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===Ietan===
 
===Ietan===
  
[http://wiki.rpg.net/index.php/The_Crimson_Markiz#Ietan_Longwalker Ietan Longwalker] was originally raised to be a Warmaster, but in his teenage years his ego and arrogance overwhelmed him and he killed a man in an unfair fight. As punishment he was sent to be a year-slave in one of the hellmines. The experience tempered him and he emerged stronger, although deeply regretful for leaving a family bereft of a father. His path probably would have ended in the criminal world were it not for meeting a Koldun that helped him find a new route in life. However, after years of tutelage, he still never felt comfortable living with the Viridese, and now travels around seeking to atone for the mistakes of his youth.
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He was originally raised to be a Warmaster, but in his teenage years his ego and arrogance overwhelmed him and he killed a man in an unfair fight. As punishment he was sent to be a year-slave in one of the hellmines. The experience tempered him and he emerged stronger, although deeply regretful for leaving a family bereft of a father. His path probably would have ended in the criminal world were it not for meeting a Koldun that helped him find a new route in life. However, after years of tutelage, he still never felt comfortable living with the Viridese, and now travels around seeking to atone for the mistakes of his youth.
  
 
:'''Story Hook:''' Heart held by Josephina Lorensdar, a rare Colrona woman that has established herself as a sky trader, traveling the 7 Skies. She feels romantically about him, but feels neither of them are ready for anything serious.
 
:'''Story Hook:''' Heart held by Josephina Lorensdar, a rare Colrona woman that has established herself as a sky trader, traveling the 7 Skies. She feels romantically about him, but feels neither of them are ready for anything serious.

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