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"''You'' are the very devil," Quentin whispered under his breath. Still roused by the fight and the sudden nearness of her, Quentin gave in to impulse and kissed her. Just as in Paris, the kiss deepened in a flash. She tasted of sugar and tea and her scent teased him with each breath he took. She wasn't the least bit shy. As his hands followed her curves, she clutched his back and pulled him closer. As he grew insistent, so did she, until he found himself guiding her toward the compartment couch.<br><br>
 
"''You'' are the very devil," Quentin whispered under his breath. Still roused by the fight and the sudden nearness of her, Quentin gave in to impulse and kissed her. Just as in Paris, the kiss deepened in a flash. She tasted of sugar and tea and her scent teased him with each breath he took. She wasn't the least bit shy. As his hands followed her curves, she clutched his back and pulled him closer. As he grew insistent, so did she, until he found himself guiding her toward the compartment couch.<br><br>
  
She explored him hungrily under his shirt and devoured his mouth with hers. Quentin's hands drew paths of heat wherever they went and Josephine's breath caught again and again as their bodies swayed together all the way to the couch. She barely felt it when she tipped onto it. She was aware only of him.<br><br>
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She explored him hungrily under his shirt and devoured his mouth with hers. Quentin's hands drew paths of heat wherever they went and Josephine's breath caught again and again as their bodies swayed together all the way to the couch. She barely felt it when she tipped onto it. She was only aware of him.<br><br>
  
 
He'd had exotic women all over the world but none were as bewitching as Josephine's blend of femininity and ferocity.  Quentin struggled with the buttons at her throat, nuzzling her neck as he exposed her skin. She gasped and moved under him, deftly undoing his trousers and easing him free, caressing him to near madness. Quentin growled at the ungodly layers of clothing between them. ''Damned corset'' …. Knowing he'd never get it off her in time Quentin pushed up her skirts and made ready to dive right in. <br><br>
 
He'd had exotic women all over the world but none were as bewitching as Josephine's blend of femininity and ferocity.  Quentin struggled with the buttons at her throat, nuzzling her neck as he exposed her skin. She gasped and moved under him, deftly undoing his trousers and easing him free, caressing him to near madness. Quentin growled at the ungodly layers of clothing between them. ''Damned corset'' …. Knowing he'd never get it off her in time Quentin pushed up her skirts and made ready to dive right in. <br><br>

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