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| − | Klaz and Vrin walk up the secret stairs and peek out the secret door. They see the | + | Klaz and Vrin walk up the secret stairs and peek out the secret door. They see the übberations. They glance at each other. They carefully close the door and walk back down. |
'''Lucky''': I predict good times ahead. | '''Lucky''': I predict good times ahead. | ||
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'''Klaz''': Okay, who let the sheila at the dreamlily. On this ship, peace never lasts for long. Hey, Roosevelt, where'd you get all that cash? | '''Klaz''': Okay, who let the sheila at the dreamlily. On this ship, peace never lasts for long. Hey, Roosevelt, where'd you get all that cash? | ||
| − | Roosevelt just chuckles | + | Roosevelt just chuckles meniacly. |
'''Roosevelt''': Splinters. I even amaze myself sometimes. That'll teach that little walking disaster to mess with chemicals against instructions. | '''Roosevelt''': Splinters. I even amaze myself sometimes. That'll teach that little walking disaster to mess with chemicals against instructions. | ||
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| − | '''Terra''': Hey, Kithle. (sees the new | + | '''Terra''': Hey, Kithle. (sees the new tattos) Whoa, freaky. |
'''Kithle''': It takes a bit of getting used to. What did you need? | '''Kithle''': It takes a bit of getting used to. What did you need? | ||
| − | '''Terra''': I'm still concerned. I really think you've underestimated | + | '''Terra''': I'm still concerned. I really think you've underestimated Vorath. Perhaps Sa'vor had something to do with it, but that couldn't have been Volrath's entire force. I've known him longer than any of you besides Muradin, and I'm telling you, that was too easy. |
'''Kithle''': Easy? You call all that easy? | '''Kithle''': Easy? You call all that easy? | ||
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Volrath hears a soft squeaking noise and perks up immediately when Terra holds out her hands. | Volrath hears a soft squeaking noise and perks up immediately when Terra holds out her hands. | ||
| − | '''Volrath''': Is... is that ? | + | '''Volrath''': Is...is that ? |
'''Terra''': Yep. | '''Terra''': Yep. | ||
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'''Kithle''': That little terror likes bunnies! | '''Kithle''': That little terror likes bunnies! | ||
| − | '''Terra''': Hard to believe, isn't it? You remember the goblin brain he | + | '''Terra''': Hard to believe, isn't it? You remember the goblin brain he keep's in his room? I helped Volrath capture the little bastard. During the raid, we came across their stock room, and it was filled with bunny meat. Volrath was dispondent for a week. |
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'''Savor''': Again? | '''Savor''': Again? | ||
| − | '''Kanatash''': Yes, I have been checking all the copies of me that Volrath destroyed and the | + | '''Kanatash''': Yes, I have been checking all the copies of me that Volrath destroyed and the origional was not among them. He's not on the ship either. |
'''Kithle''': That's bad isn't it. | '''Kithle''': That's bad isn't it. | ||
| − | '''Kanatash''': Ooooohhh yeah. If I know me | + | '''Kanatash''': Ooooohhh yeah. If I know me he's been asembling an army of cloans of epic proportions and he'll be back with that army about say... (a massive explosion comes from the deck) Now. |
| − | The entire crew | + | The entire crew asembles on the deck as litterally hundreds of thousands of Kanatashes float off it's side. |
'''Jarlot''': Anyone got a plan here? | '''Jarlot''': Anyone got a plan here? | ||
| − | '''Kanatash''': We need to eliminate the original. After he is dead | + | '''Kanatash''': We need to eliminate the original. After he is dead all the others should revert. However if you can kill as many copies as possible it should make it easier to kill the duplicate. |
| − | '''Jarlot''': Well | + | '''Jarlot''': Well you heard the sociopathic crime against nature. ATTACK! |
| − | A battle of massive proportions | + | A battle of massive proportions comences with Kithle and Sa'vor unleashing magical and psionc strikes that destroy swaths of foes. Andrea comands her legions of undead out. Volrath sends forth the remainder of his aberration army. Terra summons forth various creatures to hold back the copies. Satnak is going on a killing spree with her arm while Norbaz uses the last of his chille to vaporize swaths of copies. Lisa and the other goody-goody crew members blast the copies with holy power and any copy approaching within ten feet of Aerith spontaneously combust from the sheer happyness she exudes. Despite all this Kanatashes are simply too many. The crew has been weakend from all the recent confilict and they are slowly being driven back. |
