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(Sa'vor stands staring over the deck, Terra and Lisa stand next to him. Slip is somewhere in the shadows)  
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(Sa'vor stands staring over the deck, Terra and lisa stand next to him. Slip is somewhere in the shadows)  
  
'''Lisa''': Well, it looks like you slitting that old guy's throat in his sleep has been redeemed.  
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'''Lisa''': Well, it looks like you slitting that old guys throat in his sleep has been redeemed.  
  
 
'''Sa'vor''': Indeed  
 
'''Sa'vor''': Indeed  
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'''Terra''': Yes
 
'''Terra''': Yes
  
'''Lisa''': So that means you're good now...
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'''Lisa''': So that means your good now...
  
 
'''Sa'vor''': Oh Khyber
 
'''Sa'vor''': Oh Khyber
  
(Suddely theres a bright flash of white light that engulfs Sa'vor. it clears, and before them stands Sa'vor once again, but he's changed drastically. now he stands in robes of pure white, his colourless eyes emit a feeling of serenity and peacefulness. the armour slightly visible beneath the robes has changed as well. instead of being black and jagged its transferred to being silver and elegeant with gold details, the ruby that once marked its chest has vanished replaced with a shimmering diamond. his torque now bears two Sapphires instead of rubies. dangling form his belt is a glowing silver holy symbol. the runes on his armour and skin have changed becoming Irial runes.)  
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(Suddely theres a bright flash of white light that engulfs Sa'vor. it clears, and before them stands sa'vor once again, but he's changed drasticly. now he stands in robes of pure white, his colourless eyes emit a feeling of serenity and peacefulness. the armour slightly visible beneath the robes has changed as well. instead of being black and jagged its transferred to being silver and elegeant with gold details, the ruby that once marked its chest has vanihsed replaced with a shimmering diamond. his torque now bears two Sapphires instead of rubies. dangling form his belt is a glowing silver holy symbol. the runes on his armour and skin have changed becoming Irial runes.)  
  
 
'''Terra''': Sa'vor?  
 
'''Terra''': Sa'vor?  
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'''Terra''': Can you change back?  
 
'''Terra''': Can you change back?  
  
'''Sa'vor''': (thinks a moment) I am afraid I do not want to, I am disgusted by the twisted and evil person I once was. Wielder of dark arts that frightened even the most experienced black magician. I'm still capable of wielding such weapons but only in pursuit of good.  
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'''Sa'vor''': (thinks a moment) I am afraid I do not want to, I am disgusted by the twisted and evil person I once was. Wielder of dark arts that frightened even the most experienced black magicain. I'm still capable of wielding such weapons but only in pursiuite of good.  
  
 
'''Lisa''': So your redeemed now?  
 
'''Lisa''': So your redeemed now?  
  
'''Sa'vor''': I am now redeemed, I follow the path of light and bear the mark of life. I must take my leave of you, I believe that there is much thinking I must do.  
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'''Sa'vor''': I am now redeemed, I follow the path of light and bear the mark of life. I must take my leave of you, I belive that there is much thinking I must do.  
  
'''Slip''': That was weird
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'''Slip''': That was wierd
  
 
'''Lisa''': Well... at least I'm not the only lawful good member of this ship now
 
'''Lisa''': Well... at least I'm not the only lawful good member of this ship now
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'''Terra''': Still, he could cause problems
 
'''Terra''': Still, he could cause problems
  
'''Slip''': I doubt it, he's was a violent murderer before, so now he's a pacifist.  
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'''Slip''': I doubt it, he's was a violent murderer before, so now he's a passifist.  
  
(In the back ground a redshirt bursts into laughter at seeing Sa'vor, reckoning that this pacifist is weak, he attacks. only to be knocked sprawled onto the floor from a blast of arcane energy)  
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(In the back ground a redshirt bursts into laughter at seeing Sa'vor, reckoning that this passifist is weak he attacks. only to be knocked sprawled onto the floor from a blast of arcane energy)  
  
 
'''Slip''': Then again...  
 
'''Slip''': Then again...  
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(Ten minutes later below deck, Sa'vor walks/stumbles across a large group of deamon worshippers, Sa'vor notes the human sacrifice they have perpared and raises a silver gauntleted hand. in it apears a mind blade of silver light.  
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(Ten minuets later below deck, Sa'vor walks stumbles across a large group of deamon worshippers, Sa'vor notes the human sacrifice they have perparred and raises a silver gauntleted hand. in it apears a mind blade of silver light.  
 
the cultists turn and see Sa'vor.)  
 
the cultists turn and see Sa'vor.)  
  
'''Cultist 1''': Yo, Sa'vor, want to help us sacrifice a human?  
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'''Cultist 1''': Yo, Sa'vor, whant to help us sacrifice a human?  
  
'''Cultist 2''': Wow, what's the matter with your clothes dude?  
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'''Cultist 2''': Wow, whats the matter with your clothes dude?  
  
'''Sa'vor''': Vile demon worshippers, lay down your weapons and repent  
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'''Sa'vor''': Vile deamon worshippers, lay down your weapons and repent  
  
'''Cultist 1''': You're joking right?  
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'''Cultist 1''': Your joking right?  
  
