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Shrike sees genuine tears in his eyes. "There, I have delivered my warning. What to do with it is up to you. By the time it comes to pass, it will be well within your capabilities to destroy me out of hand. I am sorry to give you this burden Lawgiver."
 
Shrike sees genuine tears in his eyes. "There, I have delivered my warning. What to do with it is up to you. By the time it comes to pass, it will be well within your capabilities to destroy me out of hand. I am sorry to give you this burden Lawgiver."
 
 
Impulsively, Shrike embraces him, although the chill of his armour bites through her clothes. "Thank you for your trust, Wind of Lament. I hope it will not prove to have been misplaced. I am only beginning to understand the price we must pay for walking this road, and, as you say, sometimes it seems like too much to bear. But what is the alternative? Our enemies would not balk at using every weapon at their disposal, and they have had centuries to bide their time and develop methods and machines we cannot even imagine. Can we do less?  
 
Impulsively, Shrike embraces him, although the chill of his armour bites through her clothes. "Thank you for your trust, Wind of Lament. I hope it will not prove to have been misplaced. I am only beginning to understand the price we must pay for walking this road, and, as you say, sometimes it seems like too much to bear. But what is the alternative? Our enemies would not balk at using every weapon at their disposal, and they have had centuries to bide their time and develop methods and machines we cannot even imagine. Can we do less?  
  
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The Sidereal looks down at his armor for a moment and winks. "Do previous lovers count as pillow talk among your people?"
 
The Sidereal looks down at his armor for a moment and winks. "Do previous lovers count as pillow talk among your people?"
 
 
"That depends entirely on how flattering the comparisons turn out to be," she points out.
 
"That depends entirely on how flattering the comparisons turn out to be," she points out.
 
 
He nods, conceding the point. "I suppose then, if you're interested, you get to find out yet more about me. I must say Lawgiver," he moves toward her, his expression both thoughtful and playful ", you are doing irreparable harm to my reputation as the mysterious and terrible stranger."
 
He nods, conceding the point. "I suppose then, if you're interested, you get to find out yet more about me. I must say Lawgiver," he moves toward her, his expression both thoughtful and playful ", you are doing irreparable harm to my reputation as the mysterious and terrible stranger."
 
 
"I was Chosen to reflect the dark heart of the sun's concealed face." Her fingers are nimble, and the clangour of his armour falling to the floor is softened by their being cushioned by her shed robe. "Character assassination is best form of assassination there is." Her fingers are nimble, and Lament catches his breath. She chuckles. "My... Heaven's foremost sword indeed.
 
"I was Chosen to reflect the dark heart of the sun's concealed face." Her fingers are nimble, and the clangour of his armour falling to the floor is softened by their being cushioned by her shed robe. "Character assassination is best form of assassination there is." Her fingers are nimble, and Lament catches his breath. She chuckles. "My... Heaven's foremost sword indeed.
  
 
"Now, tell me how a dusty desert rose compares to the finest flowers that Heaven holds?"
 
"Now, tell me how a dusty desert rose compares to the finest flowers that Heaven holds?"

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