Editing Episode 501: Shakedown Cruise, Part Three

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'''Joshua:''' That’s true. That’s fair.<br><br>
 
'''Joshua:''' That’s true. That’s fair.<br><br>
  
We land at Acropolis’s spaceport and like Eavesdown Docks on Persephone, approach and landing is where you manage to make it.  We settle on our berth, power down, and get to the business of finding Chu.  Acropolis is a city of 10 million people and it’s larger than Vandenberg on Boros. In fact, Acropolis is the largest city in Georgia. Finding Chu amongst all those people could be difficult.<br><br>
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We land at Acropolis’s spaceport and like Eavesdown Docks on Persephone, approach and landing is where you manage to make it.  We settle on our berth, power down, and get to the business of finding Chu.  Acropolis is a city of 10 million people and it’s larger than Vandenberg on Boros. In fact, Acropolis is the largest city in Georgia. Finding Chu amongst all those people could be difficult.<br>
  
Kiera calls up her high and low places contacts and together they search out Hannibal Chu.  The word comes back: He’s still on Athens and his ship is now running under the name [[Episode 501: Shakedown Cruise, Special Features#How To Speak Chinese|Hēimǎ]], ‘''Dark Horse''’. Back when Kiera did business with Chu, his ship was called ''Dark Horse''.  Kiera thanks her contacts and wraps up weighing favors given and owed, then tells the crew what she’s found.<br><br>
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Kiera calls up her high and low places contacts and together they search out Hannibal Chu.  The word comes back: He’s still on Athens and his ship is now running under the name [[Episode 501: Shakedown Cruise, Special Features#How To Speak Chinese|Hēimǎ]], ‘Dark Horse’. Back when Kiera did business with Chu, his ship was called Dark Horse.  Kiera thanks her contacts and wraps up weighing favors given and owed, then tells the crew what she’s found.<br><br>
  
 
We split up to search for Chu’s ship. Kiera and Rina team up together and Arden and Beglan make the second team. Joshua will stay on ''Equinox'' with Nika.<br><br>
 
We split up to search for Chu’s ship. Kiera and Rina team up together and Arden and Beglan make the second team. Joshua will stay on ''Equinox'' with Nika.<br><br>
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'''Rina:''' (to Joshua) Then ''you'' go.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' (to Joshua) Then ''you'' go.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' I’m not arguing that you go, I’m just trying to figure out why Rina is going.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' I’m not arguing that you go, I’m just trying to figure out why Rina is going.<br>
'''Kiera:''' ''She volunteered''.<br><br>
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'''Kiera:''' She volunteered.<br><br>
  
 
Nika cuts through the crap.<br><br>
 
Nika cuts through the crap.<br><br>

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