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Momentarily, the Zenith’s view was superseded by a fleeting recollection of another war, a war against the architects of Creation themselves.  Furtive, staccato images played themselves across his field of vision – legions of loyal Terrestrial Exalted clad in jade arrayed in battle formation against the coming onslaught by the warriors of the Primordials and their daevas. His memory-self glanced at his truest companion, Arundel, whose moonsilver armor flowed and reshaped itself with mercurial grace as he adopted his war form. A feral grin stretched across the Lunar’s lupine face…
 
Momentarily, the Zenith’s view was superseded by a fleeting recollection of another war, a war against the architects of Creation themselves.  Furtive, staccato images played themselves across his field of vision – legions of loyal Terrestrial Exalted clad in jade arrayed in battle formation against the coming onslaught by the warriors of the Primordials and their daevas. His memory-self glanced at his truest companion, Arundel, whose moonsilver armor flowed and reshaped itself with mercurial grace as he adopted his war form. A feral grin stretched across the Lunar’s lupine face…
  
Copper Jaguar shook himself free of these memories, mindful of how they contrasted sharply with the present situation. This was no grand conflict.  There was no noble cause for which these assembled men would shed their blood.  They would fight and die for a lie, deceived by the Immaculate Faith and by an old man fearing the loss of his power.  
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Copper Jaguar shook himself free of these memories, mindful of how this memory contrasted sharply with the present. This was no grand conflict.  There was no noble cause for which these assembled men would shed their blood.  They would fight and die for a lie, deceived by the Immaculate Faith and by an old man fearing the loss of his power.  
  
 
The Seftarian king had united many in the Hundred Kingdoms under his banner, many lords who feared above all other things the might of the Anathema.  For the Lord Mithric had proved himself to be one of the Forsaken, and many had heard tales of the devastation wrought by the Bull of the North.
 
The Seftarian king had united many in the Hundred Kingdoms under his banner, many lords who feared above all other things the might of the Anathema.  For the Lord Mithric had proved himself to be one of the Forsaken, and many had heard tales of the devastation wrought by the Bull of the North.

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