| − | '''Sa'vor''': If anyone has some bright ideas | + | '''Sa'vor''': If anyone has some bright ideas now would be a good time! |
| − | ''' | + | '''Kelter''': Well, I guess it's time to unleash my secret weapon. (reveals a small red button hidden in the butt of his crossbow.) ALL UNITS MOVE OUT! |
A small army stormtroopers, yes those stormtroopers, spills out onto the deck and they being firing upon the masses of clopies. | A small army stormtroopers, yes those stormtroopers, spills out onto the deck and they being firing upon the masses of clopies. | ||
| − | '''Kanatash''': (looking at the army of stormtroopers) If we survive this | + | '''Kanatash''': (looking at the army of stormtroopers) If we survive this I promise to see you suffer indescribable pain for this. |
| − | ''' | + | '''Kelter''': (chuckles) Begun this cloan war has. |
| − | '''Doog''': | + | '''Doog''': Thats nice yoda. Now grab a crossbow and keep shooting. |
| − | The battle continues with the crew now making slow progress. Suddenly | + | The battle continues with the crew now making slow progress. Suddenly however a single Kanatash seperates himself from the mass. He practically glows with power and as he spreads his arms above his head a globe of absolute darkness begins to grow above him. |
| − | '''Kanatash''': Thats him! The | + | '''Kanatash''': Thats him! The origional duplicate! If he can strike this ship with that sphere he will bring about the end of the universe! |
The entire crew follows up with a volley of their most powerful attacks but as they approch they are simply drawn into the globe and absorbed. | The entire crew follows up with a volley of their most powerful attacks but as they approch they are simply drawn into the globe and absorbed. | ||
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'''Kanatash''': Leave him to me. | '''Kanatash''': Leave him to me. | ||
| − | Kanatash darts towards the duplicate, clearing a swath of copies in his wake. The two engage each other in a flurry of martial and mental attacks that defies words. Neither seems to be gaining an advantage and the sphere has begun to drift in the direction of the ship. Finaly Kanatash manages to grapple his duplicate and hold him in place in | + | Kanatash darts towards the duplicate, clearing a swath of copies in his wake. The two engage each other in a flurry of martial and mental attacks that defies words. Neither seems to be gaining an advantage and the sphere has begun to drift in the direction of the ship. Finaly Kanatash manages to grapple his duplicate and hold him in place in mid air as the sphere is about to reach the ship. |
'''Kanatash''': John! Bigby's crushing tatical nuke NOW! Target me! | '''Kanatash''': John! Bigby's crushing tatical nuke NOW! Target me! | ||
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'''Kanatash''': DO IT!!! | '''Kanatash''': DO IT!!! | ||
| − | The nuclear blast engulfs Kanatash and a shockwave rocks the entire ship. Suddenly the sphere of blackness winks out as if it were never there. All the Kanatash copies also return to their original form. Unfortunately most of them were floating off the deck of the | + | The nuclear blast engulfs Kanatash and a shockwave rocks the entire ship. Suddenly the sphere of blackness winks out as if it were never there. All the Kanatash copies also return to their original form. Unfortunately most of them were floating off the deck of the forgotten freedom and they have just enough time to recognize their freedom before they are liquified by their impact with the ground. |
'''Aerith''': Oh wow. That was really noble of him. He sacraficed himself to save us all. | '''Aerith''': Oh wow. That was really noble of him. He sacraficed himself to save us all. | ||
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| − | '''Dol Dorn''': Oh hell... the Forgotten Freedom saved the world. | + | '''Dol Dorn''': Oh hell....the Forgotten Freedom saved the world. |
| − | '''Arawai''': Oh no... you know what that means.... | + | '''Arawai''': Oh no...you know what that means.... |
'''Dol Dorn''': Yes... | '''Dol Dorn''': Yes... | ||
