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2012-11-30T11:15:08Z

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	Exaviar's World has two moons: Drustilla and Silva.		Exaviar's World has two moons: Drustilla and Silva.

	~~Hi there~~, ~~just became aware~~ of ~~your webolg via Google,~~ and ~~located that it's really informative. Ie2??m gonna watch out for brussels~~. ~~I will appreciate for those who proceed this~~ in ~~future. Lots~~ of ~~people might be benefited out~~ of ~~your writing~~. ~~Adios for now!~~		====Drustilla====
			The larger of Exaviar's World's two moons, it is a polluted ruin of a Hive that has all but been depopulated by centuries of famine and disaster. Only strange degenerate mutants still live in the parts of the underhive that can still support some semblance of human life.

	====Silva====		====Silva====
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	Of all the pirates, the world are the crew of the Good Omen. Originally a ship in the Viaticus fleet, when Agamemnon XXXIII disappeared the ship and her crew turned pirate. The Good Omen is a very fine craft, and more than a match for anything the subsector can muster. Exaviar's World is pushed to it's limit building it's tithe ships, it doesn't have the capacity to build more transports or warships to deal with the pirates.		Of all the pirates, the world are the crew of the Good Omen. Originally a ship in the Viaticus fleet, when Agamemnon XXXIII disappeared the ship and her crew turned pirate. The Good Omen is a very fine craft, and more than a match for anything the subsector can muster. Exaviar's World is pushed to it's limit building it's tithe ships, it doesn't have the capacity to build more transports or warships to deal with the pirates.

	~~Caillng all cars~~, ~~calling all cars~~, we're ~~ready~~ to ~~make~~ a ~~deal~~.		===Formica===
			Formica is an Imperial World that declared independence from the Imperpium of Man almost 50 years ago. It didn't bother to inform the Imperium, and as their tithe is only due every 100 years the Imperium hasn't found out yet. Being from a remote and near-forgotten subsector, the people of Formica don't fully understand what they're doing by 'revolting'.

			Formica's primary complaints are the inability of the Imperium to properly police shipping routes for piracy, what they see as excessive tithes, and a desire for freedom of religion.

	===Kelevor===		===Kelevor===
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	'''Allegra Paitosia''' Coming from an artistic background like Aeysha, they usually get along fairly well, save for when she is screetching out a message in some foreign Hive Dialect. Sees herself as an artist of the Warp and sings her messages to the stars, much to many of the other choir member's horror. While Davis is the best astropath, Allegra definately has the most range out of the choir able to hit worlds many light years distant from her senior's targets. Unfortunatley often those far flung worlds mostly get a melody or the vaguest of messages drowned out by her own emotions.		'''Allegra Paitosia''' Coming from an artistic background like Aeysha, they usually get along fairly well, save for when she is screetching out a message in some foreign Hive Dialect. Sees herself as an artist of the Warp and sings her messages to the stars, much to many of the other choir member's horror. While Davis is the best astropath, Allegra definately has the most range out of the choir able to hit worlds many light years distant from her senior's targets. Unfortunatley often those far flung worlds mostly get a melody or the vaguest of messages drowned out by her own emotions.

	1. ~~Want to make tabs for your page~~, ~~even though stitac FBML is no more? Take~~ a ~~read of Steve Chipman~~'s ~~article~~ in ~~Media Funnel: The New Options for Creating Custom Facebook Page Tabs~~.		=== Navigators ===
			'''Lom''' He might seem like a dull and dumb boy, this appearance is deceptive. He's rather smart and inventive, but only in two areas: 1) avoiding studying, work, and the similar chores; 2) getting out of the mess he created thanks to his lack of skills. He isn't, of course, always successful in that.

			'''Fuchs''' Well, she's a girl who studies hard, and have a good, cheerful personality. On the other hand, she's curious to a fail and talks too much and too fast. This caused her a lot of troubles in the past and Emperor alone knows how much are still waiting to happen.

	=== Warrant Officers ===		=== Warrant Officers ===

207.104.28.181: /* Drustilla */

2012-11-30T08:21:41Z

Drustilla

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	Exaviar's World has two moons: Drustilla and Silva.		Exaviar's World has two moons: Drustilla and Silva.

	~~====Drustilla====~~		Hi there, just became aware of your webolg via Google, and located that it's really informative. Ie2??m gonna watch out for brussels. I will appreciate for those who proceed this in future. Lots of people might be benefited out of your writing. Adios for now!
	~~The larger~~ of ~~Exaviar~~'s ~~World's two moons, it is a polluted ruin of a Hive that has all but been depopulated by centuries of famine and disaster~~. ~~Only strange degenerate mutants still live~~ in ~~the parts~~ of ~~the underhive that can still support some semblance~~ of ~~human life~~.

