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<span style="color:#800000">'''I had originally written this as an RP opener but it didn't work out that way. Even so, it has some information on Rina's family that some might find useful in dealing with them while they are with us and I thought to include it here.--Maer</span> <br> <br>  
 
<span style="color:#800000">'''I had originally written this as an RP opener but it didn't work out that way. Even so, it has some information on Rina's family that some might find useful in dealing with them while they are with us and I thought to include it here.--Maer</span> <br> <br>  
 
 
 
 
Excerpt from ''Peripatetica'', by M. K. Sebastien, Engr. ret.<br><br><br>
 
  
  
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The next day dawned bright and I could put it off no longer: I had some shopping to do. I had to replace my coveralls and clothing ruined by the fight on Beaumonde and luckily for me, New Hyderabad’s spaceport had plenty of second- and third-hand shops for the economy-minded. Getting replacements for the lost clothing was a snap. Getting a replacement for my databook—stolen by would-be pirates on Ghost—proved a little harder. I needed a quality machine, not a knock-off, and it took a couple of hours of hunting before I found one. I paid cash and went straight to the cyber café near our ship that I’d seen on the way out. It was just before the midday rush and I was able to get a seat in the corner. I opened up my new databook and booted it up and hopped online. I had some surfing to do.  There was no chance of a secure line, so I left checking my clandestine contacts for later, but there were public sites I could browse that wouldn’t raise any red flags for anyone tracking my hits.<br><br>
 
The next day dawned bright and I could put it off no longer: I had some shopping to do. I had to replace my coveralls and clothing ruined by the fight on Beaumonde and luckily for me, New Hyderabad’s spaceport had plenty of second- and third-hand shops for the economy-minded. Getting replacements for the lost clothing was a snap. Getting a replacement for my databook—stolen by would-be pirates on Ghost—proved a little harder. I needed a quality machine, not a knock-off, and it took a couple of hours of hunting before I found one. I paid cash and went straight to the cyber café near our ship that I’d seen on the way out. It was just before the midday rush and I was able to get a seat in the corner. I opened up my new databook and booted it up and hopped online. I had some surfing to do.  There was no chance of a secure line, so I left checking my clandestine contacts for later, but there were public sites I could browse that wouldn’t raise any red flags for anyone tracking my hits.<br><br>
  
I looked up my mother’s upcoming performance schedule and saw that her circuit was taking her back toward Sihnon. I checked her repertoire and was pleasantly surprised. She’d chosen to sing the opening aria from Rimsky-Korsakov’s ''Kitezh''. I had always thought it suited her, showcasing her upper range as well as allowing her to add a mysterious undertone with her lower range. She’d included her favorite, Tatyana’s heartfelt letter from ''Eugene Onegin'', and the rest of the program was a carefully chosen selection of art songs. I spied one by Dvorak and the rest were by more recent Slavic composers who were unfamiliar to me. She looked rather well for a woman pushing her middle 60s, her face only just beginning to show signs of her exit from the Long Summer into the Golden Autumn years. There was a stunning shot of her lit by the footlights, her eyes closed, transported and transcendent, nothing but a conduit for the music pouring out of her. I hovered over the link to the soundfiles but resisted the urge to listen. The café was noisy with the clack and clatter of cup and saucer, the hiss of the espresso machines, and the liquid syllables of Urvasi’s native tongue. It was crowded, too, with people sitting tightly packed on the long benches. Despite all the times my mother and I had spent screaming at each other at the top of our lungs, her singing still had the power to make me ache for the sheer beauty of it and for something like this, I wanted a little more privacy. If it would reduce me to tears, I would rather it be somewhere no one else could see. <br><br>  
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I looked up my mother’s upcoming performance schedule and saw that her circuit was taking her back toward Sihnon. I checked her repertoire and was pleasantly surprised. She’d chosen to sing the opening aria from Rimsky-Korsakov’s Kitezh. I had always thought it suited her, showcasing her upper range as well as allowing her to add a mysterious undertone with her lower range. She’d included her favorite, Tatyana’s heartfelt letter from Eugene Onegin, and the rest of the program was a carefully chosen selection of art songs. I spied one by Dvorak and the rest were by more recent Slavic composers who were unfamiliar to me. She looked rather well for a woman pushing her middle 60s, her face only just beginning to show signs of her exit from the Long Summer into the Golden Autumn years. There was a stunning shot of her lit by the footlights, her eyes closed, transported and transcendent, nothing but a conduit for the music pouring out of her. I hovered over the link to the soundfiles but resisted the urge to listen. The café was noisy with the clack and clatter of cup and saucer, the hiss of the espresso machines, and the liquid syllables of Urvasi’s native tongue. It was crowded, too, with people sitting tightly packed on the long benches. Despite all the times my mother and I had spent screaming at each other at the top of our lungs, her singing still had the power to make me ache for the sheer beauty of it and for something like this, I wanted a little more privacy. If it would reduce me to tears, I would rather it be somewhere no one else could see. <br><br>  
  
