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She gently takes his arm and eases him up to his feet.  Rina and the others clear a path for them through the crowd, aiming for the shade thrown by the concessions stands.  Rina’s bringing up the rear and her ear picks up the sound of … distant gunfire?<br><br>  
 
She gently takes his arm and eases him up to his feet.  Rina and the others clear a path for them through the crowd, aiming for the shade thrown by the concessions stands.  Rina’s bringing up the rear and her ear picks up the sound of … distant gunfire?<br><br>  
  
'''Rina:''' ''Did you hear that?''<br>
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'''Rina:''' ''Did you hear that?''<br><br>
 
'''Nika:''' No. What?<br><br>
 
'''Nika:''' No. What?<br><br>
  
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She skids to a stop in the sidelines and approaches the guard. She looks a touch desperate and stutters as she makes it to the gate.<br><br>
 
She skids to a stop in the sidelines and approaches the guard. She looks a touch desperate and stutters as she makes it to the gate.<br><br>
  
'''Rina:''' I just, just … (breathily) Can I just, like … walk where ''he'' walked?<br><br>
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'''Rina:'' I just, just … (breathily) Can I just, like … walk where ''he'' walked?<br><br>
  
From across the field, Nika sees Rina approach and takes in the line of her and nearly falls down the stairs. What the ''hell'' is going on?  She slows to better watch what’s happening.<br><br>  
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From across the field, Nika sees Rina approach and takes in the line of her and nearly falls down the stairs. What the ''hell'' is going on?  She slows to better watch what’s happening.   
  
For her part, Kiera’s already recognized Rina’s not acting like her normal self.  The redhead has never seen the engineer get starstruck and sexually charged over a celebrity.  Kiera’s not entirely sure if she should yank Rina back from the brink of doing something truly stupid, or facilitate Rina’s scheme by ripping open the woman’s shirt.  She settles for looking like a fellow trial-groupie and hopes she’s on the right track.  Rina steps closer to the guard.  She’s definitely got his attention.<br><br>
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For her part, Kiera’s already recognized Rina’s not acting like her normal self.  The redhead has never seen the engineer get starstruck and sexually charged over a celebrity.  Kiera’s not entirely sure if she should yank Rina back from the brink of doing something truly stupid, or facilitate Rina’s scheme by ripping open the woman’s shirt.  She settles for looking like a fellow trial-groupie and hopes she’s on the right track.  Rina steps closer to the guard.  She’s definitely got his attention.
  
 
'''Rina:''' (glances coyly down, then up) Well … it’s just that … could I just….? Okay, I’ll …. God, ''he’s just so'' … (licks lower lip) … I mean, you could come with me and … and … I just … oh, dammit, I’ll just tell you.  I— <br><br>
 
'''Rina:''' (glances coyly down, then up) Well … it’s just that … could I just….? Okay, I’ll …. God, ''he’s just so'' … (licks lower lip) … I mean, you could come with me and … and … I just … oh, dammit, I’ll just tell you.  I— <br><br>
  
She gets right up in his space and croons.<br><br>
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She gets right up in his space and croons.
  
 
'''Rina:''' Trials make me hot.  (moves closer)  And ''he'' walked through here and ''he’s killed I don’t know how many people ….''<br>
 
'''Rina:''' Trials make me hot.  (moves closer)  And ''he'' walked through here and ''he’s killed I don’t know how many people ….''<br>
'''Guard:''' Well, I guess if you come with me, it’ll be all safe.  I’ll just let ya ….<br><br>
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Guard: Well, I guess if you come with me, it’ll be all safe.  I’ll just let ya ….<br><br>
  
 
Rina draws her hands up her throat and over her face and practically shimmies with anticipation.  Did she just suck her finger seductively?  ''Yes.'' Yes, she did.  The guard does what any man would do in his position.  He pulls the gate open and lets Rina slip inside.  He starts locking up behind him when she pulls on his arm.<br><br>
 
Rina draws her hands up her throat and over her face and practically shimmies with anticipation.  Did she just suck her finger seductively?  ''Yes.'' Yes, she did.  The guard does what any man would do in his position.  He pulls the gate open and lets Rina slip inside.  He starts locking up behind him when she pulls on his arm.<br><br>
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'''Kiera:''' Can I come, too? I thought we were together.<br>
 
'''Kiera:''' Can I come, too? I thought we were together.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' (slow grin) Ohhh, you wanna do a three-way?<br>
 
'''Rina:''' (slow grin) Ohhh, you wanna do a three-way?<br>
'''Kiera:''' Always. <br><br>
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'''Kiera:''' Always. <br>
  
 
From afar Nika’s about to lose both eyes, they’re bugging out.<br><br>
 
From afar Nika’s about to lose both eyes, they’re bugging out.<br><br>
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Rina sees the surface underfoot is hard and there are no convenient footprints or impressions to tell her what might have happened in the tunnel once Carter was out of sight of the stadium. However, her nose is telling her something.  She smells … not gunpowder, but something very like … sulfur.  Now ''that'' could mean quite a few interesting things. She disguises her deep investigatory sniff by pressing into the guard.<br><br>   
 
