the short term, although they may be able to recover after finding a new merchant for their goods. Another type of supplier for Target is the employees who work in the stores. Due to the low level of skill that the many entry level employees must have they are in no position to bargin and must accept what Target is willing to pay them. Substitutions are not very likely for Target because they are in the service industry. Although there is minor substitutions through the internet that provide lower prices and trhough catalogs that may provide better quality or exclusive brands they are a minor part of the industry. Both substitutes are weak because of the fact that they are located further away. Even with next day shipping it takes longer to get the items a person wants and that is at a high cost to ship so fast. Also these alternatives do not allow for a tangible view of the good until after they are orderd and recieved by the customer. This means that the customer must hope the item is correct and that there are no problems or defects with it. This problem is further compounded by the fact that customer service is at a distance and must be conducted over the phone or the internet. This can lead to problems with getting a replacement or refund and even when one is recieved there is more time for shipping in both directions before the situation is fully resloved. The barriers to entry are extrememly high in the retail market due to the amount of work that must be done and money that must be spent before even opening the store to the first customers. From the building that is used to the goods that must stock the shelves to the training of employees and the negotiations with suppliers to ensure that merchandise continues to flow into the store to be sold. Then once the store is ready it must be advertised so that there are customers to purchase the goods and possibly promotions to initially draw them into the store. This is difficult for a single store and applified for the chain of stores that would be needed to to be price competative with Target while still generating profit. Targets customers are the most important of the five forces when it comes to the industries competativness. The customers are very strong in this relationship because of the market conditions. The high level of saturation in the market with so many stores that each carry many of the same products allow customers to choose based on price and service. These two factors are inversely related and a store that offers better more complete service to customers may be able to charge slightly higher prices without losing many of its customers. Although in poor economies the price is a primary factor, customers still expect a minimum level of service when they go shopping. The high power of consumers leads to a high level of competition despite the high barriers to entry and the weakness of the suppliers. The small number of large competitors means that they must each maintain an advantage in some aspect in order to retain their customers or possibly to grow. This force from the buyers drives low margins up the supply chain as each level must reduce costs to remain competative.

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		Targets suppliers are wark giving Target the majority of the power in their relationship. Target demonstrates their power by enforcing quality stadards back onto suppliers for the goods that they place in the store. This includes some suppliers that are in exclusive contracts with Target so that their goods are sold in only Target stores. Should Target decide to pull the items from the shelves it would seriously damage the supplier in the short term, although they may be able to recover after finding a new merchant for their goods. Another type of supplier for Target is the employees who work in the stores. Due to the low level of skill that the many entry level employees must have they are in no position to bargin and must accept what Target is willing to pay them. Substitutions are not very likely for Target because they are in the service industry. Although there is minor substitutions through the internet that provide lower prices and trhough catalogs that may provide better quality or exclusive brands they are a minor part of the industry. Both substitutes are weak because of the fact that they are located further away. Even with next day shipping it takes longer to get the items a person wants and that is at a high cost to ship so fast. Also these alternatives do not allow for a tangible view of the good until after they are orderd and recieved by the customer. This means that the customer must hope the item is correct and that there are no problems or defects with it. This problem is further compounded by the fact that customer service is at a distance and must be conducted over the phone or the internet. This can lead to problems with getting a replacement or refund and even when one is recieved there is more time for shipping in both directions before the situation is fully resloved. The barriers to entry are extrememly high in the retail market due to the amount of work that must be done and money that must be spent before even opening the store to the first customers. From the building that is used to the goods that must stock the shelves to the training of employees and the negotiations with suppliers to ensure that merchandise continues to flow into the store to be sold. Then once the store is ready it must be advertised so that there are customers to purchase the goods and possibly promotions to initially draw them into the store. This is difficult for a single store and applified for the chain of stores that would be needed to to be price competative with Target while still generating profit. Targets customers are the most important of the five forces when it comes to the industries competativness. The customers are very strong in this relationship because of the market conditions. The high level of saturation in the market with so many stores that each carry many of the same products allow customers to choose based on price and service. These two factors are inversely related and a store that offers better more complete service to customers may be able to charge slightly higher prices without losing many of its customers. Although in poor economies the price is a primary factor, customers still expect a minimum level of service when they go shopping. The high power of consumers leads to a high level of competition despite the high barriers to entry and the weakness of the suppliers. The small number of large competitors means that they must each maintain an advantage in some aspect in order to retain their customers or possibly to grow. This force from the buyers drives low margins up the supply chain as each level must reduce costs to remain competative.

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	~~In the future~~

	~~Earl: Reman helped me negotiate with Jarlot for a new contract.~~

	~~Cuddles: What did you have to give up to get a mast?~~

	~~Earl: I promised to never use the health insurance.~~

	~~Cuddles: But your an elemental.~~

	~~Earl: But it worked.~~

	~~----~~
	~~In the present~~

	~~Elin wanders into the smaller students library and sees Gregory standing along one of the sides.~~

	~~Elin: What are you doing?~~

	~~Gregory: ...~~

	~~Elin: Hey can you hear me?~~

	~~Gregory: ...~~

	~~Elin: Please answer me :bigeyes:~~

	~~Gregory: I was trying to study but now I have to start all over.~~

	~~He moves to the closest table and looks through a book that is sitting on it.~~

	~~Gregory: (reading to himself) Don't ignore the world, just don't react to it.~~

	~~He moves back against the wall and stands back at attention.~~

	~~Elin grabs a book and starts to read it when Kerrith walks in.~~

	~~Kerrith: Well hello there :love:~~

	~~Elin: Hi :blush:~~

	~~Gregory: ...~~

	~~Kerrith: What is wrong with him?~~

	~~Elin: He is studying to look important or something.~~

	~~Kerrith: Thats... interesting. What about you?~~

	~~Elin: Oh I'm working on a leisure studies degree.~~

	~~Kerrith: Do you have a mentor?~~

	~~Elin: No but everyone else seems to have one I just don't know anyone that fits my area.~~

	~~Nemisis walks into the library nods at the others and walks over to the large text spread out on a pedastal and begins to flip through the pages.~~

	~~Kerrith: What is that?~~

	~~Elin: Its the catalog, lists all the topics and where they can be found on the shelves.~~

	~~Kerrith: Like the Dewey Decimal systems?~~

	~~Elin: No, Volrath had a problem with Dewey d'Sivis and just put everything in alphabetical order in the catalog.~~

	~~Nemisis: (mumbling)~~

	~~http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=torture~~

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 He moves back against the wall and stands back at attention.
-Elin grabs a book and starts to read it when  walks in.
+Elin grabs a book and starts to read it when Kerrith walks in.
-:  Hello
+Kerrith:  Well hello there :love:
-Elin: Hi
+Elin: Hi :blush:
 Gregory: ...
-:  What is wrong with him?
+Kerrith:  What is wrong with him?
-Elin: He is studying to
+Nemisis: (mumbling)
 http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=torture

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		Elin wanders into the smaller students library and sees Gregory standing along one of the sides.

		Elin: What are you doing?

		Gregory: ...

		Elin: Hey can you hear me?

		Gregory: ...

		Elin: Please answer me :bigeyes:

		Gregory: I was trying to study but now I have to start all over.

		He moves to the closest table and looks through a book that is sitting on it.

		Gregory: (reading to himself) Don't ignore the world, just don't react to it.

		He moves back against the wall and stands back at attention.

		Elin grabs a book and starts to read it when walks in.

		: Hello

		Elin: Hi

		Gregory: ...

		: What is wrong with him?

		Elin: He is studying to

		http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=torture