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Father put me in front of a man more my height than his, garbed in a motley combination of corduroy knee breeches and velvet frock coat, lawn neck cloth and coarse work shirt.  His head was bare as were his shins.  I looked down and saw he wore sturdy boots more suitable for the mountains than a city’s streets and though his features were tanned by the sun his hands lacked the calluses and enlarged joints of a field labourer.  I nodded in silent greeting and flicked a glance at my father, wondering who this individual was.<br><br>
 
Father put me in front of a man more my height than his, garbed in a motley combination of corduroy knee breeches and velvet frock coat, lawn neck cloth and coarse work shirt.  His head was bare as were his shins.  I looked down and saw he wore sturdy boots more suitable for the mountains than a city’s streets and though his features were tanned by the sun his hands lacked the calluses and enlarged joints of a field labourer.  I nodded in silent greeting and flicked a glance at my father, wondering who this individual was.<br><br>
  
For his part, William nodded with a hint of a smile and jerked his head to the barn doors.  “Outside,” he said and turned for them without further fuss, speaking to the air.  “Everything as ordered.”<br><br>
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For his part, Emil nodded with a hint of a smile and jerked his head to the barn doors.  “Outside,” he said and turned for them without further fuss, speaking to the air.  “Everything as ordered.”<br><br>
  
 
''Ordered? Whose orders?'' We’d had no word from the home office for weeks.  Had in fact spent the time since we’d left Bayern wandering the mountains like gypsies.  Or rather, I had.  Father had other tasks and most of them involved stopping in taverns and ''bierhallen'' talking to people and pushing on.  I played his young companion who saw nothing, heard nothing, said nothing.  It worked well enough and no one had given me a second glance and after a week away from soap and hot water, few ventured to look closer.  I followed the men outside and saw a carriage waiting, if carriage it was. <br><br>
 
''Ordered? Whose orders?'' We’d had no word from the home office for weeks.  Had in fact spent the time since we’d left Bayern wandering the mountains like gypsies.  Or rather, I had.  Father had other tasks and most of them involved stopping in taverns and ''bierhallen'' talking to people and pushing on.  I played his young companion who saw nothing, heard nothing, said nothing.  It worked well enough and no one had given me a second glance and after a week away from soap and hot water, few ventured to look closer.  I followed the men outside and saw a carriage waiting, if carriage it was. <br><br>

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