	====Silva====		====Silva====

208.112.33.211: /* Formica */

2012-11-30T07:46:59Z

Formica

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	Of all the pirates, the world are the crew of the Good Omen. Originally a ship in the Viaticus fleet, when Agamemnon XXXIII disappeared the ship and her crew turned pirate. The Good Omen is a very fine craft, and more than a match for anything the subsector can muster. Exaviar's World is pushed to it's limit building it's tithe ships, it doesn't have the capacity to build more transports or warships to deal with the pirates.		Of all the pirates, the world are the crew of the Good Omen. Originally a ship in the Viaticus fleet, when Agamemnon XXXIII disappeared the ship and her crew turned pirate. The Good Omen is a very fine craft, and more than a match for anything the subsector can muster. Exaviar's World is pushed to it's limit building it's tithe ships, it doesn't have the capacity to build more transports or warships to deal with the pirates.

	~~===Formica===~~		Caillng all cars, calling all cars, we're ready to make a deal.
	~~Formica is an Imperial World that declared independence from the Imperpium of Man almost 50 years ago. It didn't bother to inform the Imperium~~, ~~and as their tithe is only due every 100 years the Imperium hasn't found out yet. Being from a remote and near-forgotten subsector~~, ~~the people of Formica don't fully understand what they~~'re ~~doing by 'revolting'.~~

	~~Formica's primary complaints are the inability of the Imperium~~ to ~~properly police shipping routes for piracy, what they see as excessive tithes, and~~ a ~~desire for freedom of religion~~.

	===Kelevor===		===Kelevor===

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2012-11-30T07:09:10Z

Navigators

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	'''Allegra Paitosia''' Coming from an artistic background like Aeysha, they usually get along fairly well, save for when she is screetching out a message in some foreign Hive Dialect. Sees herself as an artist of the Warp and sings her messages to the stars, much to many of the other choir member's horror. While Davis is the best astropath, Allegra definately has the most range out of the choir able to hit worlds many light years distant from her senior's targets. Unfortunatley often those far flung worlds mostly get a melody or the vaguest of messages drowned out by her own emotions.		'''Allegra Paitosia''' Coming from an artistic background like Aeysha, they usually get along fairly well, save for when she is screetching out a message in some foreign Hive Dialect. Sees herself as an artist of the Warp and sings her messages to the stars, much to many of the other choir member's horror. While Davis is the best astropath, Allegra definately has the most range out of the choir able to hit worlds many light years distant from her senior's targets. Unfortunatley often those far flung worlds mostly get a melody or the vaguest of messages drowned out by her own emotions.

	~~=== Navigators ===~~		1. Want to make tabs for your page, even though stitac FBML is no more? Take a read of Steve Chipman's article in Media Funnel: The New Options for Creating Custom Facebook Page Tabs.
	~~'''Lom''' He might seem like a dull and dumb boy, this appearance is deceptive~~. ~~He's rather smart and inventive, but only in two areas: 1) avoiding studying, work, and the similar chores; 2) getting out of the mess he created thanks~~ to ~~his lack of skills. He isn't~~, of ~~course, always successful in that.~~

	~~'''Fuchs''' Well, she's a girl who studies hard, and have a good, cheerful personality. On the other hand, she~~'s ~~curious to a fail and talks too much and too fast. This caused her a lot of troubles~~ in ~~the past and Emperor alone knows how much are still waiting to happen~~.

	=== Warrant Officers ===		=== Warrant Officers ===

GORT: Reverted edits by 83.206.154.101 (talk) to last revision by Knockwood

2012-11-28T23:16:51Z

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	'''Desiree Chastel, Omnissianic Congregator''' The perky tech-priestess who seems utterly unfazed by just about anything thrown at her. Takes responsibility for the team's wargear and like most tech-priests, ends up spending a lot of time talking to the machines she is assigned to look after. Is a close friend of Florence and is frequently found in the apothecarion doing maintenance on the equipment there.		'''Desiree Chastel, Omnissianic Congregator''' The perky tech-priestess who seems utterly unfazed by just about anything thrown at her. Takes responsibility for the team's wargear and like most tech-priests, ends up spending a lot of time talking to the machines she is assigned to look after. Is a close friend of Florence and is frequently found in the apothecarion doing maintenance on the equipment there.

