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Lugborz grasps Ripper and twists. A sharp crunch and crack resound as he flings him away. He smashes Dwarf hard against the ground, dislodging him. He smashes his pommel into the stunned wolf's head. He swipes the sword across Swift, scoring a long cut. Rolling, he finds Bruiser gone, stepping away.
 
Lugborz grasps Ripper and twists. A sharp crunch and crack resound as he flings him away. He smashes Dwarf hard against the ground, dislodging him. He smashes his pommel into the stunned wolf's head. He swipes the sword across Swift, scoring a long cut. Rolling, he finds Bruiser gone, stepping away.
  
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He rises, not having been so wounded in ages. He bleeds from a dozen wounds, three serious. Fleece faces him, ready, dripping wet. Swift has left. Dwarf stays back out of sword range, crouched to leap. Ripper stands near the water's edge, yellow eye glowing. Bruiser sits belly to the ground, waiting. Lugborz thinks she might be laughing.  
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He rises, not having been so wounded in ages. He bleeds from a dozen wounds, three serious. Fleece faces him, ready, dripping wet. Swift has left. Dwarf stays back out of sword range, crouched to leap. Ripper stands near the water's edge, yellow eye glowing. Bruiser sits belly to the ground, waiting. Lugborz thinks she might be laughing. Three other massive wolves come on to the wharf. Lugborz knows them too. Dunce, Fang, and Imp. The rest must be nearby someplace. He realizes just how ugly this could get, how serious it is. He knows his magic won't likely hurt them.
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Three other massive wolves come on to the wharf. Lugborz knows them too. Dunce, Fang, and Imp. The trio of Deathgods in a thousand shadows of chaos, the warrior trio. The rest must be nearby someplace. He realizes just how ugly this could get, how serious it is. He knows his magic won't likely hurt them.
 
  
 
Fleece barks once. They back away. Dwarf leaps to join them running into the night. Ripper strolls casually away, guarding a front leg tucked protectively against his chest. Bruiser gives him a wide berth and passes behind Fleece who follows her, walking backward. He hadn't even gotten a bite in, but the thought occurs to him at the same time it does to Lugborz; Fleece's turn will come.
 
Fleece barks once. They back away. Dwarf leaps to join them running into the night. Ripper strolls casually away, guarding a front leg tucked protectively against his chest. Bruiser gives him a wide berth and passes behind Fleece who follows her, walking backward. He hadn't even gotten a bite in, but the thought occurs to him at the same time it does to Lugborz; Fleece's turn will come.

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