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''Bite sized for a mouse, maybe. Hell, it's all going to the same place no matter what size it is''.<br><br>
 
''Bite sized for a mouse, maybe. Hell, it's all going to the same place no matter what size it is''.<br><br>
  
I wordlessly swept my mistake into a waiting bowl and slid it across the counter to him, distracting myself from his leading question by calculating the amount of push needed to send the bowl sliding next to but not ''into'' the others. By the time it stopped, I'd suppressed what I wanted to hide and sent a prayer of thanks Heavenward for Mike's training.<br><br>
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I wordlessly swept my mistake into a waiting bowl and slid it across the counter to him, distracting myself from his leading question by calculating the amount of push needed to send the bowl sliding next to but not into the others. By the time it stopped, I'd suppressed what I wanted to hide and sent a prayer of thanks Heavenward for Mike's training.<br><br>
  
 
"It can wait a few minutes longer," I said, finally daring to look at him. "The chicken, however, can't. It'll spoil if you let it sit out. Besides, there's no telling if Jahn'll get it in his little kitty head to play food critic and try some behind our backs."<br><br>
 
"It can wait a few minutes longer," I said, finally daring to look at him. "The chicken, however, can't. It'll spoil if you let it sit out. Besides, there's no telling if Jahn'll get it in his little kitty head to play food critic and try some behind our backs."<br><br>
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He could kiss her forever because, damn, she tasted good. Fire and spice and just a hint of sweat. One of the few ways that he had noticed that the pax had affected him was that his senses seemed enhanced, or at least more sensitive. He wasn't sure that he actually believed that was true. But in this case, the illusion of reality was as good as reality itself. His desire to just take her right here and now warred with his desire to see the equipment on him correctly. In the end, the harness won, if only because he knew that the sex might be even better with a little more anticipation thrown in to the pot. ''Just like with cooking, you gotta have all the right ingredients if you want a truly fantastic result''.<br><br>
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He could kiss her forever because, damn, she tasted good. Fire and spice and just a hint of sweat. One of the few ways that he had noticed that the pax had affected him was that his senses seemed enhanced, or at least more sensitive. He wasn't sure that he actually believed that was true. But in this case, the illusion of reality was as good as reality itself. His desire to just take her right here and now warred with his desire to see the equipment on him correctly. In the end, the harness won, if only because he knew that the sex might be even better with a little more anticipation thrown in to the pot. Just like with cooking, you gotta have all the right ingredients if you want a truly fantastic result.<br><br>
  
 
He broke away from the kiss as she managed to start untangling him. "So how did you think to do this?"<br><br>
 
He broke away from the kiss as she managed to start untangling him. "So how did you think to do this?"<br><br>
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"Doing it backwards, love," I said throatily and knelt on the deck in front of him. I gave him a roguish smile and waited a beat just to tease him. As rewarding as heating up the sheets with Joshua would be, I wanted to savor what was about to happen right now. I was going to wring every last drop of pleasure from it, before doing the same with him. I shook out the tangles and held the harness ready for him to step into.<br><br>
 
"Doing it backwards, love," I said throatily and knelt on the deck in front of him. I gave him a roguish smile and waited a beat just to tease him. As rewarding as heating up the sheets with Joshua would be, I wanted to savor what was about to happen right now. I was going to wring every last drop of pleasure from it, before doing the same with him. I shook out the tangles and held the harness ready for him to step into.<br><br>
  
"As for where I got the idea," I said and smoothed the leg straps across his thighs before sliding my hands up to buckle him in. "I got it from you." I gave his crotch a gentle stroke and winked. "You, sir, are Peter Pan grounded and you got me thinking." I got the belt buckled good and tight and gave the rig a tug to check it before rising further to get his arms through the straps. "And you know with me, it's a very short step from thinking about it to '''doing''' it, right?" I ran my hands around his shoulders to his back, checking for twists in the webbing that would cut off circulation. The last thing I wanted was him passing out on me. ''At least, not until we've had our fun''.<br><br>
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"As for where I got the idea," I said and smoothed the leg straps across his thighs before sliding my hands up to buckle him in. "I got it from you." I gave his crotch a gentle stroke and winked. "You, sir, are Peter Pan grounded and you got me thinking." I got the belt buckled good and tight and gave the rig a tug to check it before rising further to get his arms through the straps. "And you know with me, it's a very short step from thinking about it to doing it, right?" I ran my hands around his shoulders to his back, checking for twists in the webbing that would cut off circulation. The last thing I wanted was him passing out on me. At least, not until we've had our fun.<br><br>
  
 
And since drawing out the suspense was a good part of that fun, I kissed him again, grabbing him by his harness to pull him into me.<br><br>
 
And since drawing out the suspense was a good part of that fun, I kissed him again, grabbing him by his harness to pull him into me.<br><br>

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