 
I moved on to my father’s Cortex page. He was doing well, having just hosted his winter workshop opening. The review stated he’d sold out of his new instruments inside the hour. He’d decided on making the bigger bass balalaikas over the long winter months but promised everyone he’d return to the higher registers in time for the summer release. The picture on the screen showed him in his shirtsleeves and work apron, his glasses at half mast down his nose, painstakingly varnishing an instrument to bring out the grain of the wood. Behind him, the finished instruments gleamed from their ceiling and wall hooks. Another picture had him at the opening, decked out in a traditional Cossack tunic and trousers and boots, red and blue embroidery picked out at cuff and collar. He held a vodka glass aloft in a toast and looked as if he’d rather be back in his workshop. He disliked the limelight, unlike my mother who thrived on adulation from her fans.<br><br>
 
I moved on to my father’s Cortex page. He was doing well, having just hosted his winter workshop opening. The review stated he’d sold out of his new instruments inside the hour. He’d decided on making the bigger bass balalaikas over the long winter months but promised everyone he’d return to the higher registers in time for the summer release. The picture on the screen showed him in his shirtsleeves and work apron, his glasses at half mast down his nose, painstakingly varnishing an instrument to bring out the grain of the wood. Behind him, the finished instruments gleamed from their ceiling and wall hooks. Another picture had him at the opening, decked out in a traditional Cossack tunic and trousers and boots, red and blue embroidery picked out at cuff and collar. He held a vodka glass aloft in a toast and looked as if he’d rather be back in his workshop. He disliked the limelight, unlike my mother who thrived on adulation from her fans.<br><br>
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The noonday rush was well underway when I finally looked up. Some of the counter staff were surreptitiously eyeing my single cup of coffee and the relatively large piece of real estate I occupied during what had to be the busiest time of day. I left a platinum under my saucer to repay them for the covers I’d cost them, tucked my databook securely on my person, and left for home. <br><br>
 
The noonday rush was well underway when I finally looked up. Some of the counter staff were surreptitiously eyeing my single cup of coffee and the relatively large piece of real estate I occupied during what had to be the busiest time of day. I left a platinum under my saucer to repay them for the covers I’d cost them, tucked my databook securely on my person, and left for home. <br><br>
  
The streets were hopping with people grabbing a meal before scurrying back to work, and on Urvasi that was a lot of hopping and a lot of people. Like the country of their origin on Old Earth, Urvasi was heavily populated and living conditions in the cities were very crowded. It was not a place I’d recommend an agoraphobe to visit. The sheer press of bodies would have been too much for them. Of course, I didn’t find it a picnic, either, and it was with some relief I ducked into our berth and left the crush on the streets behind.  I shut the cargo ramp door on the noise and after the echo died out, I stood in the blessed silence to soak up the peace in the hold.<br><br>
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The streets were hopping with people grabbing a meal before scurrying back to work, and on Urvasi that was a lot of hopping and a lot of people. Like the country of their origin on Old Earth, Urvasi was heavily populated and living conditions in the cities were very crowded. It was not a place I’d recommend an agoraphobe to visit. The sheer press of bodies would have been too much for them. Of course, I didn’t find it a picnic, either, and it was with some relief I ducked into our berth and left the crush on the streets behind.  I shut the cargo ramp door on the noise and after the echo died out, I stood in the blessed silence and space to soak up the peace in the hold.<br><br>
  
 
''Go quietly amid the noise and the haste and remember what peace there may be in silence'' … <br><br>
 
''Go quietly amid the noise and the haste and remember what peace there may be in silence'' … <br><br>

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