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==Backstory==
 
==Backstory==
Salt is a young minotaur with a great wanderlust, a certain bitterness towards the gods, and a giant heart for the people in his life. His wandering is in no small part due to the pact he entered into with a strange creature from the deeps in the midst of a terrible storm.
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Salt is a young minotaur with a great wanderlust, a certain bitterness towards the gods, and a giant heart for the people in his life. His wandering is in no small part due to the pact he entered into with a strange creature from the deeps in the midst of a terrible storm. For three days the sea assaulted them. For three days the gods ignored their prayers while the devils mocked their skills.
  
For three days the sea assaulted them.
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In the deep night it came to him. Pale, bulbous, writhing with tentacles and bigger than their longboat, it seemed to be invisible to every soul on board but him.  
 
 
For three days the gods ignored their prayers while the devils mocked their skills.
 
 
 
In the deep night it came to him. Pale, bulbous, writhing with tentacles bigger than their longboat, and so many eyes - all those eyes - and not a soul on board could see it but him.
 
  
 
And in the echoing cavern of his stormsoaked mind, it offered him their lives. His own life was all it required in return.
 
And in the echoing cavern of his stormsoaked mind, it offered him their lives. His own life was all it required in return.

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