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== Description ==
 
== Description ==
  
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Jack Raven looks unusual and multi-ethnic to the eyes of Earth-people, but certainly not beyond the bounds of normal humanity.  He has pale skin and large and almond-shaped eyes, blue-black with a slight iridescence.  The hair on his head is dark, thick, and stiff, most similar to African hair that has been subject to extensive straightening.  He has no body hair, appearing under close examination as though he is thoroughly waxed.  His people usually plait their hair into fins, fans, and sprays, with their complexity in inverse proportion to the physical risks they are subject to.  Warriors generally arrange it into something much like a simple mohawk.   
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Jack Raven looks unusual and multi-ethnic to the eyes of Earth-people, but certainly not beyond the bounds of normal humanity.  He has pale skin and large and almond-shaped eyes, blue-black with a slight iridescence.  His hair is dark, thick, and stiff, most similar to African hair that has been subject to extensive straightening.  His people usually plait it into fins, fans, and sprays, with their complexity in inverse proportion to the physical risks they are subject to.  Warriors generally arrange it into something much like a simple mohawk.   
  
 
He's tall, slender, and willowy, with liquid movements and gestures that belie the fact that he could take a beating as well as any normal human.  His mouth and eyes would be incredibly expressive if he relaxed and let down his guard, but as of the current time he is under strict self-control.
 
He's tall, slender, and willowy, with liquid movements and gestures that belie the fact that he could take a beating as well as any normal human.  His mouth and eyes would be incredibly expressive if he relaxed and let down his guard, but as of the current time he is under strict self-control.

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