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Arden: I hope. That’s what I’m going to try to do.<br>
 
Arden: I hope. That’s what I’m going to try to do.<br>
 
Kiera: If you can’t you might need to excise it so it doesn’t spread.<br>
 
Kiera: If you can’t you might need to excise it so it doesn’t spread.<br>
Nika: ''Are you kiddin’ me?!''<br>
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Nika: Are you kiddin’ me?!<br>
 
Kiera: No.<br>
 
Kiera: No.<br>
 
Arden: (grinning) I think I should amputate.  What do you think?<br>
 
Arden: (grinning) I think I should amputate.  What do you think?<br>
Kiera: Yeah, I would amputate.  You might have to give her a tranquilizer if you keep talkin’.  I’m serious, though.<br>
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Kiera: Yeah, I would amputate.  You might have to give her a tranquilzer if you keep talkin’.  I’m serious, though.<br>
Nika: ''Stop!''<br>
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Nika: Stop!<br>
Arden: I am not excising.  Excising isn’t an option. You won’t need to be excised.<br>
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Arden: I am not excising.  Excizing isn’t an option. You won’t need to be excised.<br>
 
Nika: Stop.  <br>
 
Nika: Stop.  <br>
 
Kiera: I’m just sayin’.  (to Arden)  You’re the Prion expert.<br>
 
Kiera: I’m just sayin’.  (to Arden)  You’re the Prion expert.<br>
Arden: This isn’t Prion disease.  It’s a ''mold''.<br>
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Arden: This isn’t Prion disease.  It’s a mold.<br>
Kiera: I ''know''. Which is why I’m sayin’.  It’ll go systemic if you don’t excise it out.  Just clean it and make sure.<br>
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Kiera: I know. Which is why I’m sayin’.  It’ll go systemic if you don’t excise it out.  Just clean it and make sure.<br>
 
Nika: (to Rina) I was doin’ fine til they started talkin’.<br>
 
Nika: (to Rina) I was doin’ fine til they started talkin’.<br>
 
Rina: You’re okay.<br>
 
Rina: You’re okay.<br>
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Joshua: What I would prefer is not to be gunpointed around.<br>   
 
Joshua: What I would prefer is not to be gunpointed around.<br>   
 
Dr. Schweiss: You were the ones who brought guns here first.<br>
 
Dr. Schweiss: You were the ones who brought guns here first.<br>
Joshua: ''I'' didn’t bring any freaking guns.  And you have to understand, the atmosphere you set perhaps encouraged people to be carrying guns.<br>
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Joshua: I didn’t bring any freaking guns.  And you have to understand, the atmosphere you set perhaps encouraged people to be carrying guns.<br>
 
Dr. Schweiss: That’s true. We brought guns to it too.<br>
 
Dr. Schweiss: That’s true. We brought guns to it too.<br>
 
Joshua: I’ve been trying from Moment One to get a peaceful negotiation out of—<br>
 
Joshua: I’ve been trying from Moment One to get a peaceful negotiation out of—<br>
 
Dr. Schweiss: You’ve been quite fair about it.  The thing is, though, I have quite a gold mine as it were, here, and you haven’t provided me with much incentive to not mine it through.<br>
 
Dr. Schweiss: You’ve been quite fair about it.  The thing is, though, I have quite a gold mine as it were, here, and you haven’t provided me with much incentive to not mine it through.<br>
Joshua: What can I do?  I don’t ''care''. I don’t want to be in the resin business. ''I don’t care''.  All I want to do, to be honest, is have enough money to keep the ship flying.  And what we’re going to get paid from the company is more than enough for that.  So, really all I would like to do is get out of your hair and get you out of here in two weeks.  And anything I can do that would speed that process up and encourage you that we’re not interested in your cut of the resin or screwing with your operation here or whatnot—.<br>
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Joshua: What can I do?  I don’t care. I don’t want to be in the resin business. I don’t care.  All I want to do, to be honest, is have enough money to keep the ship flying.  And what we’re going to get paid from the company is more than enough for that.  So, really all I would like to do is get out of your hair and get you out of here in two weeks.  And anything I can do that would speed that process up and encourage you that we’re not interested in your cut of the resin or screwing with your operation here or whatnot—.<br>
 
Dr. Schweiss: (firmly) Let’s see what happens in a week.<br>
 
Dr. Schweiss: (firmly) Let’s see what happens in a week.<br>
 
Joshua: Uh-huh.  Okay.<br>   
 
Joshua: Uh-huh.  Okay.<br>   
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Arden: I suppose it could be the Sheriff.<br>
 
Arden: I suppose it could be the Sheriff.<br>
 
Kiera: Could be.<br>
 
Kiera: Could be.<br>
Joshua: So.  ''Actionable'' information.  What are you doing about it?  Assuming one conspiracy or another is true, do we do anything?  Or do we sit here?<br>
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Joshua: So.  Actionable information.  What are you doing about it?  Assuming one conspiracy or another is true, do we do anything?  Or do we sit here?<br>
 
Arden: We’re in the position of needing his trust, so we have to go along with what he wants us to do.<br>
 
Arden: We’re in the position of needing his trust, so we have to go along with what he wants us to do.<br>
 
Joshua: All right.  Happy-happy.<br>
 
Joshua: All right.  Happy-happy.<br>
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Arden: Wow.<br>
 
Arden: Wow.<br>
 
Rina: I don’t think he’s gonna let us live a second longer than he can pack those damned suitcases and I’d been keeping that behind my teeth til now, because I promised I’d be positive.<br>
 
Rina: I don’t think he’s gonna let us live a second longer than he can pack those damned suitcases and I’d been keeping that behind my teeth til now, because I promised I’d be positive.<br>
Arden: I wouldn’t let ''anyone'' in this facility to live.  I’m including his help. <br>
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Arden: I wouldn’t let anyone in this facility to live.  I’m including his help. <br>
 
Nika: We all know how many people he’s got. You guys want to fight it out to the bottom?<br>
 
Nika: We all know how many people he’s got. You guys want to fight it out to the bottom?<br>
 
Arden: How many does he have? Four?<br>
 
Arden: How many does he have? Four?<br>
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Kiera points upslope.  The rain is still falling and the trails will be treacherous from the mud.  And Nika has an injured leg.<br><br>
 
Kiera points upslope.  The rain is still falling and the trails will be treacherous from the mud.  And Nika has an injured leg.<br><br>
  
Nika: I have been ''shot'' worse than this.<br>   
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Nika: I have been shot worse than this.<br>   
 
Kiera: All right … <br>
 
Kiera: All right … <br>
 
Joshua: All right.  (snaps fingers) Work-y, work-y. It’s either that or start taking weapons.  Try and take weapons and start a firefight. I don’t care which one, so long as we make a decision, if that tells you anything.<br>
 
Joshua: All right.  (snaps fingers) Work-y, work-y. It’s either that or start taking weapons.  Try and take weapons and start a firefight. I don’t care which one, so long as we make a decision, if that tells you anything.<br>

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