Rina sees the surface underfoot is hard and there are no convenient footprints or impressions to tell her what might have happened in the tunnel once Carter was out of sight of the stadium. However, her nose is telling her something.  She smells … not gunpowder, but something very like … sulfur.  Now ''that'' could mean quite a few interesting things. She disguises her deep investigatory sniff by pressing into the guard.<br><br>   
  
'''Rina:''' (throatily) Ahhh, something smells … ''good''. It’s not you now, is it?  (rubs on guard, looks at Kiera) D’you smell that?<br><br>
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'''Rina:''' (throatily) Ahhh, something smells … ''good''. It’s not you now, is it?  (rubs on guard, looks at Kiera) D’you smell that?
  
 
She does.  Kiera skips forward into the tunnel, walking backward and waving them forward.<br><br>
 
She does.  Kiera skips forward into the tunnel, walking backward and waving them forward.<br><br>
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Rina pulls the guard’s gun from its holster, chambers a round, and tucks it into her rear waistband.  Together she and Kiera drag the guard down a secondary corridor that leads … hell, they’re not sure where it leads, only that it takes them out of sight of the other guys.  A quick frisk of the unconscious guard turns up pepper spray and a walkie talkie.<br><br>
 
Rina pulls the guard’s gun from its holster, chambers a round, and tucks it into her rear waistband.  Together she and Kiera drag the guard down a secondary corridor that leads … hell, they’re not sure where it leads, only that it takes them out of sight of the other guys.  A quick frisk of the unconscious guard turns up pepper spray and a walkie talkie.<br><br>
  
'''Rina:''' You take the walkie. You’re the faster talker. I’ll take the pepper spray.<br><br>
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''Rina:'' You take the walkie. You’re the faster talker. I’ll take the pepper spray.<br><br>
  
 
Rina finds zip ties on the man next and the women divvy them up.  Kiera quickly finds the channel the other guards are on and sets it so she can keep apprised of developments.  She helps Rina drag the guard into the mens room.  As they do that, Kiera tells Rina what she saw: three men, PDF suits that don’t fit, Mike hauled into the van.  She and Rina get out there just in time to see the van peeling out across the scrub outside the stadium, leaving a plume of dust from its exhaust.<br><br>
 
Rina finds zip ties on the man next and the women divvy them up.  Kiera quickly finds the channel the other guards are on and sets it so she can keep apprised of developments.  She helps Rina drag the guard into the mens room.  As they do that, Kiera tells Rina what she saw: three men, PDF suits that don’t fit, Mike hauled into the van.  She and Rina get out there just in time to see the van peeling out across the scrub outside the stadium, leaving a plume of dust from its exhaust.<br><br>
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Kiera jumps on first.  She lands like a cat.  Rina jumps and nearly misses, managing to kick herself up onto the van after some effort (and a flashback to an incident in the war).  They are joined by an occupant from the van—it’s Johannes Volker III.  Rina asks if he’s part of the rescue mission.<br><br>   
 
Kiera jumps on first.  She lands like a cat.  Rina jumps and nearly misses, managing to kick herself up onto the van after some effort (and a flashback to an incident in the war).  They are joined by an occupant from the van—it’s Johannes Volker III.  Rina asks if he’s part of the rescue mission.<br><br>   
  
'''Volker:''' Oh, wait.  You look familiar.<br>
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Volker: Oh, wait.  You look familiar.<br>
'''Rina:''' My boyfriend’s in the truck. (points through the roof of the van)  ''That’s my guy''.<br>
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Rina: My boyfriend’s in the truck. (points through the roof of the van)  ''That’s my guy''.<br>
'''Volker:''' Sorry.<br>
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Volker: Sorry.<br>
'''Rina:''' Well, what are you doing with him?<br>
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Rina: Well, what are you doing with him?<br>
'''Volker:''' I don’t know.  But you’re gonna have to get off.  Or I’ll just take you off.<br>
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Volker: I don’t know.  But you’re gonna have to get off.  Or I’ll just take you off.<br>
'''Rina:''' Don’t make me hurt you, man.<br><br>
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Rina: Don’t make me hurt you, man.<br><br>
  
 
Volker has something like a flashlight in his hand and he pushes a button on it with his thumb.  It extends a retractable blade about two feet long.  Obviously it’s no flashlight.  Rina’s gun is in her rear waistband but the van is weaving too much for her to draw it—she needs both hands on the van to avoid falling off.  Volker is a little better at the balancing act and actually has a hand free.  That’s all the advantage he needs to skewer Rina and Kiera and send them over the side.<br><br>  
 
Volker has something like a flashlight in his hand and he pushes a button on it with his thumb.  It extends a retractable blade about two feet long.  Obviously it’s no flashlight.  Rina’s gun is in her rear waistband but the van is weaving too much for her to draw it—she needs both hands on the van to avoid falling off.  Volker is a little better at the balancing act and actually has a hand free.  That’s all the advantage he needs to skewer Rina and Kiera and send them over the side.<br><br>  

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