| − | '''Dol Arrah''': They're automatically getting a pass on all previous sinful behavior... | + | '''Dol Arrah''': They're automatically getting a pass on all previous sinful behavior.... |
'''Kol Korn''': That COMPLETELY throws the kharmic balance out of whack.... | '''Kol Korn''': That COMPLETELY throws the kharmic balance out of whack.... | ||
| − | '''Dol Dorn''': I guess this means | + | '''Dol Dorn''': I guess this means Lisas off the hook from the Silver Flame.... |
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| − | Norbaz stands quietly in the kitchen over his | + | Norbaz stands quietly in the kitchen over his cutty board. Below are various vegetables he is slowly and methodicall cutting. |
| − | How did she know. And why are her words still echoing in my head. Its as if she automatically assumed I was the raping and pillaging type, and that it was special of me to do what I did... No... no that's not it at all. I just, I'm just a professional. I'm paid to kill and that's all. I just happen to keep a personal code of honor. I don't ask any of the | + | How did she know. And why are her words still echoing in my head. Its as if she automatically assumed I was the raping and pillaging type, and that it was special of me to do what I did...No...no that's not it at all. I just, I'm just a professional. I'm paid to kill and that's all. I just happen to keep a personal code of honor. I don't ask any of the other's to conform to it as much as they would have me conform to their own...but. |
Damn it. She saw right through me. | Damn it. She saw right through me. | ||
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'''Michael''': Oh yeah... | '''Michael''': Oh yeah... | ||
| − | Michael has gone all out. He is decked out in full platemail and helmet, both colored black, and carries a dual-handed longsword surrounded by a dark glow. Terra remains in her usual robes, carrying only her Treebrother | + | Michael has gone all out. He is decked out in full platemail and helmet, both colored black, and carries a dual-handed longsword surrounded by a dark glow. Terra remains in her usual robes, carrying only her Treebrother stalf, also glowing magically. |
The crew stands on a small hill overlooking the plain. Terra and Michael ready themselves below as Tabitha prepares to start the match. | The crew stands on a small hill overlooking the plain. Terra and Michael ready themselves below as Tabitha prepares to start the match. | ||
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'''Terra''': (smirking as she mockingly licks the wound) It's about time you hit me. | '''Terra''': (smirking as she mockingly licks the wound) It's about time you hit me. | ||
| − | The battle continues to rage in this manner for over an hour, with neither side gaining the upper hand. After several lucky strikes by Michael, Terra had been forced to use a few Cure Moderate Wounds on the run. By this time, Michael's armor is quite dented, making it more difficult for him to move. Terra had also managed to | + | The battle continues to rage in this manner for over an hour, with neither side gaining the upper hand. After several lucky strikes by Michael, Terra had been forced to use a few Cure Moderate Wounds on the run. By this time, Michael's armor is quite dented, making it more difficult for him to move. Terra had also managed to knocked off his helmet about halfway through. |
'''Kithle''': Most intriguing... | '''Kithle''': Most intriguing... | ||
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'''Kithle''': You're only counting damage. Look at the ground beneath them. | '''Kithle''': You're only counting damage. Look at the ground beneath them. | ||
| − | Jarlot notices that several lines have appeared since the start of battle. Deep foot prints, gouges in the ground from Michael's misses, and Terra scraping the damp ground with her | + | Jarlot notices that several lines have appeared since the start of battle. Deep foot prints, gouges in the ground from Michael's misses, and Terra scraping the damp ground with her stalf as she moved have come together to form a nearly complete symbol. |
'''Jarlot''': What is that? | '''Jarlot''': What is that? | ||
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'''Jarlot''': How can you possibly tell all this? | '''Jarlot''': How can you possibly tell all this? | ||
| − | '''Sa'vor''': I spent 20 years on the outer planes. Picking up stuff like this is | + | '''Sa'vor''': I spent 20 years on the outer planes. Picking up stuff like this is childs play. |
