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|"''The Sable Dragoon scares the living hell out of me. Her void powers unnerve me, and the less said about 'her world', the better. I thought I could count on her until she went berserk and almost killed Sempai and Yuna-san. And I'm still mad at her about putting us up to talking with Touyama Nao, knowing full well that she couldn't see us or hear us and that we wouldn't be able to communicate with or touch her at all, all to 'teach' us a lesson about what the hell we are! And all I accomplished by trying to talk to her was scaring the poor girl half to death! Nakahara had no right to use her like this!''
 
|"''The Sable Dragoon scares the living hell out of me. Her void powers unnerve me, and the less said about 'her world', the better. I thought I could count on her until she went berserk and almost killed Sempai and Yuna-san. And I'm still mad at her about putting us up to talking with Touyama Nao, knowing full well that she couldn't see us or hear us and that we wouldn't be able to communicate with or touch her at all, all to 'teach' us a lesson about what the hell we are! And all I accomplished by trying to talk to her was scaring the poor girl half to death! Nakahara had no right to use her like this!''
  
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''"I feel awful for Touyama-san...and as much as I hate to say this, part of me feels awful for Nakahara too, even though I want nothing to do with her after this. Her wish was meant to bring her back from the dead and ensure that no daemon would ever hurt her again. But whoever granted her wish only paid attention to the letter of it, not the spirit of it. As a result, she made Nao effectively immortal. And since Chiyoko didn't specify anything other than being unable to be affected by daemons, I wouldn't put it past whoever granted that wish to have left out the parts of being immortal that make it cool. Meaning that as time goes on, it will become a fate far worse than even the cruelest death! I'm going to have to be very specific when it comes time to make my wish. If I live to claim it.''"
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''"I feel awful for Touyama-san...and as much as I hate to say this, part of me feels awful for Nakahara too, even though I want nothing to do with her after this. Her wish was meant to bring her back from the dead and ensure that no daemon would ever hurt her again. But whoever granted her wish only paid attention to the letter of it, not the spirit of it. As a result, she made Nao effectively immortal. I wouldn't put it past that wish-giver to have left out the parts of immortality that make it kind of cool. I hate wish givers like that. It means I'm going to have to word my own wish very carefully if I don't want to mess things up for Mom.''"
 
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