Liang Yi - Revision history

210.21.12.94 at 04:35, 27 September 2007

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	''How Cruel the Dark Blade<br/>		''How Cruel the Dark Blade<br/>
	''To Score the Spine Through the Throat<br/>		''To Score the Spine Through the Throat<br/>
	''Liang Cuts Deeper<br/>		''Liang Cuts Deeper<br/>

	''-Nevada-~~Tan’s~~ Happy Boxcutters and Other Postmodern Haiku, Yui Yamato		''-Nevada-Tanâs Happy Boxcutters and Other Postmodern Haiku, Yui Yamato
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	''As she lifted her wrist to my lips, blood dripping, I heard screaming. It was with more than simple fear that I realized it was me.		''As she lifted her wrist to my lips, blood dripping, I heard screaming. It was with more than simple fear that I realized it was me.

	''-- from ~~“I Don’t~~ Like ~~Mondays”~~, by Gervaise Goeth''		''-- from âI Donât Like Mondaysâ, by Gervaise Goeth''


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	* I wrote up the complete design before I found flowers that actually formed what I had described. I do have a pen&ink stylistic design in my head, but as far as a realistic depiction, it turned out perfect.		* I wrote up the complete design before I found flowers that actually formed what I had described. I do have a pen&ink stylistic design in my head, but as far as a realistic depiction, it turned out perfect.
	* In case it's not blatantly obvious. "Nevada-~~Tan’s~~ Happy Boxcutters and Other Postmodern Haiku" by Yui Yamato and ~~“I Don’t~~ Like ~~Mondays”~~ by Gervaise Goeth are complete fabrications, in spite of having correct bibliographical annotations on Liang's character sheer.		* In case it's not blatantly obvious. "Nevada-Tanâs Happy Boxcutters and Other Postmodern Haiku" by Yui Yamato and âI Donât Like Mondaysâ by Gervaise Goeth are complete fabrications, in spite of having correct bibliographical annotations on Liang's character sheer.
	** Both titles refer to schoolgirl murderers. Natsumi Tsuji, [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nevada-tan "Nevada-tan"], and [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Brenda_Ann_Spencer Brenda Ann Spencer], [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=POl4vFp-5os "I Don't like Mondays"]		** Both titles refer to schoolgirl murderers. Natsumi Tsuji, [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nevada-tan "Nevada-tan"], and [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Brenda_Ann_Spencer Brenda Ann Spencer], [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=POl4vFp-5os "I Don't like Mondays"]
	*** Both girls have gone on to become pop culture memes.		*** Both girls have gone on to become pop culture memes.

17.103.172.163 at 23:45, 22 August 2007

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	'''Links'''		'''Links'''
	* Full Character Sheet: [http://homepage.mac.com/gothfae/nobilis/mika.html Liang Yi, Marchessa of Gender]		* Full Character Sheet: [http://homepage.mac.com/gothfae/nobilis/mika.html Liang Yi, Marchessa of Gender]
	* [[~~LIang~~ Yi#Politics\|Political Rundown]]		* [[Liang Yi#Politics\|Political Rundown]]
	* [[Liang Yi#Trivia\|Trivia]]		* [[Liang Yi#Trivia\|Trivia]]
	* [[Liang Yi#Thoughts\|Thought Processes]]		* [[Liang Yi#Thoughts\|Thought Processes]]

Gothfae at 20:53, 20 August 2007

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	[[liang yi#top\|Top of Page]]		[[liang yi#top\|Top of Page]]<br/>
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			--[[User:Gothfae\|Gothfae]] 13:53, 20 August 2007 (PDT)