 
(Sa'vor prepares a ligthning bolt)  
 
(Sa'vor prepares a ligthning bolt)  
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'''Cultist 2''': I don't think he is  
 
'''Cultist 2''': I don't think he is  
  
(The lightning bolt turns cultist one to ash, cultist two gets ready to run but is too slow. he gets decapitated by a thrown mind blade. Sa'vor raises a holy symbol and the black and twisted ones of the cultists turn to dust. he frees the sacrifice and lets it free. He then utters a prayer for penance for killing)
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(The lightning bolt turns cultist one to ash, cultist two gets ready to run but is too slow. he gets decapitated by a thrown mind blade. Sa'vor raises a holy symbol and the black and twisted ones of the cultists turn to dust. he frees the sacrifice and lets it free. He then utters a prayr for pennance for killing)
  
  
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'''Norbaz''': Thanks for the wash-off Terra... OH SWEET KHYBER, THE LETTER!
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'''Norbaz''': Thanks for the wash off Terra...OH SWEET KHYBER, THE LETTER!
  
 
Norbaz runs off below deck leaving a dust trail after image of himself in his wake.
 
Norbaz runs off below deck leaving a dust trail after image of himself in his wake.
  
'''Terra''': That was... odd.
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'''Terra''': That was...odd.
  
 
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'''Jarlot''': I still give the Sword thing a 6.5. It just lacked... panache.
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'''Jarlot''': I still give the Sword thing a 6.5. It just lacked...panache.
  
 
'''Ketler''': You gave the finale to Angel a 6.5! There's no such thing as epic enough with you.
 
'''Ketler''': You gave the finale to Angel a 6.5! There's no such thing as epic enough with you.
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If we look deep within the magic of the binding swords (OOC: Severed of Souls? IC): we find the husk of what was once a proud Rakshasa Rajah, Sutekh, now seemingly stripped of all existential power and simply existing because it will one day be needed… for who knows what reason. There is no sign of Cheese.
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If we look deep within the magic of the binding swords (OOC: Severed of Souls? IC): we find the husk of what was once a proud Rakasha Rajah, Sutekh, now seemingly stripped of all existential power and simply existing because it will one day be needed…for who knows what reason. There is no sign of Cheese.
  
Yet if a threat of shadow is followed, followed through a plane made up of the base element of darkness, the infinite of non-existence, we find our mind's eye among a nebula of buzzing thoughts. We are in someone's mind at the very existential level. There are two blobs here, one small and black, another larger and silver.
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Yet if a threat of shadow is followed, followed through a plane made up of the base element of darkness, the infinite of non-existance, we find our mind's eye among a nebula of buzzing thoughts. We are in someone's mind at the very existential level. There are two blobs here, one small and black, another larger and silver.
  
 
'''Silver''': Well that didn't work very well.
 
'''Silver''': Well that didn't work very well.
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'''Black''': You just had to go into your "The world needs to be cleansed of evil" phase again?
 
'''Black''': You just had to go into your "The world needs to be cleansed of evil" phase again?
  
'''Silver''': I can't help it. You try listening to the prayers of millions of humans, and some dwarves, and a few elves, etc., for hundreds of years and listen to them whine on about how "The problem with today's generation…" or "In my day people didn't go around stealing from each other…" and not want to smack them upsdie the head and say "HELLO? Things have ALWAYS been this bad! Did I tell you to go purge all the lycanthropes? I think I merely suggested that lycanthropes were a problem, and that it could be solved with an application of extra-strength wolfbane?", and of course there's my rakshasa body going "Kill! Be Evil! Serve the cause of Pain and Suffering!", and this self-righteous bird-snake going "Kill the demons!" every time I try to suggest being nice to them so that maybe they'll see for a second that they're not all that different and that being Good HAS A FEW ADVANTAGES!
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'''Silver''': I can't help it. You try listening to the prayers of millions of humans, and some dwarves, and a few elves, etc., for hundreds of years and listen to them whine on about how "The problem with today's generation…" or "In my day people didn't go around stealing from each other…" and not want to smack them upsdie the head and say "HELLO? Things have ALWAYS been this bad! Did I tell to go purge all the lycanthropes? I think I merely suggested that lycanthropes were a problem, and that it could be solved with an application of extra-strength wolfbane?", and of course there's my rakasha body going "Kill! Be Evil! Serve the cause of Pain and Suffering!", and this self-rightious bird-snake going "Kill the demons!" every time I try to suggest being nice to them so that maybe they'll see for a second that they're not all that different and that being Good HAS A FEW ADVANTAGES!
  
 
'''Black''': No wonder you made Jaela so hot.
 
'''Black''': No wonder you made Jaela so hot.
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'''Kithle''': Rofl... Sa'vor... hahahahahaha... a good guy... hahahahahaha
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'''Kithle''': Rofl... Sa'vor...hahahahahaha...a good guy... hahahahahaha
  
 
'''Keal-thas''': I'm worried
 
'''Keal-thas''': I'm worried
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'''Kithle''': I'll fix it ... Now is the perfect time to eat his brain!!! *drools*
 
'''Kithle''': I'll fix it ... Now is the perfect time to eat his brain!!! *drools*
  
'''Keal-thas''': Sweet Macchiavelli that look means trouble.
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'''Keal-thas''': Sweet Machiavelli that look means trouble.
  
