SPARCs:Kibbitzing004 - Revision history

BlackSheep at 20:55, 21 December 2005

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	GUNSLINGER: Good boy.		GUNSLINGER: Good boy.

	Coat over his arm, he walks out. Joel closes the door ~~and~~ leans back on it, fists clenched helplessly.		Coat over his arm, he walks out. Joel closes and bolts the door, then leans back on it, fists clenched helplessly.

BlackSheep at 20:28, 21 December 2005

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	We seem to be in agreement that we shouldn't pre-play the episode, so other than the title thing (I like the title ... my suggestion was going to be "Your Mum and Dad," but the reference is probably a little too obscure and British) this is going to be the page for kibbitzing scene one when we find out what it is. -- [[User:James Holloway\|James Holloway]] 12:01, 16 December 2005 (PST)		We seem to be in agreement that we shouldn't pre-play the episode, so other than the title thing (I like the title ... my suggestion was going to be "Your Mum and Dad," but the reference is probably a little too obscure and British) this is going to be the page for kibbitzing scene one when we find out what it is. -- [[User:James Holloway\|James Holloway]] 12:01, 16 December 2005 (PST)


			Draft for tying up the current scene. [[User:BlackSheep\|BlackSheep]] 12:28, 21 December 2005 (PST)

			Quick cut to the principal setting down an empty coffee mug.

			PRINCIPAL: Anyway, it's been a pleasure talking to you, Mister Morris, and I hope to see you again soon.

			GUNSLINGER: Oh, you will.

			PRINCIPAL: Right now, though, we really must be going.

			GUNSLINGER: Let me get my coat and I'll walk you down. I need to pick up some groceries. Joel, I'm sure you have some studying to do...

			JOEL: Actually, sir, could I have a quick word before you go?

			GUNSLINGER: Of course.

			PRINCIPAL: We'll wait in the hall.

			Once the door shuts, Joel rounds on Gunslinger angrily.

			GUNSLINGER: Nice people.

			JOEL: Drop the act. I want to know what you're up to.

			GUNSLINGER: I'm sure you do. Unfortunately, one of the things you'll learn as you get older is that we don't always get what we want.

			JOEL: Listen, you-

			GUNSLINGER: No, [i]you[/i] listen to [i]me[/i].

			Suddenly the pleasant demeanour is gone. His voice is quiet but cold.

			GUNSLINGER: You ruined my life, you little brat. Give me a reason, and I can ruin yours. Do you want everyone to know who you are? Where you live? Who you hang out with?

			JOEL: ...no.

			GUNSLINGER: Then you don't get to make demands of me. Now get out of my way.

			Joel keeps his gaze steady for a long moment, then breaks and steps aside.

			GUNSLINGER: Good boy.

			Coat over his arm, he walks out. Joel closes the door and leans back on it, fists clenched helplessly.

James Holloway at 20:01, 16 December 2005

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	My thought for a title was Sins of the Father. But other suggestions would be welcome. [[User:BlackSheep\|BlackSheep]] 09:08, 16 December 2005 (PST)		My thought for a title was Sins of the Father. But other suggestions would be welcome. [[User:BlackSheep\|BlackSheep]] 09:08, 16 December 2005 (PST)

			We seem to be in agreement that we shouldn't pre-play the episode, so other than the title thing (I like the title ... my suggestion was going to be "Your Mum and Dad," but the reference is probably a little too obscure and British) this is going to be the page for kibbitzing scene one when we find out what it is. -- [[User:James Holloway\|James Holloway]] 12:01, 16 December 2005 (PST)

BlackSheep at 17:08, 16 December 2005

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	So this is Livewire's spotlight episode, in which he deals with his Issue of proving himself. BlackSheep has suggested a general plot outline, which I like, in the OOC thread, and I think the fallout from last episode's accusations should be part of the proving thing as well, although Joe plays a much smaller role here. I just thought I'd open this page for general thoughts and suggestions about the episode, including suggestions for a title. -- [[User:James Holloway\|James Holloway]] 07:58, 16 December 2005 (PST)		So this is Livewire's spotlight episode, in which he deals with his Issue of proving himself. BlackSheep has suggested a general plot outline, which I like, in the OOC thread, and I think the fallout from last episode's accusations should be part of the proving thing as well, although Joe plays a much smaller role here. I just thought I'd open this page for general thoughts and suggestions about the episode, including suggestions for a title. -- [[User:James Holloway\|James Holloway]] 07:58, 16 December 2005 (PST)

			My thought for a title was Sins of the Father. But other suggestions would be welcome. [[User:BlackSheep\|BlackSheep]] 09:08, 16 December 2005 (PST)

James Holloway at 15:58, 16 December 2005

2005-12-16T15:58:16Z

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'''Episode 1.2'''

So this is Livewire's spotlight episode, in which he deals with his Issue of proving himself. BlackSheep has suggested a general plot outline, which I like, in the OOC thread, and I think the fallout from last episode's accusations should be part of the proving thing as well, although Joe plays a much smaller role here. I just thought I'd open this page for general thoughts and suggestions about the episode, including suggestions for a title. -- [[User:James Holloway|James Holloway]] 07:58, 16 December 2005 (PST)