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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;She drops her hands and puts her feet up, and looked at Arden.  "So, you said you knew this bastard?  What did he do to you?"<br/>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;She drops her hands and puts her feet up, and looked at Arden.  "So, you said you knew this bastard?  What did he do to you?"<br/>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Arden pulls out a chair and sits down, "Russell, that's Rush's real name, Russell Kiling, was in my dorm back in undergraduate days.  He was a year or two ahead of me and the BMOC if you're familiar with that term."<br/>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Arden pulls out a chair and sits down, "Russell, that's Rush's real name, Russell Kiling, was in my dorm back in undergraduate days.  He was a year or two ahead of me and the BMOC if you're familiar with that term."<br/>
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Arden pauses, and then plunges ahead, "I never did anything to him, or rather I never did anything intentional toward him.  Before I got there, he was the center of dorm life.  He threw the best parties, got the best girls, you know the drill.  The guy that has it all and has it made and never had to work at it?  Anyhow, one of my first days there I won an intramural martial arts tournament and the announcement of my win coincided with something he had accomplished.  After the fact, I found out that all the attention went to me instead of where it rightfully belonged," Arden grins. "You know, to him.  Russell.<br/>
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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Arden pauses, and then plunges ahead, "I never did anything to him, or rather I never did anything intentional toward him.  Before I got there, he was the center of dorm life.  He threw the best parties, got the best girls, you know the drill.  The guy that has it all and has it made and never had to work at it?  Anyhow, one of my first days there I won an intramural martial arts tournament and the announcement of my win coincided with something he had accomplished.  After the fact, I found out that all the attention went to me instead of where it rightfully belonged," Arden grins. "You know, to him.  Russell."<br/>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;"And somehow that established a pattern.  Any time I did something that got attention, won a martial art match, aced my premeds, or anything else, it happened to overshadow Russell's efforts at that time.  He took it personally, not sure why, but he did.  And a couple of mutual friends told me that he held a grudge."<br/>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;"And somehow that established a pattern.  Any time I did something that got attention, won a martial art match, aced my premeds, or anything else, it happened to overshadow Russell's efforts at that time.  He took it personally, not sure why, but he did.  And a couple of mutual friends told me that he held a grudge."<br/>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;"'Big man on campus', huh?"  Rina frowns and crosses her arms.  A muscle twitches in her jaw.  "I know the type.  And they rarely let things lie at the grudge-holding stage.  Generally, they act on it.  Does this tale have an ending, happy or otherwise?"<br/>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;"'Big man on campus', huh?"  Rina frowns and crosses her arms.  A muscle twitches in her jaw.  "I know the type.  And they rarely let things lie at the grudge-holding stage.  Generally, they act on it.  Does this tale have an ending, happy or otherwise?"<br/>

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