'''Kithle''': Ah, so you finished that outworld literature I snagged from Ketler.
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'''Kithle''': Ah so you finished that outworld literature I snagged from Ketler.
  
'''Keal-thas''': Most of us are, it's hard with only one copy of each though.
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'''Keal-thas''': Most of us are, its hard with only one copy of each though.
  
'''Kithle''': Yeah well my paycheck isn't big enough to bribe Ketler for extras, copy them down yourselves.
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'''Kithle''': Yeah well my paycheck isn't big enough to bribe ketler for extras, copy them down your selves.
  
  
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'''Black''': I still fail to see the problem.
 
'''Black''': I still fail to see the problem.
  
'''Silver''': Oh, wait, rewinding reality. Apparently he ripped apart some demon worshippers.
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'''Silver''': Oh, wait, rewinding realtiy. Apparently he ripped apart some demon worshippers.
  
 
'''BIG GIANT VOICE''': AND HE THINKS HE NEEDS TO BE GOOD TO DO THAT? WHAT'S THE POINT OF BEING GOOD IF YOU AREN'T GOING TO BE ALL HONORABLE? IT'S JUST NOT FUNNY! THAT'S WHAT I CAN'T STAND ABOUT MILITANT GOOD PEOPLE: THEY'RE SO WHINY ABOUT HOW GOOD IT IS NOT TO BE EVIL AND YET THEY GO AND BE EVIL WITHOUT FLINCHING!! OKAY, NOW WE HAVE A MAJOR PROBLEM.
 
'''BIG GIANT VOICE''': AND HE THINKS HE NEEDS TO BE GOOD TO DO THAT? WHAT'S THE POINT OF BEING GOOD IF YOU AREN'T GOING TO BE ALL HONORABLE? IT'S JUST NOT FUNNY! THAT'S WHAT I CAN'T STAND ABOUT MILITANT GOOD PEOPLE: THEY'RE SO WHINY ABOUT HOW GOOD IT IS NOT TO BE EVIL AND YET THEY GO AND BE EVIL WITHOUT FLINCHING!! OKAY, NOW WE HAVE A MAJOR PROBLEM.
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'''Silver''': And Sa'vor?
 
'''Silver''': And Sa'vor?
  
'''Black''': You know we can't touch him. He's controlled by another Entity of Existence.
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'''Black''': You know we can't touch him. He's controlled by another Entity of Existance.
  
 
'''Silver''': Oh, and I won the bet.
 
'''Silver''': Oh, and I won the bet.
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Volrath looks down on a list in his hand
 
Volrath looks down on a list in his hand
  
Thing I want to do before I become Daelkyr
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Thing I want to do before I become Dealkyr
  
 
1) (crossed off) Save the world.
 
1) (crossed off) Save the world.
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5) Hunt down Renal Drunhoon.
 
5) Hunt down Renal Drunhoon.
  
6) Torture him in every fashion possible, rinse, dry, repeat.
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6) Torture him in every fasion possible, rinse, dry, repeat.
  
 
7) Find the one who calls himself Bondjamesbond.
 
7) Find the one who calls himself Bondjamesbond.
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8) Get one last kiss from (name is smudged out)
 
8) Get one last kiss from (name is smudged out)
  
'''Volrath''' : Wow, haven't looked at this in awhile. Who was that person in number 8?
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'''Volrath''' : Wow haven't looked at this in awhile. Who was that person in number 8?
  
  
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'''Terra''': (muttering) Bastards...
 
'''Terra''': (muttering) Bastards...
  
'''Squishy''': As you can see, your suspicions were well-founded.
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'''Squishy''': As you can see, your suspicions were well founded.
  
 
'''Terra''': Looks like I'll have to pay them a visit...
 
'''Terra''': Looks like I'll have to pay them a visit...
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'''Terra''': That'll work, too.
 
'''Terra''': That'll work, too.
  
'''Kanatash''': Kithle, I would advise against sucking Sa'vor's brain. He is still a valuable asset to your Illithid empire. You should never wantonly destroy such a resource.
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'''Kanatash''': Kithle, I would advise against sucking Sa'vor's brain. He is still a valuable asset to you Illithid empire. You should never wantonly destroy such a resource.
  
 
'''Kithle''': I know, but I really wanted to. I've always wondered what a half-dragon/half-vampire/elf/whatever's brain would taste like.
 
'''Kithle''': I know, but I really wanted to. I've always wondered what a half-dragon/half-vampire/elf/whatever's brain would taste like.
  
'''Kanatash''': If it's that big of a deal I'm sure Ketler can rig something up with a cloning machine.
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'''Kanatash''': If it's that big of a deal I'm sure Kelter can rig something up with a cloaning machine.
  
 
'''Kithle''': Good point. I suppose this means we have to turn him evil again.
 
'''Kithle''': Good point. I suppose this means we have to turn him evil again.
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'''Terra''': I shouldn't be gone long, but if Sa'vor snaps before I get back, be sure to get footage of it.
 
'''Terra''': I shouldn't be gone long, but if Sa'vor snaps before I get back, be sure to get footage of it.
  
