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Frozen with her breath caught in her throat, Josephine watched as the Russian landed in a perfect roll and bounded to her feet on the grassy shoulder. A mounted rider waited for her there with another horse held by its reins. The train carried Josephine farther away with each passing second and as she watched, the Russian mounted the waiting horse and wheeled off toward Budapest. <br><br>
 
Frozen with her breath caught in her throat, Josephine watched as the Russian landed in a perfect roll and bounded to her feet on the grassy shoulder. A mounted rider waited for her there with another horse held by its reins. The train carried Josephine farther away with each passing second and as she watched, the Russian mounted the waiting horse and wheeled off toward Budapest. <br><br>
  
Josephine returned to the dining car to find Quentin still gone. She made no show of worry but merely gathered up their papers and asked for tea to be sent to their compartment. Genuine newlyweds or not, it would be uncouth to be seen in public joined at the hip or to express overt concern over a momentary absence. He wasn't waiting in the compartment when she arrived. She closed the door, pulled her watch from her pocket and checked the time. Ten minutes since they'd parted company. They'd already discussed contingency plans if they were ever separated. Quentin knew to make his way to Bucharest. He had funds to buy another ticket or hire a horse and ride. He'd roamed the world over to rescue his sister. He's capable of rescuing himself. When the tea arrived without Quentin, she poured herself a cup, organized the notes and papers she'd gathered, and waited for his return or for the next station, whichever came first. <br><br>
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Josephine returned to the dining car to find Quentin still gone. She made no show of worry but merely gathered up their papers and asked for tea to be sent to their compartment. Genuine newlyweds or not, it would be uncouth to be seen in public joined at the hip or to express overt concern over a momentary absence. He wasn't waiting in the compartment when she arrived. She closed the door, pulled her watch from her pocket and checked the time. Ten minutes since they'd parted company. They'd already discussed contingency plans if they were ever separated. Quentin knew to make his way to Bucharest. He had funds to buy another ticket or hire a horse and ride. He'd roamed the world over to rescue his sister. He's capable of rescuing himself. When the tea arrived without Quentin, she poured herself a cup, organized the notes and papers she'd gathered, and waited for his return or the next station, whichever came first. <br><br>
  
 
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