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	<span id="Questions">'''Unanswered Questions'''</span>		<span id="Questions">'''Unanswered Questions'''</span>
	* ~~I'm looking for a virtue for Liang~~, ~~but so far all that I've thought of are really already covered by her domain anyway. Such as~~ the ~~strength and wisdom of the sacred androgyne which comes from her Estate. Here are some~~ I~~'m looking at;~~		* None as yet, the only one I had has been answered.
	** Dispassionate - As mentioned in her fiction, Liang had ~~to work hard to hate a vile predator. She simply doesn't feel very much.~~
	** Cruel - As i've written her, she's been ~~pretty nasty so far.~~
	** Vengeful - She doesn't seem the type to let things go, but that may have changed after her trial. I've avoided deciding how the Locust Court punished her, but if Entrpy did something like take away her heart or something, it would take away her ability to have this, and better explain dispassionate, it would also explain why she clings so tightly to Mika-chan, that last vital bit of humanity until her sentence is up.. if ever.
	** Asexual - Being a 'complete' being, Liang might simply see seduction and sex as another tool in her arsenal, and be immune to the very power her once angelic glory exudes.
	** Jaded - Been there done that, it's one thing for a human, utterly impressive for a Noble to be unimpressed by just about anything. But she came from a crap life, was Commenced in one of the most grotesque ways you can, became a complete monster, and was duly punished by the Locust Court already. It might not be unheard of.
	* Input is welcome.


	[[liang yi#top\|Top of Page]]		[[liang yi#top\|Top of Page]]
	--~~[[User:Gothfae\|Gothfae]] 18:07, 19 August 2007 (PDT)~~		--~~

Gothfae at 20:52, 20 August 2007

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	'''Links'''		'''Links'''
	* Full Character Sheet: [http://homepage.mac.com/gothfae/nobilis/mika.html Liang Yi, Marchessa of Gender]		* Full Character Sheet: [http://homepage.mac.com/gothfae/nobilis/mika.html Liang Yi, Marchessa of Gender]
			* [[LIang Yi#Politics\|Political Rundown]]
	* [[Liang Yi#Trivia\|Trivia]]		* [[Liang Yi#Trivia\|Trivia]]
	* [[Liang Yi#Thoughts\|Thought Processes]]		* [[Liang Yi#Thoughts\|Thought Processes]]
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			<span id="Politics">'''Political Rundown'''</span>

			Liang's thoughts on...

			* Metamorphosis: I liked my last Brother/Sister better. But I don't know Andrea very well, I'm willing to give her the benefit of the doubt anyway.
			* Chaos - What can you say about Chaos anyway that you can't say about any Step-brother with a bug in their ass for destruction.
			* Vanity - Haven't seen them since the big merging of powers, maybe their dead. Or off in love with some mirror somewhere.
			* Tropes - What a fancy word for Cliches. Always undoing the little changes I introduce into my people, purely subconsciously. It annoys the ever-loving fuck out of me to be honest. That Tempest needs to keep his little mindstorm under better control.
			* Aster/Aphrodite - Just when I'm ready to toss a gender test back out, poof, she wants to borrow them an examine them. I have to be careful with my experiments, sometimes the Wild likes to introduce ideas that I don't particularly like, that I'm the source of. Don't get me wrong, I love her dearly, as much as this porcelain heart can love anyone, but she is a fickle bitch.

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	''I scowled, wishing I could spit into her perfect porcelain face, but found only dust between my lips.		''I scowled, wishing I could spit into her perfect porcelain face, but found only dust between my lips.

	''"But your latest confession, it has stirred my china doll heart William-kun. I was almost out of torturers as well. The people of Aster, they do not like me very much, and I am afraid they were not doing their best by you. For that I apologize. If they loved me more, perhaps they would be have been more thorough months ago, and scoured this particular ~~story~~ from your wicked brain without so much scourging of your body."		''"But your latest confession, it has stirred my china doll heart William-kun. I was almost out of torturers as well. The people of Aster, they do not like me very much, and I am afraid they were not doing their best by you. For that I apologize. If they loved me more, perhaps they would have been more thorough months ago, and scoured this particular confession from your wicked brain without so much scourging and flaying of your body."