'''Kanatash''': Can do. I was planning on getting some anyway. I want to save the image of this goody two-shoes going all evil for posterity. And possibly blackmail.
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'''Kanatash''': Can do. I was planning on getting some anyway. I want to save the image of this goody twoshoes going all evil for posterity. And possibly blackmail.
  
'''Kithle''': Isn't that Norbaz's Schtick?
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'''Kithle''': Isn't that Norbaz's Schtik?
  
 
'''Kanatash''': Who do you think gave me the recorder?
 
'''Kanatash''': Who do you think gave me the recorder?
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'''Kithle''': I can't believe he didn't kill you on spot!!
 
'''Kithle''': I can't believe he didn't kill you on spot!!
  
'''Chalky''': I find that audacity and brutality can shock even the mightiest and most jaded of beings. Plus I really do want to try some paints with these, so I decided to stock while I have the chance. If he ever comes after I was trying to shock him back, okay.
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'''Chalky''': I find that audacity and brutality can shock even the migtiest and most jaded of beins. Plus i really do want to try some paints with these, so i decided to stock while I have the chance. If he ever comes after I was trying to shock him back, ok.
  
'''Kithle''': Okay, then I'll just take this faded patch.
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'''Kithle''': Ok, then I'll just take this faded patch.
  
 
'''Kanatash''': I'm never gonna let him live this down. That scene alone is worth a century or two at least.
 
'''Kanatash''': I'm never gonna let him live this down. That scene alone is worth a century or two at least.
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'''Kithle''': Now in exchange for getting the gold to rebuild the Cloning machine you gotta promise not to clone any crew with names after this, redshirts are okay, and no Jaelas. I will hurt you if I see so much as one extra Jaela.
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'''Kithle''': Now in exchange for getting the gold to rebuild the Cloning machine you gotta promise not to clone any crew with names after this, redshirts are ok, and no jealas. I will hurt you if I see so much as one extra jeala.
  
 
'''Ketler''': Yeah yeah, threats of fates worse than death.
 
'''Ketler''': Yeah yeah, threats of fates worse than death.
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'''Ketler''': Everybody's a critic.
 
'''Ketler''': Everybody's a critic.
  
An unsteady Sa'vor clone walks out of the billowing smoke and is promptly lobotomized.
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An unsteady Sa'vor clone walks out of the billowing smoke and is promptly labotomized.
  
 
'''Kithle''': My word that was exquisite.
 
'''Kithle''': My word that was exquisite.
  
'''Ketler''': This is not going to end well. No way this is not going to end in pain. My question is though how did you get Norbaz to pay for all this?
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'''Ketler''': This is not going to end well. No way this is not going to end in pain. My question is though how did you get norbaz to pay for all this?
  
'''Kithle''': I offered him the secret to an ingredient guaranteed to add at least 2 alarms to his Chili.  
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'''Kithle''': I offered him the secret to an ingredient garunteed to add at least 2 alarms to his Chili.  
  
'''Ketler''': (stares at corpse) I wish I could muster up some shock. At least it's only until this one runs out cloning a clone is asking for trouble and I doubt Sa'vor will stay like this too long.  
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'''Ketler''': (stares at corpse) I wish i could muster up some shock. At least its only until this one runs out cloning a clone is asking for trouble and I doubt Sa'vor will stay like this too long.  
  
'''Kithle''': Yeah that's why I'm gonna tell Satnak too.
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'''Kithle''': Yeah thats why I'm gonna tell Satnak too.
  
 
'''Ketler''': Ok now impressed. Kithle you bastard.
 
'''Ketler''': Ok now impressed. Kithle you bastard.
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'''Brain''': The same thing we do every night, Phollie. Try to convert Ninja Jaela………into PIRATE JAELA!
 
'''Brain''': The same thing we do every night, Phollie. Try to convert Ninja Jaela………into PIRATE JAELA!
  
'''Chorus''': They're Phollie… they're Phollie and the Brain, Brain, Brain, Brain, Brain, Brain, Brain, Brain, Brain, dodle-le-do-do—
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'''Chorus''': They're Phollie…they're Phollie and the Brain, Brain, Brain, Brain, Brain, Brain, Brain, Brain, Brain, dodle-le-do-do—
  
 
'''Phollie''': But we've never done that before.
 
'''Phollie''': But we've never done that before.
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(Its midnight, the Forgotten Freedom is still docked in Sharn ( mainly becausev no one can touch them and its funny to see how edgy the watch gets) a black cloaked figure walks up the gangplank and stands before Sa'vor)  
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(Its midnight, the Forgotten Freedom is still docked in sharn ( mainly becausev no one can touch them and its funny to see how edgy the watch gets) a black cloaked figure walks up the gang plank and stands before Sa'vor)  
  
 
'''Sa'vor''': Greetings traveller
 
'''Sa'vor''': Greetings traveller
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'''Sa'vor''': How did you find me? Its been at least thirty years since we last met,  
 
'''Sa'vor''': How did you find me? Its been at least thirty years since we last met,  
  
'''Tara''': Tt has, I tracked you down by using detect magic, such a huge source of magic can't hide for long. I'm disgusted you've joined the light side, after everything they did to you.
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'''Tara''': Tt has, I tracked you down by using detect magic, such a huge source of magic cant hide for long. I'm disgusted you've joined the light side, after everything they did to you.
  