'''Jarlot''': ...remind me never to **** either of you off. | '''Jarlot''': ...remind me never to **** either of you off. | ||
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Sa'vor looks at Jarlot oddly. | Sa'vor looks at Jarlot oddly. | ||
| − | '''Jarlot''': Er... for more than one reason. | + | '''Jarlot''': Er...for more than one reason. |
| − | With a swing, Michael finally succeeds in knocking Terra's | + | With a swing, Michael finally succeeds in knocking Terra's stalf away. She dodges the following upward slash with a backflip, landing on her hands and then flipping again. She lands on her feet further away, only to fall to her knees, apparently out of exhaustion. |
'''Kithle''': And thus, the trap is set. | '''Kithle''': And thus, the trap is set. | ||
| − | Before he can ask, Jarlot's attention is drawn back to the fight as Michael goes for the coup de | + | Before he can ask, Jarlot's attention is drawn back to the fight as Michael goes for the coup de gras. |
'''Sa'vor''': (smiling) I almost feel sorry for him. | '''Sa'vor''': (smiling) I almost feel sorry for him. | ||
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| − | '''Jarlot''': Ah Lisa, | + | '''Jarlot''': Ah Lisa, its a sad, sad, sad, day that you'll be leaving us. |
(has already packed all of her stuff for her) | (has already packed all of her stuff for her) | ||
| − | '''Lisa''': FINALLY! At last | + | '''Lisa''': FINALLY! At last recalled to the Church of the Silver Flame by Pontiff Jaela! |
| − | '''Jarlot''': Yes, don't let the door hit you on the way out. After all we have another holier than | + | '''Jarlot''': Yes, don't let the door hit you on the way out. After all we have another holier than though replacement for you in Aerith |
'''Lisa''': You do realize I intend to come after you. | '''Lisa''': You do realize I intend to come after you. | ||
| − | '''Jarlot''': I'm sure I'm quaking in my boots after having faced a million | + | '''Jarlot''': I'm sure I'm quaking in my boots after having faced a million Kanatashs, flying through Xoriat, and living next to a horrible monstrouscity. |
'''Cool Cthulhu''': Hmmm? | '''Cool Cthulhu''': Hmmm? | ||
| − | '''Aerith''': Well my mission is done. I guess | + | '''Aerith''': Well my mission is done. I guess its time to go as well. |
'''Jarlot''': OH HELLLLLLL NO! | '''Jarlot''': OH HELLLLLLL NO! | ||
| − | '''Aerith''': I'm sorry | + | '''Aerith''': I'm sorry Captain but I was here on the Orders of Pontiff Jaela to go help Lisa overcome her awful circumstances in order to rejoin with the Church of the Silver Flame. |
| − | '''Lisa''': free... free... free... MUHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHA. | + | '''Lisa''': free...free...free...MUHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHA. |
'''Jarlot''': | '''Jarlot''': | ||
| − | '''Aerith''': I want you to know that I've baked some cookies for your crew though... with a pharmacy of Prozac though plus also mended all of your | + | '''Aerith''': I want you to know that I've baked some cookies for your crew though....with a pharmacy of Prozac though plus also mended all of your Red Shirts pain and suffering. Plus I want to give you this Cherry Snapple Case of Healing for your time with me. |
(she handed over the case then to Jarlot) | (she handed over the case then to Jarlot) | ||
| − | '''Jarlot''': But... but... I want.... you... here... | + | '''Jarlot''': But...but...I want....you...here... |
| − | '''Aerith''': I know that I will miss one crew member | + | '''Aerith''': I know that I will miss one crew member moe than anyone else I've ever met this is true...Oooohhhh... |
| − | '''Jarlot''': Oh Aerith | + | '''Jarlot''': Oh Aerith I... |
(Aerith snuggles Cool Cthulhu) | (Aerith snuggles Cool Cthulhu) | ||
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'''Jarlot''': ... | '''Jarlot''': ... | ||
| − | '''Lisa''': I'm sure he's fine | + | '''Lisa''': I'm sure he's fine Lisa. There's no problem I'm sure. |
'''Jarlot''': ... | '''Jarlot''': ... | ||
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'''Jarlot''': No thank you. I don't think I'm in the mood to drink anymore. | '''Jarlot''': No thank you. I don't think I'm in the mood to drink anymore. | ||
| − | '''Ketler''': Oh... hell. | + | '''Ketler''': Oh...hell. |
| − | '''Jarlot''': No... I... other things to think on. | + | '''Jarlot''': No...I...other things to think on. |
