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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Nika smiled gently and closed her eyes. They stood there for a moment with her forehead against his lips. “No,” she replied softly, pulling away to look at him. “Thank ''you.'' This wasn’t what I meant when I said you needed downtime. But sometimes a moment’s respite is all we get to renew the spirit.” Her education showed through her vocabulary, despite her effort to hide it, and she saw something shift behind his eyes when he caught it.<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Nika smiled gently and closed her eyes. They stood there for a moment with her forehead against his lips. “No,” she replied softly, pulling away to look at him. “Thank ''you.'' This wasn’t what I meant when I said you needed downtime. But sometimes a moment’s respite is all we get to renew the spirit.” Her education showed through her vocabulary, despite her effort to hide it, and she saw something shift behind his eyes when he caught it.<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; “''Si Deus volo, cherie.''” He tilted her chin upward for one last kiss and stepped back. “You're right. It is.”<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; “''Si Deus volo, cherie.''” He tilted her chin upward for one last kiss and stepped back. “You're right. It is.”<br>
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Mike quit the shower and dried off briskly, donning his clothing and strapping his emotional armor back in place. “Respite,” she’d said. It was an apt word, and it never meant ‘forever.’ He didn’t waste Nika’s time with whispered trifles or promises both knew he couldn’t keep. Mike had learned long ago that war was a brutal business and had little room in it for sentiment. He simply checked to see if the coast was clear and left her the luxury of the shower and a quick exit, but her words stayed with him, lightening the burden of duty when he took it up again.
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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Mike quit the shower and dried off briskly, donning his clothing and strapping his emotional armor back in place. “Respite,” she’d said. It was an apt word, and it never meant ‘forever.’ He didn’t waste Nika’s time with whispered trifles or promises both knew he couldn’t keep. Mike had learned long ago that war was a brutal business and had little room in it for sentiment. He simply checked to see if the coast was clear and left her the luxury of the shower and a quick exit, but her words stayed with him, lightening the burden of duty when he took it up again.<br>
 
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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; “The package is on schedule.  Should get to you as planned,” Mike said, back in his cubby and winding up his report via secured ’wave to Winfield.<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; “The package is on schedule.  Should get to you as planned,” Mike said, back in his cubby and winding up his report via secured ’wave to Winfield.<br>

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