 
'''Sa'vor''': All things can be forgiven
 
'''Sa'vor''': All things can be forgiven
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(A juvenile Sa'vor cowers as a mob of children pelt stones at him screaming  
 
(A juvenile Sa'vor cowers as a mob of children pelt stones at him screaming  
" Get the abomination", Sa'vor renembers the blood dripping from his face, the pure pain of their hatred)  
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" Get the abomination", Sa'vor renembers the blood dripping from his face, the pure pain of thier hatred)  
  
'''Sa'vor''': They were just children, children cannot understand that we are all equal inside  
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'''Sa'vor''': They where just children, children cannot understand that we are all equal inside  
  
 
'''Tara''': Well, what about this memory?  
 
'''Tara''': Well, what about this memory?  
  
(This time Sa'vors older, he starts to walk towards a village, an flaming silver arrow imbeds itself in his arm. he screams in agony and hits the floor writhing as its holy flames sear his tainted flesh. the same mob surrounds him and begins to beat him with sticks this time screaming  
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(This time Sa'vors older, he starts to walk towards a village, an flaming silver arrow imbeds itself in his arm. he screams in agony and hits the floor writhing as its holy flames sear his tainted flesh. the same mob surrounds him and beigins to beat him with sticks this time screaming  
" Weak, your tainted blood is weak" and " why don't you just end it, abomination?")  
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" Weak, you're tainted blood is weak" and " why dont you just end it abomination?")  
  
'''Sa'vor''': (Brushes a hand across the scar) Sometimes people are blinded by their faith  
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'''Sa'vor''': (Brushes a hand across the scar) Sometimes people are blinded by thier faith  
  
 
Tara: Well, what about these memories passed down from our family line?
 
Tara: Well, what about these memories passed down from our family line?
  
(This image is older, seen through the eyes of a child being led away, dragons and elves attack and slaughter the members of house D'Vol. a lithe ranger is torn apart by dragon claws. mages are immolated by flame breath, beneath the childs feet lie the twisted and tortured bodies of the house D'Vol guards, some with flesh burned by acid. some just crumbling skeletons. before the child's eyes a guard is decapitated by an elven scimitar, the child sees her mother cut down and hacked apart by curved blades before she and a few others are teleported away.)  
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(This image is older, seen through the eyes of a child being led away, dragons and elves attack and slaughter the members of house d'vol. a lithe ranger is torn apart by dragon claws. mages are immolated by flame breath, beneath the childs feet lie the twisted and tourtured bodies of the house d'vol guards, some with flesh burned by acid. some just crumbeling skeletons. before the childs eyes a gaurd is decapitated by an elven scimitar, the child see's her mother cut down and hacked apart by curved blades before she and a few others are teleported away.)  
  
'''Sa'vor''': (Just catching on to the fact Tara's there) Wait... I saw you die, thirty years ago, in this very city. you and the rest of my family were cut down by paladins. I saw it. I saw the bloodshed, you were innocent, they were innocent. They where after me.  
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'''Sa'vor''': (Just catching on to the fact Tara's there) Wait... i saw you die, thirty years ago, in this very city. you and the rest of my family where cut down by paladins. I saw it. I saw the blood shed, you where innocent, they where innocent. They where after me.  
  
'''Tara''': And we told them nothing, you are of our blood, you are part dragon, like us.  
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'''Tara''': And we told them nothing, you are of our blood, you are part dragon like us.  
  
 
'''Sa'vor''': How could paladins do that to innocent people? How can anyone justify slaughtering innocents for their bloodline. Killing twisted murderers is one thing, they broke the laws and are not protected by them. They deserve to be sent to death.  
 
'''Sa'vor''': How could paladins do that to innocent people? How can anyone justify slaughtering innocents for their bloodline. Killing twisted murderers is one thing, they broke the laws and are not protected by them. They deserve to be sent to death.  
  
'''Tara''': You've been blinded by your alingment change, you believe there's good in everyone. there isn't, there's only death and pain and darkness. you may feel contented, you may feel calm, but you don't see the suffering anymore, you dont see what good ruling the world has done.  
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'''Tara''': You've been blinded by your alingment change, you belive theres good in everyone. there isnt, theres only death and pain and darkness. you may feel contented, you may feel calm, but you dont see the suffering anymore, you dont see what good ruleing the world has done.  
  
'''Sa'vor''': It's true, I don't see  
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'''Sa'vor''': Its true, I don't see  
  
 
'''Tara''': Are you happy as one of white?  
 
'''Tara''': Are you happy as one of white?  
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'''Sa'vor''': I feel slightly happy....
 
'''Sa'vor''': I feel slightly happy....
  
'''Tara''': Do you feel the ecstasy of magic you used to?  
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'''Tara''': Do you feel the extasy of magic you used to?  
  
 
'''Sa'vor''': I...
 
'''Sa'vor''': I...
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'''Tara''': Do you?  
 
'''Tara''': Do you?  
  
'''Sa'vor''': No, I don't, there is not joy in my magic. The only joy I ever felt... it's gone  
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'''Sa'vor''': No, I don't, there is not joy in my magic. The only joy I ever felt.. its gone  
  
 
'''Tara''': And what is it traded for?  
 