	~~Hello~~,~~My name is Deb Colby~~ and ~~I would like~~ a ~~price list for your replica tarias~~ and ~~also your replica necklaces~~. ~~I have~~ a ~~question~~ on the ~~King George III Russian Fringe Tiara~~. ~~Are~~ the ~~Spikes individually numbered~~ and ~~drilled through~~ with ~~holes at their bottoms so they can be removed~~ and ~~be strung as a necklace~~, ~~like~~ a ~~real Russian kokoshnik tiara? I also love~~ the ~~Spencer tiara since I am a big fan~~ of the ~~late Princess Diana~~. ~~Deb Colby (M~~.A. ~~Russian Lit)~~		=== Ecclesiarchy ===
			'''Elias Viaticus, Confessor'''. Second cousin to Alexis and a pious member of the clergy. While young, his ability to bring the stories of saints and legends alive during his sermons inspires faith in even the most cynical guardsman. However, his lack of ambition or even understanding of worldly matters means that he will likely never reach a higher post than that of a House priest or (as in this case) a ship's confessor.

			'''Diona McOrdas, Chaplain'''. A plain-faced plain-spoken ex-guardswoman, Diona serves as a military chaplain aboard the vessel, ministering to the spiritual worries of the House's armed forces on-board. While she deals with many minor problems herself, she regularly reports any wide-spread or serious concerns to Elias, who, while younger than her, she acknowledges has a sincere and pure faith that somehow finds a way to resolve such concerns, often in his sermons every five days. Her views of the Ecclesiarchy as a whole are perhaps more secular and cynical than Elias would prefer, but he cannot deny her unwavering dedication to the Emperor and his Faith.

			'''Titus Androna, Deacon.''' Titus manages the day-to-day tasks at the ship's somewhat meagre (for an Imperial capital ship) chapel, and, similarly to Diona, hears the concerns of the faithful, from minor worries over points of faith to nightmares that shake the roots of their souls. An older man with a neatly-trimmed white beard, gentle blue and weathered face, he is a reassuring presence for many as he cleans the altar or ministers to the cares of the flock. He has few ambitions in life, being satisfied by the fulfillment of his duties, but he does seem to have a problem with speaking when a certain attractive captain's personal aide comes by...

			'''Malakai Nommo''' Thanks to him, Ramirez return under the Throne's Light with sound mind and soul. This man had a talent to calm down the afraid or enraged people, as well as inspire them to great deeds.

	=== Astropathic Choir ===		=== Astropathic Choir ===

83.206.154.101: /* Ecclesiarchy */

2012-11-28T15:42:11Z

Ecclesiarchy

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	'''Desiree Chastel, Omnissianic Congregator''' The perky tech-priestess who seems utterly unfazed by just about anything thrown at her. Takes responsibility for the team's wargear and like most tech-priests, ends up spending a lot of time talking to the machines she is assigned to look after. Is a close friend of Florence and is frequently found in the apothecarion doing maintenance on the equipment there.		'''Desiree Chastel, Omnissianic Congregator''' The perky tech-priestess who seems utterly unfazed by just about anything thrown at her. Takes responsibility for the team's wargear and like most tech-priests, ends up spending a lot of time talking to the machines she is assigned to look after. Is a close friend of Florence and is frequently found in the apothecarion doing maintenance on the equipment there.

	~~=== Ecclesiarchy ===~~		Hello,My name is Deb Colby and I would like a price list for your replica tarias and also your replica necklaces. I have a question on the King George III Russian Fringe Tiara. Are the Spikes individually numbered and drilled through with holes at their bottoms so they can be removed and be strung as a necklace, like a real Russian kokoshnik tiara? I also love the Spencer tiara since I am a big fan of the late Princess Diana. Deb Colby (M.A. Russian Lit)
	~~'''Elias Viaticus~~, ~~Confessor'''. Second cousin to Alexis~~ and a ~~pious member of the clergy. While young, his ability to bring the stories of saints~~ and ~~legends alive during his sermons inspires faith in even the most cynical guardsman~~. ~~However, his lack of ambition or even understanding of worldly matters means that he will likely never reach~~ a ~~higher post than that of a House priest or (as in this case) a ship's confessor.~~

	~~'''Diona McOrdas, Chaplain'''. A plain-faced plain-spoken ex-guardswoman, Diona serves as a military chaplain aboard~~ the vessel, ministering to the spiritual worries of the House's armed forces on-board. While she deals with many minor problems herself, she regularly reports any wide-spread or serious concerns to Elias, who, while younger than her, she acknowledges has a sincere and pure faith that somehow finds a way to resolve such concerns, often in his sermons every five days. ~~Her views of~~ the ~~Ecclesiarchy as a whole are perhaps more secular~~ and ~~cynical than Elias would prefer, but he cannot deny her unwavering dedication to the Emperor and his Faith.~~

