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'''Georgia (Huang Long) system'''<br><br> | '''Georgia (Huang Long) system'''<br><br> | ||
| − | We come out of pulse and Joshua pilots us down on Whitefall. It’s a lovely little moon, half of it entirely owned by the redoubtable woman known only as Patience. Luckily for us, we’re headed for the half she doesn’t own. Reentry is very smooth and it shows just how well-built ''Equinox'' is. She hasn’t any parts welded onto her or scavved from derelict ships on the Rim. She doesn’t shake as much coming through atmo. In comparison to ''Summer’s Gift'', the ride is smooth as glass, so much so Kiera can serve coffee on the bridge en route without danger of spilling it. Nika is sitting on the bridge and she’s can feel how well | + | We come out of pulse and Joshua pilots us down on Whitefall. It’s a lovely little moon, half of it entirely owned by the redoubtable woman known only as Patience. Luckily for us, we’re headed for the half she doesn’t own. Reentry is very smooth and it shows just how well-built ''Equinox'' is. She hasn’t any parts welded onto her or scavved from derelict ships on the Rim. She doesn’t shake as much coming through atmo. In comparison to ''Summer’s Gift'', the ride is smooth as glass, so much so Kiera can serve coffee on the bridge en route without danger of spilling it. Nika is sitting on the bridge and she’s can feel how well Equinox is flying and she’s impressed.<br><br> |
'''Nika:''' Nice flyin’ Joshua. Very smooth.<br> | '''Nika:''' Nice flyin’ Joshua. Very smooth.<br> | ||
