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The noonday rush was well underway when I finally looked up. Some of the counter staff were surreptitiously eyeing my single cup of coffee and the relatively large piece of real estate I occupied during what had to be the busiest time of day. I left a platinum under my saucer to repay them for the covers I’d cost them, tucked my databook securely on my person, and left for home. <br><br>
 
The noonday rush was well underway when I finally looked up. Some of the counter staff were surreptitiously eyeing my single cup of coffee and the relatively large piece of real estate I occupied during what had to be the busiest time of day. I left a platinum under my saucer to repay them for the covers I’d cost them, tucked my databook securely on my person, and left for home. <br><br>
  
The streets were hopping with people grabbing a meal before scurrying back to work, and on Urvasi that was a lot of hopping and a lot of people. Like the country of their origin on Old Earth, Urvasi was heavily populated and living conditions in the cities were very crowded. It was not a place I’d recommend an agoraphobe to visit. The sheer press of bodies would have been too much for them. Of course, I didn’t find it a picnic, either, and it was with some relief I ducked into our berth and left the crush on the streets behind.  I shut the cargo ramp door on the noise and after the echo died out, I stood in the blessed silence to soak up the peace in the hold.<br><br>
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The streets were hopping with people grabbing a meal before scurrying back to work, and on Urvasi that was a lot of hopping and a lot of people. Like the country of their origin on Old Earth, Urvasi was heavily populated and living conditions in the cities were very crowded. It was not a place I’d recommend an agoraphobe to visit. The sheer press of bodies would have been too much for them. Of course, I didn’t find it a picnic, either, and it was with some relief I ducked into our berth and left the crush on the streets behind.  I shut the cargo ramp door on the noise and after the echo died out, I stood in the blessed silence and space to soak up the peace in the hold.<br><br>
  
 
''Go quietly amid the noise and the haste and remember what peace there may be in silence'' … <br><br>
 
''Go quietly amid the noise and the haste and remember what peace there may be in silence'' … <br><br>

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