	~~'''Titus Androna, Deacon.''' Titus manages the day-to-day tasks~~ at ~~the ship's somewhat meagre (for an Imperial capital ship) chapel,~~ and~~, similarly to Diona, hears the concerns of the faithful, from minor worries over points of faith to nightmares that shake the roots of their souls. An older man with~~ a ~~neatly-trimmed white beard, gentle blue and weathered face~~, ~~he is~~ a ~~reassuring presence for many as he cleans~~ the ~~altar or ministers to the cares~~ of the ~~flock~~. ~~He has few ambitions in life, being satisfied by the fulfillment of his duties, but he does seem to have a problem with speaking when a certain attractive captain's personal aide comes by~~...

	'''Malakai Nommo''' Thanks to him, Ramirez return under the Throne's Light with sound mind and soul. This man had a talent to calm down the afraid or enraged people, as well as inspire them to great deeds.

	=== Astropathic Choir ===		=== Astropathic Choir ===

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2012-11-28T10:08:43Z

rv 3 bad edits

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	Exaviar's World has two moons: Drustilla and Silva.		Exaviar's World has two moons: Drustilla and Silva.

	~~Hey there, I think your blog might be having brsweor compatibility issues. When I look at your blog in Firefox~~, it ~~looks fine~~ but ~~when opening~~ in ~~Internet Explorer, it has~~ some ~~overlapping~~. ~~I just wanted to give you a quick heads up! Other then that, great blog!~~		====Drustilla====
			The larger of Exaviar's World's two moons, it is a polluted ruin of a Hive that has all but been depopulated by centuries of famine and disaster. Only strange degenerate mutants still live in the parts of the underhive that can still support some semblance of human life.

	====Silva====		====Silva====
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	Formica's primary complaints are the inability of the Imperium to properly police shipping routes for piracy, what they see as excessive tithes, and a desire for freedom of religion.		Formica's primary complaints are the inability of the Imperium to properly police shipping routes for piracy, what they see as excessive tithes, and a desire for freedom of religion.

	~~Improve perforamnce on~~ the ~~triinang data ? Beware overfitting~~.~~Improve performance~~ on ~~the test data? Beware overfitting~~.~~How are you measuring performance anyway? Was this answer helpful?~~		===Kelevor===
			Kelevor is a planet with an extremely large quantity of adamantium, to which the Viaticus Dynasty still has hereditary mining rights to. The mining colony had already been built, and the most profitable period of the mining procedure was about to begin when the planet was overrun by a genestealer cult. Nobody knows what's going on down there anymore.

	===Rixis===		===Rixis===
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	'''Fuchs''' Well, she's a girl who studies hard, and have a good, cheerful personality. On the other hand, she's curious to a fail and talks too much and too fast. This caused her a lot of troubles in the past and Emperor alone knows how much are still waiting to happen.		'''Fuchs''' Well, she's a girl who studies hard, and have a good, cheerful personality. On the other hand, she's curious to a fail and talks too much and too fast. This caused her a lot of troubles in the past and Emperor alone knows how much are still waiting to happen.

	~~Right~~ on~~-this helped me sort tihgns right out~~.		=== Warrant Officers ===
			'''Corporal D'Amage, Master of Ordinance''' The Squad's resident demolitions expert. Prone to cackling and using far more explosive than is required, reasonable, safe or sane. Despite his own lack of faith in the Imperial Creed, has invariably converted his fellow squadmates to worship of the Emperor. At least, everyone suddenly finds some piety when they realise that they're in the same fireteam as him. Has only one eye, and it is rumored that the other one is a grenade for when he invariably decides to go out with a bang.

			'''Sergeant Serjessur, Chief Bosun''' A failed candidate to the Chaliced Commissariat who hasn't quite gotten the idea of shouting and lockstep marching out of his head. Is a big fan of Improving Literature and distributes it to everyone in the Squad whether they like it or not. Seems to have acknowledged Boris as his natural commander. Despite his fairly mediocre intelligence test results, has committed the Imperial Infantryman's Uplifting Primer to memory and is currently working on Chapter D of the Tactica Imperialis.

			'''Number Seven, Infernus Master''' A perpetually masked and suited person with a flamer. Can somehow be understood by the rest of the Squad despite the respirator mask's speech distorting properties. Seems very fond of fire, but wields an axe and shotgun with equal ease.

