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Returning he casts a quick cleanliness spell over himself. He begins donning his white armor, its alabaster color shimmering in the flickering candle light and the slight breaking dawn sun.
 
Returning he casts a quick cleanliness spell over himself. He begins donning his white armor, its alabaster color shimmering in the flickering candle light and the slight breaking dawn sun.
  
A blond man with a close cropped beard framing his face enters. His forester green suit is caked with mud and blood.
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A blond man with a close cropped beard framing his face. His forester green suit is caked with mud and blood.
  
 
"Father, you're up I see. Easy patrol last night. Caught a collection of those red wolves and saw that big buck of yours. "
 
"Father, you're up I see. Easy patrol last night. Caught a collection of those red wolves and saw that big buck of yours. "
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Julian steps up and casts the cleanliness spell again. His son chuckles as his gear resumes in fresh state.
 
Julian steps up and casts the cleanliness spell again. His son chuckles as his gear resumes in fresh state.
  
"Ok, I forgot."
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"Ok, i forgot."
  
Julian finishes his arming. "I'm going to go on the next patrol then go to the Church for a few hours, Then up to the court for this ridiculous spectacle. Will I see you there, Duncan? "
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Julian finishes his arming. "I'm going to go on the next patrol then go to the Church for a few hours, Then up to the court for this ridiculous spectacle. Will i see you there, Duncan? "
  
 
"Yes father, I'll be there. In fact I have to run an errand for the King. I may call you to bring me through. So, relieve me already."
 
"Yes father, I'll be there. In fact I have to run an errand for the King. I may call you to bring me through. So, relieve me already."
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==='''11: Despil and Jurt'''===
 
==='''11: Despil and Jurt'''===

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