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In the [[AlphaOmega |Alpha and Omega]] game [[Elizabeth_'Liz'_Albrechts |Liz]] uses a variant of the Fire Dragon Style, which I propose was the original version which was later appropriated by Sidereals of the Bronze faction and renamed in honor of Hesiesh.  
 
In the [[AlphaOmega |Alpha and Omega]] game [[Elizabeth_'Liz'_Albrechts |Liz]] uses a variant of the Fire Dragon Style, which I propose was the original version which was later appropriated by Sidereals of the Bronze faction and renamed in honor of Hesiesh.  
  
This write-up represents my attempt to fix the problems stemming from ambiguous wording (eg, dice vs. levels of damage) and strangely designed mechanics. I have noted where changes have already been accepted as house rules and where they are submitted for consideration by '''Aincumis'''.
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This write-up represents my attempt to fix the problems stemming from ambiguous wording (dice vs. levels of damage) and strangely designed mechanics. I have noted where changes have already been accepted as house rules and where they are submitted for consideration by '''Aincumis'''.
  
 
'''Flash-Fire Technique'''<br>
 
'''Flash-Fire Technique'''<br>
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'''Duration:''' MA actions<br>
 
'''Duration:''' MA actions<br>
 
The martial artist focuses fiery essence into her hands. For her MA in actions after she activates this charm she can chose as a non-charm action (reflexive, step 1) to employ this energy as a weapon, inflicting pain and distraction (a cumulative -1 internal penalty) in addition to the damage with a successful attack. Each such attack costs her 2m.<br>
 
The martial artist focuses fiery essence into her hands. For her MA in actions after she activates this charm she can chose as a non-charm action (reflexive, step 1) to employ this energy as a weapon, inflicting pain and distraction (a cumulative -1 internal penalty) in addition to the damage with a successful attack. Each such attack costs her 2m.<br>
Reason: ''As written it costs too much Essence for what it does and without free reflexives is pretty useless most of the time.''
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Reason: ''As written, Liz would probably never use this charm. It costs too much Essence for what it does and needs a combo to be useful in a fight.''
  
'''Perfect Blazing Blow''' ('''approved''' as a house rule by Aincumis)<br>  
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'''Perfect Blazing Blow''' (approved as a house rule by Aincumis)<br>  
 
'''Cost:''' 3m; '''Mins:''' MA 3, Ess 2; '''Type:''' Reflexive <br>
 
'''Cost:''' 3m; '''Mins:''' MA 3, Ess 2; '''Type:''' Reflexive <br>
 
'''Keywords:''' Combo-OK, Obvious<br>
 
'''Keywords:''' Combo-OK, Obvious<br>
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'''Consuming Might of the Celestial Fire'''<br>
 
'''Consuming Might of the Celestial Fire'''<br>
 
As per Consuming Might of the Fire Dragon from the MoEP.
 
As per Consuming Might of the Fire Dragon from the MoEP.
 
=Other proposed houserules and custom charms=
 
 
'''Lightning Speed''' (proposed Houserule)<br>
 
As written, except that the Charm gains the Stackable keyword.
 
 
Also see [[User:Dakkareth/Custom_Charms|Dakkareth's Custom Charms]]
 

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