'''Tara''': And what is it traded for?  
  
'''Sa'vor''': Calm and serenity, which I could have gained as one of the dark.  
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'''Sa'vor''': Calm and serenity, which I could of gained as one of the dark.  
  
'''Tara''': Remember my death? Remember the tortured screams of the last of the Vol line? Your brethren?  
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'''Tara''': Remember my death? Remember the torutured screams of the last of the Vol line? Your breatherin?  
  
'''Sa'vor''': I do.
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'''Sa'vor''': I do
  
 
'''Tara''': Do you renember the taste of blood ?  
 
'''Tara''': Do you renember the taste of blood ?  
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'''Tara''': Then all is as it should.  
 
'''Tara''': Then all is as it should.  
  
(Theres a sudden sphere of darkenss that consumes Sa'vor, when he reappears, his robes are gone, his armour returns. a black hood covers his face, his colourless eyes stare out with no compassion once more)  
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(Theres a sudden sphere of darkenss that consumes Sa'vor, when he reappears, his robes are gone, his armour returns. a black hood coveres his face, his colourless eyes stare out with no compassion once more)  
  
 
'''Sa'vor''': I'm back...  
 
'''Sa'vor''': I'm back...  
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'''Tara''': How does it feel?  
 
'''Tara''': How does it feel?  
  
'''Sa'vor''': I feel.. the pure hunger for knowledge and power, I feel the thirst for blood. I feel the hatred and the bloodlust, I feel the ecstasy of magic flowing through my viens.  
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'''Sa'vor''': I feel.. the pure hunger for knowlege and power, I feel the thirst for blood. I feel the hatred and the blood lust, I feel the exctasy of magic flowing through my viens.  
  
 
'''Tara''': Then all is as it should be
 
'''Tara''': Then all is as it should be
  
'''Sa'vor''': What's the real reason you found me, Tara?  
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'''Sa'vor''': Whats the real reason you found me tara?  
  
 
'''Tara''': I discovered that someone raised Dra'vos, he's training himself to destroy you.  
 
'''Tara''': I discovered that someone raised Dra'vos, he's training himself to destroy you.  
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'''Sa'vor''': Whom raised him?  
 
'''Sa'vor''': Whom raised him?  
  
'''Tara''': Errandis D'vol, our old relative.  
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'''Tara''': Erandis D'vol, our old relative.  
  
 
'''Sa'vor''': how did you survive the attack?  
 
'''Sa'vor''': how did you survive the attack?  
  
'''Tara''': When they killed me it was an image they killed, my real self was on Mabar, where I contracted vampirism like you did. then I returned here after about ten years on Mabar, i've been searching for the magical vaults the whole time. I found them, just before you did, and embraced their knowlege. then I began to search for you
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'''Tara''': When they killed me it was an image they killed, my real self was on mabar, where i contracted vampirism like you did. then i returned here after about ten years on mabar, i've been searching for the magical vaults the whole time. i found them, just before you did, and embraced thier knowlege. then i began to search for you
  
'''Sa'vor''': It seems you've found me, what's your objective now?  
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'''Sa'vor''': It seems you've found me, whats your objective now?  
  
 
'''Tara''': To bring about this empire you dreamed of, to help you build this army  
 
'''Tara''': To bring about this empire you dreamed of, to help you build this army  
  
'''Sa'vor''': Yes, now that you're with us, nothing will stop our rise ....  
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'''Sa'vor''': Yes, know your with us, nothing will stop our rise ....  
  
 
'''Tara''': Don't be so sure  
 
'''Tara''': Don't be so sure  
  
Sa'vor: I know, I know. that's just the kind of traditional thing you say
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Sa'vor: I know, I know. thats just the kind of traditional thing you say
  
  
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A look of terror consumes him and he bolts for the door. Before he gets there, Terra slams against the wall with a blast of Psionic energy.
 
A look of terror consumes him and he bolts for the door. Before he gets there, Terra slams against the wall with a blast of Psionic energy.
  
'''Greg''': (now pinned against the wall) Ugh... h-how are you...
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'''Greg''': (now pinned against the wall) Ugh...h-how are you...
  
 
'''Terra''': I have gained a great deal more power during my absence. Though it isn't entirely necessary to deal with the likes of you, it makes it that much more fun.
 
'''Terra''': I have gained a great deal more power during my absence. Though it isn't entirely necessary to deal with the likes of you, it makes it that much more fun.
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'''Projection of Kithle''': I wonder how Sa'vor is going to react when he finds out about me eating a clone of his brain, especially the part where it gave me a big chunk of his powers.
 
'''Projection of Kithle''': I wonder how Sa'vor is going to react when he finds out about me eating a clone of his brain, especially the part where it gave me a big chunk of his powers.
  
'''Terra''': He's not going to be happy, at the same time there's not much he can do about it at this point.
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'''Terra''': He's not going to be happy, at the same time theres not much he can do about it at this point.
  
'''Projection of Kithle''': Remind me to Satnak exorcise S/S somethings messing with him.
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'''Projection of Kithle''': Remind me to satnak exorcise S/S somethings messing with him.
  
