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"But the time for subtlety is at an end.  I can use my powers to aid you.  I can call down terrible vengeance upon the army outside.  I will not mince words; I can boil the blood of the common soldiers, or send a deadly plague among them.  When I am finished, Johr's army will be gravely diminished by my efforts and the others may well break when they see the ruin I have called down upon family and kin.  The most effective weapon I possess is to call up the forces of Hell itself and send them amongst our enemies.  They may destroy the army before we lose another man."
 
"But the time for subtlety is at an end.  I can use my powers to aid you.  I can call down terrible vengeance upon the army outside.  I will not mince words; I can boil the blood of the common soldiers, or send a deadly plague among them.  When I am finished, Johr's army will be gravely diminished by my efforts and the others may well break when they see the ruin I have called down upon family and kin.  The most effective weapon I possess is to call up the forces of Hell itself and send them amongst our enemies.  They may destroy the army before we lose another man."
  
"This is, of course, not without danger.  If I unleash this power upon them, those that survive, and even those of your own men, will <s>call you an Anathema lover</s> <i>claim that you consort with demons, that you are truly Anathema</i>.  We may survive now, only to draw greater enemies to us tomorrow.  It is your name and glory at stake Prince Mithric; I care little for what they say of me.  The choice is yours to make."
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"This is, of course, not without danger.  If I unleash this power upon them, those that survive, and even those of your own men, will call you an Anathema lover.  We may survive now, only to draw greater enemies to us tomorrow.  It is your name and glory at stake Prince Mithric; I care little for what they say of me.  The choice is yours to make."
  
 
He watch the prince, looking for his reaction.
 
He watch the prince, looking for his reaction.

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