	''A silvery straight razor fell open, shining in her small hand as she gazed up at my neck.		''A silvery straight razor fell open, shining in her small hand as she gazed up at my neck.
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	[[liang yi#top\|Top of Page]]		[[liang yi#top\|Top of Page]]
			--[[User:Gothfae\|Gothfae]] 18:07, 19 August 2007 (PDT)
	--[[User:Gothfae\|Gothfae]] 09:11, 19 August 2007 (PDT)

Gothfae at 16:35, 19 August 2007

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	<span id="~~questions~~">'''Unanswered Questions'''</span>		<span id="Questions">'''Unanswered Questions'''</span>
	* I'm looking for a virtue for Liang, but so far all that I've thought of are really already covered by her domain anyway. Such as the strength and wisdom of the sacred androgyne which comes from her Estate. Here are some I'm looking at;		* I'm looking for a virtue for Liang, but so far all that I've thought of are really already covered by her domain anyway. Such as the strength and wisdom of the sacred androgyne which comes from her Estate. Here are some I'm looking at;
	** Dispassionate - As mentioned in her fiction, Liang had to work hard to hate a vile predator. She simply doesn't feel very much.		** Dispassionate - As mentioned in her fiction, Liang had to work hard to hate a vile predator. She simply doesn't feel very much.

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	** Dispassionate - As mentioned in her fiction, Liang had to work hard to hate a vile predator. She simply doesn't feel very much.		** Dispassionate - As mentioned in her fiction, Liang had to work hard to hate a vile predator. She simply doesn't feel very much.
	** Cruel - As i've written her, she's been pretty nasty so far.		** Cruel - As i've written her, she's been pretty nasty so far.
	** Vengeful - She doesn't seem the type to let things go, but that may have changed after her trial. I've avoided deciding how the Locust Court punished her, but if Entrpy did something like take away her heart or something, it would take away her ability to have this, and better explain dispassionate, it would also explain why she clings so tightly to Mika-chan, that last vital bit of humanity until her ~~sentance~~ is up.. if ever.		** Vengeful - She doesn't seem the type to let things go, but that may have changed after her trial. I've avoided deciding how the Locust Court punished her, but if Entrpy did something like take away her heart or something, it would take away her ability to have this, and better explain dispassionate, it would also explain why she clings so tightly to Mika-chan, that last vital bit of humanity until her sentence is up.. if ever.
	** Asexual - Being a 'complete' being, Liang might simply see seduction and sex as another tool in her arsenal, and be immune to the very power her once angelic glory exudes.		** Asexual - Being a 'complete' being, Liang might simply see seduction and sex as another tool in her arsenal, and be immune to the very power her once angelic glory exudes.
	** Jaded - Been there done that, it's one thing for a human, utterly impressive for a Noble to be unimpressed by just about anything. But she came from a crap life, was Commenced in one of the most grotesque ways you can, became a complete monster, and was duly punished by the Locust Court already. It might not be unheard of.		** Jaded - Been there done that, it's one thing for a human, utterly impressive for a Noble to be unimpressed by just about anything. But she came from a crap life, was Commenced in one of the most grotesque ways you can, became a complete monster, and was duly punished by the Locust Court already. It might not be unheard of.

Gothfae at 16:35, 19 August 2007

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	* [[Liang Yi#Trivia\|Trivia]]		* [[Liang Yi#Trivia\|Trivia]]
	* [[Liang Yi#Thoughts\|Thought Processes]]		* [[Liang Yi#Thoughts\|Thought Processes]]
			* [[Liang Yi#Questions\|Unanswered Questions]]


