Gabriel Cardova - Revision history

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	'''Character Name''':		'''Character Name''':
	Gabriel Cordova		Gabriel Cordova

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Goals and Motivations

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	==Goals and Motivations==		==Goals and Motivations==
			His motivation is what it has been for the last fifteen years -- improve society by raising today's youths to be strong and capable. To this overarching dream, he has amended many related goals such as defending the weak from corruption and galvanizing the city to stand up against the dark side of humanity.

			Since his Exaltation, Gabe has waged a shadow war against the creatures of the night -- bringing the might of the forgotten sun god directly to their hidden dens and cleansing them from the world. Though he is little concerned about other Exalted, his natural curiosity has moved him to seek out others that might help him understand his newfound place in the world.

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Personality

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	==Personality==		==Personality==
	~~Give~~ at ~~least one short paragraph~~		Honesty can be brutal, but Gabe's warm smile and genuine love for his fellow human being truly softens the blow.

			Gabe is always positive, either because he knows things are good or because he is determined to make them better. He encourages others to do the same, uplifting them and showing them that they themselves have the awesome power to change the world. He truly believes that there is a hero in everyone and when he speaks to you, he strives to draw that hero out. Gabe has always said that he actually is kind of a boring guy -- it's the people around him that make him seem interesting. Those that know him claim that his presence is empowering and to learn from him is to improve your understanding of the world and yourself.

			When confronted with the evil that threatens his innocent charges, Gabriel becomes brutal and somewhat terrifying by comparison to his usual self. He will stop at nothing to eliminate corruption and his expression is unmistakable when he nears his breaking point.

	==Merits and Flaws==		==Merits and Flaws==

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History

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	As before, what Gabe found was shocking and often profoundly disturbing. Poverty and violence once again reared their ugly heads, joined now by up-close and personal greetings by crime, drugs, and sex abuse. All these things and worse threatened the growth of his students on a level he hadn't ever considered likely. The world was certainly much darker than he'd expected, and it seemed Las Vegas was a unique monster in and of itself.		As before, what Gabe found was shocking and often profoundly disturbing. Poverty and violence once again reared their ugly heads, joined now by up-close and personal greetings by crime, drugs, and sex abuse. All these things and worse threatened the growth of his students on a level he hadn't ever considered likely. The world was certainly much darker than he'd expected, and it seemed Las Vegas was a unique monster in and of itself.

	But once again, Gabe refused to back down. He ~~has~~ increased his range of efforts; working with law enforcement, aiding social workers, keeping regular contact with parents and going out of his way to find financial aid for those students whose families were in need. Slowly, the improvements came but they were still rather minuscule in the grand scheme of things. So, he worked even harder -- teaching more classes to increase the number of students he interacted with in a given week, holding private counseling sessions with students he noticed were troubled, investigating rumors of problems in the home and tapping his various connections for information and aid when he could not fix something himself.		But once again, Gabe refused to back down. He increased his range of efforts; working with law enforcement, aiding social workers, keeping regular contact with parents and going out of his way to find financial aid for those students whose families were in need. Slowly, the improvements came but they were still rather minuscule in the grand scheme of things. So, he worked even harder -- teaching more classes to increase the number of students he interacted with in a given week, holding private counseling sessions with students he noticed were troubled, investigating rumors of problems in the home and tapping his various connections for information and aid when he could not fix something himself.

	In the fifteen years that Gabe has been a teacher, he has become a local celebrity among parents for his unparalleled dedication to his students' well being. Good people know that their children are in good hands with Mr. Cordova -- bad people find out this same thing in a different way. Over the last five years, Gabe has also proven to be a huge thorn in the side of many corrupt individuals within the education system. He has relentlessly hounded administration officials in his efforts to stamp out the underhanded dealings which directly affect schools and their students. Were it not for his popularity with local parents and his surprising influence with some city officials, it is likely he would have been laid off years ago.		In the fifteen years that Gabe has been a teacher, he has become a local celebrity among parents for his unparalleled dedication to his students' well being. Good people know that their children are in good hands with Mr. Cordova -- bad people find out this same thing in a different way. Over the last five years, Gabe has also proven to be a huge thorn in the side of many corrupt individuals within the education system. He has relentlessly hounded administration officials in his efforts to stamp out the underhanded dealings which directly affect schools and their students. Were it not for his popularity with local parents and his surprising influence with some city officials, it is likely he would have been laid off years ago.

