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"I had never dreamed it possible before, but the notes of Vrolk show that he once did the same for a legate.  She rose as Fell, unable to be revived by the Shadow's blessing, and wished to explore the realm of the undead first-hand.  Vrolk's work in that experiment succeeded in removing the maddening hunger for flesh from the legate, but changed the wyvern Zaindal from living to Fell.  It seems that something went wrong in his experiments, because his intent was instead to give the living Zaindal some of the benefits of undeath without killing the creature.
 
"I had never dreamed it possible before, but the notes of Vrolk show that he once did the same for a legate.  She rose as Fell, unable to be revived by the Shadow's blessing, and wished to explore the realm of the undead first-hand.  Vrolk's work in that experiment succeeded in removing the maddening hunger for flesh from the legate, but changed the wyvern Zaindal from living to Fell.  It seems that something went wrong in his experiments, because his intent was instead to give the living Zaindal some of the benefits of undeath without killing the creature.
  
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"When we first destroyed Zaindal, Vrolk returned to his lab and used another Fell subject for a similar experiment.  This time, he refined the process and not only removed the madness from the Fell, but infused the undead Zaindal with renewed strength and curing the wyvern of the madness as well.  The elf we saw fed to the creature was simply food - it needed the flesh to heal itself from the weakness brought on during its reassembling.  In fact, it should have been even more powerful than the first time we saw it.  If Zaindal hadn't been in a weakened state we might have lost that battle.
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"When we first destroyed Zaindal, Vrolk returned to his lab and used another Fell subject for a similar experiment.  This time, he refined the process and not only removed the madness from the Fell, but infused the undead Zaindal with renewed strength and curing the wyvern of the madness as well.  The elf we saw fed to the creature was simply food - it needed the flesh to heal itself from the weakness brought on during its reassembling.
  
 
"My experiments with Vrolk's ritual should accomplish even more.  It should remove from Shadaar the hunger for flesh without robbing him of the ability to repair his body by consuming.  This not only benefits him but also our Cause, as it removes some unlife from the Shadow's control.   
 
"My experiments with Vrolk's ritual should accomplish even more.  It should remove from Shadaar the hunger for flesh without robbing him of the ability to repair his body by consuming.  This not only benefits him but also our Cause, as it removes some unlife from the Shadow's control.   

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