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In the [[AlphaOmega |Alpha and Omega]] game [[Elizabeth_'Liz'_Albrechts |Liz]] uses a variant of the Fire Dragon Style, which I propose was the original version which was later appropriated by Sidereals of the Bronze faction and renamed in honor of Hesiesh. | In the [[AlphaOmega |Alpha and Omega]] game [[Elizabeth_'Liz'_Albrechts |Liz]] uses a variant of the Fire Dragon Style, which I propose was the original version which was later appropriated by Sidereals of the Bronze faction and renamed in honor of Hesiesh. | ||
− | This write-up represents my attempt to fix the problems stemming from ambiguous wording ( | + | This write-up represents my attempt to fix the problems stemming from ambiguous wording (dice vs. levels of damage) and strangely designed mechanics. I have noted where changes have already been accepted as house rules and where they are submitted for consideration by '''Aincumis'''. |
'''Flash-Fire Technique'''<br> | '''Flash-Fire Technique'''<br> | ||
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'''Duration:''' MA actions<br> | '''Duration:''' MA actions<br> | ||
The martial artist focuses fiery essence into her hands. For her MA in actions after she activates this charm she can chose as a non-charm action (reflexive, step 1) to employ this energy as a weapon, inflicting pain and distraction (a cumulative -1 internal penalty) in addition to the damage with a successful attack. Each such attack costs her 2m.<br> | The martial artist focuses fiery essence into her hands. For her MA in actions after she activates this charm she can chose as a non-charm action (reflexive, step 1) to employ this energy as a weapon, inflicting pain and distraction (a cumulative -1 internal penalty) in addition to the damage with a successful attack. Each such attack costs her 2m.<br> | ||
− | Reason: ''As written | + | Reason: ''As written, Liz would probably never use this charm. It costs too much Essence for what it does and needs a combo to be useful in a fight.'' |
− | '''Perfect Blazing Blow''' ( | + | '''Perfect Blazing Blow''' (approved as a house rule by Aincumis)<br> |
'''Cost:''' 3m; '''Mins:''' MA 3, Ess 2; '''Type:''' Reflexive <br> | '''Cost:''' 3m; '''Mins:''' MA 3, Ess 2; '''Type:''' Reflexive <br> | ||
'''Keywords:''' Combo-OK, Obvious<br> | '''Keywords:''' Combo-OK, Obvious<br> | ||
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'''Consuming Might of the Celestial Fire'''<br> | '''Consuming Might of the Celestial Fire'''<br> | ||
As per Consuming Might of the Fire Dragon from the MoEP. | As per Consuming Might of the Fire Dragon from the MoEP. | ||
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