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His blue eyes came up when Irina DiSanti joined him, and Mason glared at her. Flickering a glance toward the woman and her kids, he made a conscious effort to stop clenching his jaw. He kept his voice low too, his Southern drawl very prevalent even in a hiss. "Lighten up? Woman, have ya lost yer fuckin' mind? My fiancée’s in there fightin' for her life because some redneck motherfucker drank. her. blood. And you want me to lighten up?" He couldn't contain his rage, reaching out to grab her by the elbow and lever both of them to their feet. He didn't say 'come with me' but the order is explicit in the way he 'helps' her out of the waiting room to a more private location.<br><br>
 
His blue eyes came up when Irina DiSanti joined him, and Mason glared at her. Flickering a glance toward the woman and her kids, he made a conscious effort to stop clenching his jaw. He kept his voice low too, his Southern drawl very prevalent even in a hiss. "Lighten up? Woman, have ya lost yer fuckin' mind? My fiancée’s in there fightin' for her life because some redneck motherfucker drank. her. blood. And you want me to lighten up?" He couldn't contain his rage, reaching out to grab her by the elbow and lever both of them to their feet. He didn't say 'come with me' but the order is explicit in the way he 'helps' her out of the waiting room to a more private location.<br><br>
  
Once clear of onlookers, especially the two kids, Irina deftly twisted free of his grip and aborted her automatic next move, that of putting Mason in a compliance hold. Seven years on the force was sufficient to have her reaching for handcuffs that were no longer there, even after two and a half years of retirement. Her fingertips brushed her gun and she pulled her hand away.<br><br>
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Once clear of onlookers, especially the two kids, Irina deftly twisted free of his grip and aborted her automatic next move, that of putting Mason in a compliance hold. Seven years on the force was sufficient to have her reaching for handcuffs that were no longer there, even after two and a half years. Her fingertips brushed her gun and she pulled her hand away.<br><br>
  
 
"That won't be necessary. I know the way," she said, tugging her jacket straight, ignoring the blood on it. "Let's go."<br><br>
 
"That won't be necessary. I know the way," she said, tugging her jacket straight, ignoring the blood on it. "Let's go."<br><br>

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