'''Terra''': I really wish people would stop trying to possess the crew. It never ends well, for them. Plus it shows a lack of creativity at this point.
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'''Terra''': I really wish people would stop trying to posses the crew it never ends well, for them. Plus it shows a lack of creativity at this point.
  
'''Projection of Kithle''': Satnak's gotten enough practice recently, she actually does more than suppress the possessing entity, she can actually draw them out and consume them.
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'''Projection of Kithle''': Satnaks gotten enough practice recently she actually do more than suppress the possesing entity, she can actually draw them out and consume them.
  
 
'''Terra''': About done here.
 
'''Terra''': About done here.
  
'''Projection of Kithle''': Oooooh great, now about that tour.
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'''Projection of Kithle''': Oooooh great, nowabout that tour.
  
  
 
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(A gang of twenty redshirts walk through the corridors, safe in the knowlege that Sa'vor is no longer hunting them and that nameless terrors do not attack people in large groups, at the back is Jimmy, a friendly sort of redshirt. completely harmless. but unfortunatly. he's at the back. and everyone knows what happens to people traveling at the back. the darkness reaches out and grabs Jimmy, his tortured screams echo throughout the ship.)  
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(A gang of twenty redshirts walk through the corridors, safe in the knowlege that Sa'vor is no longer hunting them and that namless terrors do not attack people in large groups, at the back is jimmy, a friendly sort of redshirt. completly harmless. but unfortunatly. he's at the back. and everyone knows what happens to people travelling at the back. the darkness reaches out and grabs jimmy, his tourtured screams echo throughout the ship.)  
  
'''redshirt bob''': what the?  
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'''red-shirt bob''': what the?  
  
'''Redshirt 112''': where's Jimmy?  
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'''Redshirt 112''': wheres jimmy?  
  
 
'''Nameless redshirt''': he was here a second ago
 
'''Nameless redshirt''': he was here a second ago
  
(Something moves, and all the redshirts draw weapons)  
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(Somthing moves, and all the red-shirts draw weapons)  
  
'''Redshirt JJ''': what was that?  
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'''Red-shirt JJ''': what was that?  
  
'''Redshirt bob''': it.. it could have been somthing nameless and horrible... you know .. about to tear our souls from our bodies  
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'''Red-shirt bob''': it.. it could of been somthing nameless and horrible.. you know .. about to tear our souls from our bodies  
  
'''Redshirt 122''': you had to say that, didn't you! you couldn't you just keep your mouth shut!  
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'''Red shirt 122''': you had to say that didnt you! you couldnt just keep your mouth shut!  
  
'''Nameless redshirt''': let's just keep moving  
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'''Nameless red-shirt''': lets just keep moving  
  
(They continue to travel along the corridors, thier lanterns illuminate a huge pool of blood and a horrible mangled corpse. huge rents are in its armour, horrible wounds and gashes leak blood and enlarge the pool. the corpse's face is twisted into a terrible scream, the last scream of someone in horrible agony)  
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(They continue to travel along the corridors, thier lanterns illuminate a huge pool of blood and a horrible mangled corpse. huge wrents are in its armour, horrible wounds and gashes leak blood and enlarge the pool. the corpses face is twisted into a terrible scream, the last scream of someone in horrible agony)  
  
'''Redshirt Bob''': Oh Khyber ! it's Jimmy!  
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'''Red-shirt Bob''': Oh Kyber ! its Jimmy!  
  
(He runs towards Jimmy, not noticing the fine silk like strand of piano wire across the corridor. he runs into it at full pelt. his throat slit by the fine wire and a spray of blood splattering the walls)  
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(He runs towards jimmy, not noticing the fine silk like strand of piano wire across the corridor. he runs into it at full pelt. his throat slit by the fine wire and a spray of blood splattering the walls)  
  
'''Redshirt 122''': HOLY ****!
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'''Red-shirt 122''': HOLY ****!
  
'''Nameless redshirt''': I think I'm going to be sick...  
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'''Nameless red-shirt''': i think im going to be sick...  
  
'''redshirt JJ''': guys, I think you should see this  
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'''red shirt JJ''': guys, i think you should see this  
  
(They shine the lanterns to reveal a message written in Jimmy's blood, the message reads " So many redshirts and so little time")  
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(They shine the lanterns to reveal a message written in jimmys blood, the message reads " So many redshirts and so little time")  
  
'''Redshirt 122''': this is not good  
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'''Red-shirt 122''': this is not good  
  
(The shadows move and redshirt 422 fires his crossbow, the shadows don't react and reach out for him. he screams in terror and vanishes. the red-shirts huddle together their crossbows primed)
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(The shadows move and redshirt 422 fires his crossbow, the shadows dont react and reach out for him. he screams in terror and vanishes. the red-shirts huddle together thier crossbows primed)
Nameless redshirt: (panicking) oh Khyber oh Khyber oh Khyber, we're gonna die. WERE GONNA DIE! ( he sprints off back the way they came, the shadows pulse around him, he screams and the redshirts watch the bloody and violent death he suffers. his mangled corpse is thrown to the floor. other redshirts panic and run off into the darkness, only to be cut apart by the shadowy entity, blood now dripps from all the walls and corpses ( headless or otherwise) now litter the ground. all that's left is Redshirt 122 and Redshirt JJ. )  
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Nameless redshirt: (panicing) oh kyber oh kyber oh kyber, we're gonna die. WERE GONNA DIE! ( he sprints off back the way they came, the shadows pulse around him, he screams and the red-shirts watch the bloody and violent death he sufferes. his mangled corpse is thrown to the floor. other red-shirts panic and run off into the darkness, only to be cut apart by the shadowy entity, blood now dripps from all the walls and corpses ( headless or otherwise) now litter the ground. all thats left is Red-shirt 122 and Redshirt JJ. )  
  
'''Redshirt JJ''': look 122, there's something I want to tell you before I die  
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'''Redshirt JJ''': look 122, theres somthing i whant to tell you before i die  
  
 
'''Red-shirt 122''': yeah?  
 
