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...Almost choke on his food as the Japanese elf entered the back room. Green Satan hadn't lied when he said she was gorgeous, and even Paku's old loins had to agree. Satan had mentioned she had mojo, and perhaps that's what it was, but Paku couldn't deny the affect she had. If she could fast talk and negotiate as nicely as she looked Paku knew she was a dead ringer for the job. Jackie and Two-Face came next, early and in usual style, and both sitting a little closer to the elf than Paku was sure she was comfortable with, but Ling Ling seemed to take it in stride. Another good sign; she was cool under pressure. Now all that remained was the wildcard...Buddha be praised, let Ariel and his fortune be right!  
 
...Almost choke on his food as the Japanese elf entered the back room. Green Satan hadn't lied when he said she was gorgeous, and even Paku's old loins had to agree. Satan had mentioned she had mojo, and perhaps that's what it was, but Paku couldn't deny the affect she had. If she could fast talk and negotiate as nicely as she looked Paku knew she was a dead ringer for the job. Jackie and Two-Face came next, early and in usual style, and both sitting a little closer to the elf than Paku was sure she was comfortable with, but Ling Ling seemed to take it in stride. Another good sign; she was cool under pressure. Now all that remained was the wildcard...Buddha be praised, let Ariel and his fortune be right!  
  
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Cat showed up on time and, despite looking like a clubgirl that had just gotten ready to go dancing, was polite enough to sit quietly and enjoy her pho while Paku laid out the details of the job. He had laid out what he knew about the job and the negotiated fee; $4000 to go to Tacoma, break into the Port Authority, steal a refrigerated case of some particularly nasty contraband magical reagents, and call him so he could set up a drop when the job was done. The reagents were something called Blood Ice. Crystallized blood from some hideous ritual gone wrong that had taken place in Siberia. His client had wanted the case, and was willing to pay well for it, but Paku could care less about what happened to the disgusting stuff once he had been paid. Bad mojo was never good for his Karma, but if it meant a paycheck he'd get it for her. All the fresh meat had to do was break in, retrieve the case, and drop it somewhere and he could call it good.
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Cat showed up on time and, despite looking like a clubgirl that had just gotten ready to go dancing, was polite enough to sit quietly and enjoy her pho while Paku laid out the details of the job. He had laid out what he knew about the job and the negotiated fee; $4000 to go Tacoma, break into the Port Authority, steal a refrigerated case of some particularly nasty contraband magical reagents, and call him so he could set up a drop when the job was done. The reagents were something called Blood Ice. Crystallized blood from some hideous ritual gone wrong that had taken place in Siberia. His client had wanted the case, and was willing to pay well for it, but Paku could care less about what happened to the disgusting stuff once he had been paid. Bad mojo was never good for his Karma, but if it meant a paycheck he'd get it for her. All the fresh meat had to do was break in, retrieve the case, and drop it somewhere and he could call it good.
  
 
After he'd laid it out the runners discussed the plan and the elf decided to negotiate a better price. She could fast talk with the best of them and had probably sensed that he was holding out, so he buckled for the rest of the negotiable fee, and was pleased to see them take their $7000 to be paid on delivery. Paku couldn't have been more pleased with himself. Enough to buy them a round of beers on his way out in hopes they would get to know each other.
 
After he'd laid it out the runners discussed the plan and the elf decided to negotiate a better price. She could fast talk with the best of them and had probably sensed that he was holding out, so he buckled for the rest of the negotiable fee, and was pleased to see them take their $7000 to be paid on delivery. Paku couldn't have been more pleased with himself. Enough to buy them a round of beers on his way out in hopes they would get to know each other.

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