Editing Ajari Jalai

Jalai is a troll shaman of great age and renown. He is rarely seen but stories of him are a [[Shaema]] favorite. None know his exact age but most of those alive have herad stories about him on their grandfather's knee. 

Jalai spends long times in a state of hybernation, his soul traveling the spirit planes. So it is quite an event when he visits a settlment. He is a bit under 3 meters tall, pale skinned and bulky. His whole body is covered with fetishes of wood, shell and herb, all hanging from dozens of straps tied around his limbs, torso andhead. Plates of bark cover his privet parts.
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−	Jalai is a troll shaman of great age and renown. He is rarely seen but stories of him are a [[Shaema]] favorite. None know his exact age but most of those alive have ~~heard~~ stories about him on their grandfather's knee.	+	Jalai is a troll shaman of great age and renown. He is rarely seen but stories of him are a [[Shaema]] favorite. None know his exact age but most of those alive have herad stories about him on their grandfather's knee.

−	Jalai spends long times in a state of ~~hibernation~~, his soul traveling the spirit planes. So it is quite an event when he visits a ~~settlement~~. He is a bit under 3 meters tall, pale skinned and bulky. His whole body is covered with fetishes of wood, shell and herb, all hanging from dozens of straps tied around his limbs, torso ~~and head~~. Plates of bark cover his privet parts.	+	Jalai spends long times in a state of hybernation, his soul traveling the spirit planes. So it is quite an event when he visits a settlment. He is a bit under 3 meters tall, pale skinned and bulky. His whole body is covered with fetishes of wood, shell and herb, all hanging from dozens of straps tied around his limbs, torso andhead. Plates of bark cover his privet parts.