'''Red-shirt 122''': yeah?  
  
'''Redshirt JJ''': 122, I've always hated you the most. and I hope when its fininished with my corpse that it spends extra long rending you limb from limb
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'''Redshirt JJ''': 122, i've always hated you the most. and i hope when its fininished with my corpse that it spends extra long rending you limb from limb
  
'''Red-shirt 122''': thanks, I'm sure I'll enjoy watching you die  
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'''Red-shirt 122''': thanks, im sure i'll enjoy watching you die  
  
(Redshirt 122, screams as a bolt of red light strikes him, he then explodes in a shower of gore and blood, a black armoured form steps from the shadows, a black hood covering his face. he stares down at the cowering form of Redshirt JJ. all JJ can see in the light of the lantern are two colourless eyes)  
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(Redshirt 122, screams as a bolt of red light strikes him, he then explodes in a shower of gore and blood, a back armoured form steps from the shadows, a black hood covering his face. he stares down at the cowering form of Redshirt JJ. all JJ can see in the light of the lantern are two colourless eyes)  
Sa'vor: I'm sparing your life, redshirt  
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Sa'vor: im sparing your life redshirt  
  
'''redshirt JJ''': why ? why don't you just kill me and get it over with?  
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'''redshirt JJ''': why ? why dont you just kill me and get it over with?  
  
'''Sa'vor''': now go, go and tell all the other redshirts what happened here. go tell them that I'm back, go tell them the horrible, horrible things I'm going to do to them before I drink them dry  
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'''Sa'vor''': now go, go and tell all the other red-shirts what happened here. go tell them that im back, go tell them the horrible horrible things im going to do to them before i drink them dry  
  
 
'''Redshirt JJ''': why?  
 
'''Redshirt JJ''': why?  
  
'''Sa'vor''': because then they'll try harder to get away, because then they have a chance of possibly ascending to crewhood. oh and because blood tastes better from someone who's afraid beyond belief. and I enjoy hunting difficult prey.  
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'''Sa'vor''': because then they'll try harder to get away, because then they have a chance of possibly accending to crewhood. oh and because blood tastes better from someone whos afraid beyond belife. and i enjoy hunting difficult prey.  
  
'''Redshirt JJ''': I'll go now
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'''Redshirt JJ''': i'll go now
  
(He runs off into the darkness, and behind him he hears the horrible maniacal laughter of Sa'vor. a sound that haunts him for the rest of his life. every night he remembers that laugh. and the horrible colourless eyes.)
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(He runs of into the darkness, and behind him he hears the horrible manical laughter of sa'vor. a sound that haunts him for the rest of his life. every night he renembers that laugh. and the horrible colourless eyes.)
  
Igor steps up behind Sa'vor, totally unnoticed. He surveys the bodies of the redshirts.
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Igor steps up behind Sa'vor totally unnoticed. He surveys the bodies of the redshirts.
  
 
'''Igor''': Thuperb, thir, if you don't mind my thaying.
 
'''Igor''': Thuperb, thir, if you don't mind my thaying.
  
'''Sa'vor''': Not at all, Igor. After all, you've worked for more people like me than anyone on Eberron. Even I like hearing how I compare to others… though I don't let it go to my head.
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'''Sa'vor''': Not at all, Igor. After all, you've worked for more people like me than anyone on Eberron. Even I like hearing how I compare to others…though i don't let it go to my head.
  
 
'''Igor''': That bit with the wire—
 
'''Igor''': That bit with the wire—
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'''Sa'vor''': Well, they can't all be traditional. I mean, traditions have to start somewhere.
 
'''Sa'vor''': Well, they can't all be traditional. I mean, traditions have to start somewhere.
  
'''Igor''': I remember for Mathter Haarghuul it was a thkeleton.
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'''Igor''': I remember for mathter Haarghuul it was a thkeleton.
  
 
'''Sa'vor''': What?
 
'''Sa'vor''': What?
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'''Igor''': The motht important quality in a villain ith alwayth the willingneth to meth with people'th mindth.
 
'''Igor''': The motht important quality in a villain ith alwayth the willingneth to meth with people'th mindth.
  
Sa'vor has a suddenly realization. It strikes him like Norbaz's chili strikes the stomach.
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Sa'vor has a suddenly realization. It strikes him like Norbaz's chilli strikes the stomach.
  
 
'''Sa'vor''': So that's why you work for Jarlot!
 
'''Sa'vor''': So that's why you work for Jarlot!

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