			'''Dr. Luscinia, Chief Chirurgeon''' The busty, attractive medicae of the Squad. Always found with a pleasant smile on her face, and is deeply concerned for her patients. She has a warm and caring personality, and is the second in command of the Squad when Boris isn't around. She also performs amputations in person with a Ministorum battlepriest's eviscerator, and as of their demobbing, has had more close combat kills than the entire rest of the Platoon combined.

	=== Personal Assistants and Guards ===		=== Personal Assistants and Guards ===

212.54.131.163: /* Kelevor */

2012-11-28T08:51:13Z

Kelevor

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	Formica's primary complaints are the inability of the Imperium to properly police shipping routes for piracy, what they see as excessive tithes, and a desire for freedom of religion.		Formica's primary complaints are the inability of the Imperium to properly police shipping routes for piracy, what they see as excessive tithes, and a desire for freedom of religion.

	~~===Kelevor===~~		Improve perforamnce on the triinang data ? Beware overfitting.Improve performance on the test data? Beware overfitting.How are you measuring performance anyway? Was this answer helpful?
	~~Kelevor is a planet with an extremely large quantity of adamantium, to which~~ the ~~Viaticus Dynasty still has hereditary mining rights to~~. ~~The mining colony had already been built, and the most profitable period of the mining procedure was about to begin when~~ the ~~planet was overrun by a genestealer cult. Nobody knows what's going on down there anymore~~.

	===Rixis===		===Rixis===

46.253.202.166: /* Warrant Officers */

2012-11-28T08:22:07Z

Warrant Officers

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	'''Fuchs''' Well, she's a girl who studies hard, and have a good, cheerful personality. On the other hand, she's curious to a fail and talks too much and too fast. This caused her a lot of troubles in the past and Emperor alone knows how much are still waiting to happen.		'''Fuchs''' Well, she's a girl who studies hard, and have a good, cheerful personality. On the other hand, she's curious to a fail and talks too much and too fast. This caused her a lot of troubles in the past and Emperor alone knows how much are still waiting to happen.

	~~=== Warrant Officers ===~~		Right on-this helped me sort tihgns right out.
	'''Corporal D'Amage, Master of Ordinance''' The Squad's resident demolitions expert. Prone to cackling and using far more explosive than is required, reasonable, safe or sane. Despite his own lack of faith in the Imperial Creed, has invariably converted his fellow squadmates to worship of the Emperor. At least, everyone suddenly finds some piety when they realise that they're in the same fireteam as him. Has only one eye, and it is rumored that the other one is a grenade for when he invariably decides to go out with a bang.

	~~'''Sergeant Serjessur, Chief Bosun''' A failed candidate to the Chaliced Commissariat who hasn't quite gotten the idea of shouting and lockstep marching~~ out of his head. Is a big fan of Improving Literature and distributes it to everyone in the Squad whether they like it or not. Seems to have acknowledged Boris as his natural commander. Despite his fairly mediocre intelligence test results, has committed the Imperial Infantryman's Uplifting Primer to memory and is currently working on Chapter D of the Tactica Imperialis.

	'''Number Seven, Infernus Master''' A perpetually masked and suited person with a flamer. Can somehow be understood by the rest of the Squad despite the respirator mask's speech distorting properties. Seems very fond of fire, but wields an axe and shotgun with equal ease.

	'''Dr. Luscinia, Chief Chirurgeon''' The busty, attractive medicae of the Squad. Always found with a pleasant smile on her face, and is deeply concerned for her patients. She has a warm and caring personality, and is the second in command of the Squad when Boris isn't around. She also performs amputations in person with a Ministorum battlepriest's eviscerator, and as of their demobbing, has had more close combat kills than the entire rest of the Platoon combined.

	=== Personal Assistants and Guards ===		=== Personal Assistants and Guards ===

113.41.56.224: /* Drustilla */

2012-11-28T07:41:36Z

Drustilla

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	Exaviar's World has two moons: Drustilla and Silva.		Exaviar's World has two moons: Drustilla and Silva.

	~~====Drustilla====~~		Hey there, I think your blog might be having brsweor compatibility issues. When I look at your blog in Firefox, it looks fine but when opening in Internet Explorer, it has some overlapping. I just wanted to give you a quick heads up! Other then that, great blog!
	~~The larger of Exaviar's World's two moons~~, it ~~is a polluted ruin of a Hive that has all~~ but ~~been depopulated by centuries of famine and disaster. Only strange degenerate mutants still live~~ in ~~the parts of the underhive that can still support~~ some ~~semblance of human life~~.

	====Silva====		====Silva====