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| − | '''Kithle''': Godsdamnit | + | '''Kithle''': Godsdamnit do I ever get any peace. I can feel you bastards I know your up to something you twits. I'm a mortal human (originaly at least) psychic who sleeps and dreams. I can freaking hear you. LEAVE MY HOME ALONE YOU TWITS OR I'LL TEACH SATNAK HOW TO TRAVEL TO YOUR REALM FOR REAL INSTEAD OF JUST DREAM STATE. |
'''Satnak''': Huh? tired... need chili... *GLARE* | '''Satnak''': Huh? tired... need chili... *GLARE* | ||
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Phollie, Smig, Klaz, Vrin, and Ninja Jaela are showing Silence around their abode. It's basically part of the cargo hold that the group of them have curtained off into little rooms. | Phollie, Smig, Klaz, Vrin, and Ninja Jaela are showing Silence around their abode. It's basically part of the cargo hold that the group of them have curtained off into little rooms. | ||
| − | '''Vrin''': Yeah, Jarlot kicked us out of our rooms because, well | + | '''Vrin''': Yeah, Jarlot kicked us out of our rooms because, well more dangerous people wanted them pretty much... |
'''Silence''': OMG! That so suxxorz! Authority is teh lozerz... | '''Silence''': OMG! That so suxxorz! Authority is teh lozerz... | ||
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'''Phollie''': ANYWAY, moving on. Hoybee, Devon, Chalky, Ketler, and Ajihazi still have their rooms for various reasons. | '''Phollie''': ANYWAY, moving on. Hoybee, Devon, Chalky, Ketler, and Ajihazi still have their rooms for various reasons. | ||
| − | '''Silence''': Uh... why? I mean | + | '''Silence''': Uh... why? I mean you've gotten more screen time than Ajihazi has in the last couple of pages... |
'''Klaz''': Well, Ajihazi has the potential to take down Kanatash, so Jarlot keeps him around for insurance, Devon's room is too emo for anyone else to live in, entering Hoybee's room is just plain dangerous; I mean, he uses Devon's poetry for his spell book, and well mate, Chalky's room is just plain disgusting. | '''Klaz''': Well, Ajihazi has the potential to take down Kanatash, so Jarlot keeps him around for insurance, Devon's room is too emo for anyone else to live in, entering Hoybee's room is just plain dangerous; I mean, he uses Devon's poetry for his spell book, and well mate, Chalky's room is just plain disgusting. | ||
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'''Vrin''': So pretty much we play poker, generally of the strip variety because we have no money, and keep our heads down so they don't get chopped off. | '''Vrin''': So pretty much we play poker, generally of the strip variety because we have no money, and keep our heads down so they don't get chopped off. | ||
| − | '''Klaz''': No, it's more a long the lines that he has no money, so he can only play in the occasional strip poker game. Look missy, he's possibly the worst poker player that the world has ever been graced with, and he has the worst luck besides poor | + | '''Klaz''': No, it's more a long the lines that he has no money, so he can only play in the occasional strip poker game. Look missy, he's possibly the worst poker player that the world has ever been graced with, and he has the worst luck besides poor Shiela over here *winks at Lucky d'Medani, who rolls her eyes*. |
'''Lucky''': Thank you sooo much, Klaz | '''Lucky''': Thank you sooo much, Klaz | ||
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'''Phollie''': Yeah, and I have my alchemy lab in the corner, and the awakened toilet's grave is over there. Doog killed it for talking back at him. | '''Phollie''': Yeah, and I have my alchemy lab in the corner, and the awakened toilet's grave is over there. Doog killed it for talking back at him. | ||
| − | '''Silence''': So, let me get this straight, basically you're disenfranchised, living in a | + | '''Silence''': So, let me get this straight, basically you're disenfranchised, living in a shanty town, below the poverty line, discriminated against, and like, completely quiet about it ?! OMG, it's pathetic! Why don't you leave? |
'''Klaz''': Most of us have at some point or another, Smig, V, Myself and Ajihazi tried the whole adventurer on our own, failed miserably and headed back. I don't think that Trolanport wil ever forgive us for that loose lightning monolith... | '''Klaz''': Most of us have at some point or another, Smig, V, Myself and Ajihazi tried the whole adventurer on our own, failed miserably and headed back. I don't think that Trolanport wil ever forgive us for that loose lightning monolith... | ||
