Editing After The Storm: NonPlayerCharacters Introductions: Inquisitor
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Originally posted on the IC thread, page 7 post 62 | Originally posted on the IC thread, page 7 post 62 | ||
| − | Meanwhile | + | Meanwhile |
| − | Having finished the book she took along for the train journey a while ago, Carolyn Chase attempted to spend time looking out of the window. But it was already dark and there was not much to see, so after a while she turned away. Glancing at the apparently thirtysomething man with very short hair and a crucifix hanging from his neck sitting next to her, who had after a short greeting remained quiet for the entire journey, she noticed that he was still sitting quietly, eyes closed as if asleep, but his lips were moving. Carolyn looked for a moment and then asked:"Pardon the interruption, but is that Latin?" | + | Having finished the book she took along for the train journey a while ago, Carolyn Chase attempted to spend time looking out of the window. But it was already dark and there was not much to see, so after a while she turned away. Glancing at the apparently thirtysomething man with very short hair and a crucifix hanging from his neck sitting next to her, who had after a short greeting remained quiet for the entire journey, she noticed that he was still sitting quietly, eyes closed as if asleep, but his lips were moving. Carolyn looked for a moment and then asked: "Pardon the interruption, but is that Latin?" |
| − | The man opened his eyes."Sorry, I did not realize I was speaking out loud." | + | The man opened his eyes. "Sorry, I did not realize I was speaking out loud." |
| − | "You weren't. But my father is mute, so I can not only converse in sign language but read lips as well." | + | "You weren't. But my father is mute, so I can not only converse in sign language but read lips as well." |
| − | "Ah, I see," the man nodded."And you speak Latin as well?" | + | "Ah, I see," the man nodded. "And you speak Latin as well?" |
| − | "Not really, at least not yet. I am studying biology and know some scientific Latin. But that was some sort of prayer, wasn't it?" | + | "Not really, at least not yet. I am studying biology and know some scientific Latin. But that was some sort of prayer, wasn't it?" |
| − | "I have a degree in psychology myself. And another in history. And yes, it was a prayer. I repeat it when meditating. Translated, it would go: 'Give me the wisdom to tell good apart from evil, the strength to do what is right, and the insight to see through the lies of the Adversary.'" | + | "I have a degree in psychology myself. And another in history. And yes, it was a prayer. I repeat it when meditating. Translated, it would go: 'Give me the wisdom to tell good apart from evil, the strength to do what is right, and the insight to see through the lies of the Adversary.'" |
| − | "That is a nice prayer, is it Catholic?" | + | "That is a nice prayer, is it Catholic?" |
| − | "I am Catholic, it is true, but as far as I know, that prayer is specific to my order." Extending his hand in greeting, the man introduced himself."Brother Artur. Polish version of Arthur." | + | "I am Catholic, it is true, but as far as I know, that prayer is specific to my order." Extending his hand in greeting, the man introduced himself. "Brother Artur. Polish version of Arthur." |
| − | "Carolyn Chase," Carolyn said, grasping the man's hand in greeting. Noticing his strong grip, she glanced at his rather powerful looking arm and asked:"You're a monk? You seem rather buff for a monk. I thought that monks wore habits and remained in monasteries." | + | "Carolyn Chase," Carolyn said, grasping the man's hand in greeting. Noticing his strong grip, she glanced at his rather powerful looking arm and asked: "You're a monk? You seem rather buff for a monk. I thought that monks wore habits and remained in monasteries." |
| − | "A healthy mind in a healthy body," Brother Artur said with a smile."And I am an itinerant monk. Rather than living in a monastery wearing a habit, I travel around wearing normal clothes, going where I am needed. So I get plenty of exercise." | + | "A healthy mind in a healthy body," Brother Artur said with a smile. "And I am an itinerant monk. Rather than living in a monastery wearing a habit, I travel around wearing normal clothes, going where I am needed. So I get plenty of exercise." |
| − | "Oh. So what is a buff Polish itinerant monk with degrees in psychology and history going to New York for?" | + | "Oh. So what is a buff Polish itinerant monk with degrees in psychology and history going to New York for?" |
| − | "To do the Lord's work." | + | "To do the Lord's work." |
| − | "Some kind of charity work? Counseling?" | + | "Some kind of charity work? Counseling?" |
| − | "That is indeed what I can do, among other things." | + | "That is indeed what I can do, among other things." |
| − | "You said you belong to an order. Does it have a name?" | + | "You said you belong to an order. Does it have a name?" |
| − | "It does. The Order of the Questing." | + | "It does. The Order of the Questing." |
| − | "Questing?" Carolyn smiled."So you are like a Questing Knight. Only you are a monk, not a knight." | + | "Questing?" Carolyn smiled. "So you are like a Questing Knight. Only you are a monk, not a knight." |
| − | Brother Artur smiled back."Something like that." | + | Brother Artur smiled back. "Something like that." |
| − | Concentrating on the conversation, Carolyn did not pay much attention to the crucifix hanging from Brother Artur's neck. After all, at a casual glance it looked like just another crucifix. | + | Concentrating on the conversation, Carolyn did not pay much attention to the crucifix hanging from Brother Artur's neck. After all, at a casual glance it looked like just another crucifix. |
| − | But on closer inspection, it was not actually a cross. | + | But on closer inspection, it was not actually a cross. |
| − | It was a sword. | + | It was a sword. |
| − | Enter The Inquisitor | + | Enter The Inquisitor |