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	** But if there are a thousand choices, then temptation becomes easier, and suffering becomes richer. To fully understand, [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hedwig_and_the_Angry_Inch Hedwig and the Angry Inch] would be a good primer.		** But if there are a thousand choices, then temptation becomes easier, and suffering becomes richer. To fully understand, [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hedwig_and_the_Angry_Inch Hedwig and the Angry Inch] would be a good primer.
	*** Hedwig refers to [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aristophanes Aristophanes'] speech in [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Plato%27s_Symposium Plato's Symposium]. This myth, retold by Hedwig in the song [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ll3KO-wtVSY "The Origin of Love"], explains that human beings were once round, two-headed, four-armed, and four-legged beings. Angry gods split these early humans in two, leaving the separated people to forever long for their other half. Hedwig believes that Tommy is her soulmate and that she cannot be whole without him. She feels driven to either reunite with him or destroy him.		*** Hedwig refers to [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aristophanes Aristophanes'] speech in [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Plato%27s_Symposium Plato's Symposium]. This myth, retold by Hedwig in the song [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ll3KO-wtVSY "The Origin of Love"], explains that human beings were once round, two-headed, four-armed, and four-legged beings. Angry gods split these early humans in two, leaving the separated people to forever long for their other half. Hedwig believes that Tommy is her soulmate and that she cannot be whole without him. She feels driven to either reunite with him or destroy him.
	** And ~~such it is, that~~ Liang keeps splitting Mankind into smaller and smaller pieces. ~~Tell me~~ that's not ~~serving Hell~~.		** And Liang keeps splitting Mankind into smaller and smaller pieces, and thus serves Hell. Liang defines gender identities to separate mankind, not bring them closer together. So an individual might find solace in their gender identity, or they might find alienation, sooner or later though, someone will be alienated by their choice even if they themselves find solace in it. Another Power of Gender might seek to strengthen the 'likeness' of the choices, and bring mankind closer, even as it celebrates it's diversity and serve Heaven, another might make each the choices so broad and encompassing that like attracts like, and even though some lines are blurred all mankind benefits and serve the light. Liang strengthens the differences and engenders, pun intended, pride, envy, insular communities, and stereotypes, while giving strength, no matter how false, to the individual, while weakening the whole to temptation. Corruption and Suffering, Suffering and Power, Power and Corruption.

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			<span id="questions">'''Unanswered Questions'''</span>
			* I'm looking for a virtue for Liang, but so far all that I've thought of are really already covered by her domain anyway. Such as the strength and wisdom of the sacred androgyne which comes from her Estate. Here are some I'm looking at;
			** Dispassionate - As mentioned in her fiction, Liang had to work hard to hate a vile predator. She simply doesn't feel very much.
			** Cruel - As i've written her, she's been pretty nasty so far.
			** Vengeful - She doesn't seem the type to let things go, but that may have changed after her trial. I've avoided deciding how the Locust Court punished her, but if Entrpy did something like take away her heart or something, it would take away her ability to have this, and better explain dispassionate, it would also explain why she clings so tightly to Mika-chan, that last vital bit of humanity until her sentance is up.. if ever.
			** Asexual - Being a 'complete' being, Liang might simply see seduction and sex as another tool in her arsenal, and be immune to the very power her once angelic glory exudes.
			** Jaded - Been there done that, it's one thing for a human, utterly impressive for a Noble to be unimpressed by just about anything. But she came from a crap life, was Commenced in one of the most grotesque ways you can, became a complete monster, and was duly punished by the Locust Court already. It might not be unheard of.
			* Input is welcome.


	[[liang yi#top\|Top of Page]]		[[liang yi#top\|Top of Page]]

	--[[User:Gothfae\|Gothfae]] 09:11, 19 August 2007 (PDT)		--[[User:Gothfae\|Gothfae]] 09:11, 19 August 2007 (PDT)

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	** And such it is, that Liang keeps splitting Mankind into smaller and smaller pieces. Tell me that's not serving Hell.		** And such it is, that Liang keeps splitting Mankind into smaller and smaller pieces. Tell me that's not serving Hell.

	[[liang yi#top\|Top of Page]]~~[br/]~~		[[liang yi#top\|Top of Page]]
	--[[User:Gothfae\|Gothfae]] 09:10, 19 August 2007 (PDT)
			--[[User:Gothfae\|Gothfae]] 09:11, 19 August 2007 (PDT)