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Bare flesh beckoned in the corner of her eye. Acutely aware of Quentin disrobing, she steeled herself against looking directly at him. ''Mind on the job, Jo.'' She picked up the wallet and pulled out the top document, a folded letter of high quality paper. Holding it up to the window, she looked for a watermark, pinpricks, or subtly altered writing, and she summarized aloud as she scanned it. "A letter of introduction for Friedrich Piefke, a salesman and installer of telegraph equipment for Siemens in Berlin. 'Please afford all suitable courtesy and assistance as required.' On company letterhead. Hmm. That suggests several possibilities," she added as she examined the next document. "Here we have a private introduction to Ştefan Brezeanu of Bucharest, who we've connected to Panculescu. The plot thickens. Where is Piefke now?" she asked, though she suspected she already knew the answer.<br><br>
 
Bare flesh beckoned in the corner of her eye. Acutely aware of Quentin disrobing, she steeled herself against looking directly at him. ''Mind on the job, Jo.'' She picked up the wallet and pulled out the top document, a folded letter of high quality paper. Holding it up to the window, she looked for a watermark, pinpricks, or subtly altered writing, and she summarized aloud as she scanned it. "A letter of introduction for Friedrich Piefke, a salesman and installer of telegraph equipment for Siemens in Berlin. 'Please afford all suitable courtesy and assistance as required.' On company letterhead. Hmm. That suggests several possibilities," she added as she examined the next document. "Here we have a private introduction to Ştefan Brezeanu of Bucharest, who we've connected to Panculescu. The plot thickens. Where is Piefke now?" she asked, though she suspected she already knew the answer.<br><br>
  
"Off the train and not coming back," Quentin said, grinning tightly. Freshly clothed from the waist up, he tugged his cuffs straight and worked on his tie. He nodded at the miscellany on the table. "Could be there might be more about him in the junk I took off him. ''Dammit—''," he swore as the train lurched on the tracks and he fumbled his tie.<br><br>
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"Off the train and not coming back," Quentin said, grinning tightly. Freshly clothed from the waist up, he tugged his cuffs straight and worked on his tie. He nodded at the miscellany on the table. "Could be there might be more about him in the junk I took off him. Dammit—," he swore as the train lurched on the tracks and he fumbled his tie.<br><br>
  
 
"Allow me," Josephine said and rose to assist him. The train lurched again and her pulse quickened as he caught her. His arms were strong and warm. His eyes, she thought, were the most enthralling shade of blue. The need she'd refused to acknowledge deep inside her woke and her blood started to sing. "Ties are the very devil," she breathed. <br><br>
 
"Allow me," Josephine said and rose to assist him. The train lurched again and her pulse quickened as he caught her. His arms were strong and warm. His eyes, she thought, were the most enthralling shade of blue. The need she'd refused to acknowledge deep inside her woke and her blood started to sing. "Ties are the very devil," she breathed. <br><br>

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