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 ==History==
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+Gabriel is the second generation of his family born in the United States.  His grandparents emigrated from El Salvador in the hopes that their children might have an opportunity for a better life.  Gabe's father worked in construction while his mother took countless domestic jobs on top of being a housewife.  His family was relatively small and though they were very strict, there was no lack of love in his household.  Sadly, Gabe's parents passed away by the time he entered college and he has been on his own ever since.
 ==Personality==

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	==Equipment==		==Equipment==
	~~List your stuff here~~, ~~including combat stats if you have~~ weapons		Gabe carries very little with him at any given point in time. Apart from his cell phone, lesson plans and graded test papers, he rarely carries anything at all. He does not own any sort of weapons, though he is becoming rather adept at turning random objects into improvised weapons when he needs them.

	==History==		==History==

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	===Limit Break===		===Limit Break===
	~~Describe your flaw and record here your limit~~		'''Red Rage of Compassion'''

			When Gabe can no longer stand to see innocents suffer, he flies into a rage and violently assaults what he perceives to be the cause of their pain. This fury is unreasonable and is likely to greatly injure even allies if they attempt to stop him from meting out justice.

	==Equipment==		==Equipment==

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	==Anima==		==Anima==
	As a Twilight Caste Gabriel may use his anima to buffer himself against physical trauma, subtracting his Essence score from the health levels of damage dealt to him. When he blazes ~~with the~~ full glory ~~of the sunset~~, his iconic banner appears as a large feathered serpent that shimmers with the colors of twilight.		As a Twilight Caste Gabriel may use his anima to buffer himself against physical trauma, subtracting his Essence score from the health levels of damage dealt to him. When his anima blazes in its full glory, his iconic banner appears as a large feathered serpent that shimmers with the colors of twilight.

	==Attributes==		==Attributes==

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	===Academics===		===Academics===
	'''First Academics Excellency''' ~~May add up to (''Attribute'' + Academics)~~ dice to Academics rolls. Pg. #		'''First Academics Excellency''' Adds dice to Academics rolls. Pg. 183

	'''Third Academics Excellency''' May re-roll an Academics check and decide which result to keep. Pg. #		'''Third Academics Excellency''' May re-roll an Academics check and decide which result to keep. Pg. 185

	'''Harmonious Academic Methodology''' May instruct a group of people for at least five hours over the course of a week, at the end of which all individuals in the group will raise whichever relevant trait was tutored by a single dot. Gabe may increase his trait with the group as well. Pg. #		'''Harmonious Academic Methodology''' May instruct a group of people for at least five hours over the course of a week, at the end of which all individuals in the group will raise whichever relevant trait was tutored by a single dot. Gabe may increase his trait with the group as well. Pg. 215

	===Craft===		===Craft===
	'''First Craft Excellency''' ~~May add up to (''Attribute'' + Craft)~~ dice to Craft rolls. Pg. #		'''First Craft Excellency''' Adds dice to Craft rolls. Pg. 183

	'''Craftsman Needs No Tools''' ~~No penalties~~ for ~~working without proper~~ tools ~~or workshop~~. Also ~~accomplish (Essence x 3) hours~~ of work in ~~a single~~ hour. Pg. #		'''Craftsman Needs No Tools''' Removes the need for tools. Also dramatically improves the amount of work accomplished in an hour. Pg. 213

	===Investigation===		===Investigation===
	'''First Investigation Excellency''' ~~May add up to (''Attribute'' + Investigation)~~ dice to Investigation rolls. Pg. #		'''First Investigation Excellency''' Adds dice to Investigation rolls. Pg. 183

	'''Judge's Ear Technique''' Can automatically tell if someone has told a lie. Pg. #		'''Judge's Ear Technique''' Can automatically tell if someone has told a lie or even a half-truth. Pg. 213

	===Martial Arts===		===Martial Arts===
	'''Fists of Iron Technique''' Can inflict lethal damage and parry lethal attacks barehanded. Barehanded attacks are also more powerful. Pg. #		'''Fists of Iron Technique''' Can inflict lethal damage and parry lethal attacks barehanded. Barehanded attacks are also more powerful. Pg. 242

	===Performance===		===Performance===
	'''Respect Commanding Attitude''' All who can hear Gabe speak are compelled to listen to him speak. Pg. #		'''Respect Commanding Attitude''' All who can hear Gabe speak are compelled to listen to him speak. Pg. 202

	===Resistance===		===Resistance===
	'''Ox-Body Technique''' Adds one extra -1 and two extra -2 health levels. Pg. #		'''Ox-Body Technique''' Adds one extra -1 and two extra -2 health levels. Pg. 208

	==Intimacies==		==Intimacies==

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	==Anima==		==Anima==
	~~Describe here in full your~~ Caste anima ~~power~~. ~~Also tell us your totemic form~~.		As a Twilight Caste Gabriel may use his anima to buffer himself against physical trauma, subtracting his Essence score from the health levels of damage dealt to him. When he blazes with the full glory of the sunset, his iconic banner appears as a large feathered serpent that shimmers with the colors of twilight.

	==Attributes==		==Attributes==