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Vetta is as bad with people as she is good with Skyship engines. Extremely tall for a Rabbitfolk, she's always grungy and her brown and white fur is marked with grease smudges.  
 
Vetta is as bad with people as she is good with Skyship engines. Extremely tall for a Rabbitfolk, she's always grungy and her brown and white fur is marked with grease smudges.  
  
Always jumping on and climbing around her engines, Vetta's mechanic's cap has become battered and so soiled that the original color is anyone's guess. Her coveralls have faded to a drab gray and their numerous pockets and pouches are stuffed with tools and repair parts.  
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Always jumping on and climbing around her engines, Vetta's mechanic's cap has become battered so soiled that the original color is anyone's guess. Her coveralls have faded to a drab gray and their numerous pockets and pouches are stuffed with tools and repair parts.  
  
 
Though she doesn’t like most people she’s recently discovered that she dislikes Riku less than most. The unlikely friendship has done wonders for the boy's vocabulary and worries his older brother to no end.
 
Though she doesn’t like most people she’s recently discovered that she dislikes Riku less than most. The unlikely friendship has done wonders for the boy's vocabulary and worries his older brother to no end.

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