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'''Ancient Belkan mage''' 1M
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'''Ancient Belkan mage''' 17
* Spellcasting 1M
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* Spellcasting 17
 
* Flight 10M
 
* Flight 10M
 
* Melee attack 1M
 
* Melee attack 1M
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'''Abilities'''
 
'''Abilities'''
* Cheerful 18
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* Cheerful 15
 
::''She's always got a bright smile, and stays upbeat in the face of adversity ''
 
::''She's always got a bright smile, and stays upbeat in the face of adversity ''
 
* Popular 13
 
* Popular 13
 
::''Tomomi makes friends easily, and rarely rubs people up the wrong way; people end up liking her in spite of themselves''
 
::''Tomomi makes friends easily, and rarely rubs people up the wrong way; people end up liking her in spite of themselves''
* Protective of her friends 18
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* Protective of her friends 15
 
::''Tomomi will always leap to her frends' defence, and hurting or picking on one of them is one of the few ways of pissing her off''
 
::''Tomomi will always leap to her frends' defence, and hurting or picking on one of them is one of the few ways of pissing her off''
* Sporty 16
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* Sporty 13
 
::''Tomomi's generally fit and good at PE and sports''
 
::''Tomomi's generally fit and good at PE and sports''
* Member of the Kendo club 1M
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* Member of the Kendo club 18
 
::''Tomomi's has done Kendo since she was big enough to hold a shinai. She's a key member of the school team, and usually practices before and after classes.  ''
 
::''Tomomi's has done Kendo since she was big enough to hold a shinai. She's a key member of the school team, and usually practices before and after classes.  ''
* Fast reactions 16
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* Fast reactions 13
 
* Younger brother Hiro 13
 
* Younger brother Hiro 13
 
::''Hiro's 12 years old, a bit of an otaku, and good with computers. Tomomi teases him, but is very fond of him. He harbours a secret crush on one of Tomomi's friends.''
 
::''Hiro's 12 years old, a bit of an otaku, and good with computers. Tomomi teases him, but is very fond of him. He harbours a secret crush on one of Tomomi's friends.''
* Notices more than she lets on 16
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* Notices more than she lets on 13
 
::''She's quite perceptive, and is good at picking up on small details and keeping track of what's going on around her.''
 
::''She's quite perceptive, and is good at picking up on small details and keeping track of what's going on around her.''
* Serious mode 19
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* Serious mode 13
 
::''While usually upbeat, even Tomomi has her limits. When pushed past them though, she doesn't rage or cause a fuss - she just... stops holding back''
 
::''While usually upbeat, even Tomomi has her limits. When pushed past them though, she doesn't rage or cause a fuss - she just... stops holding back''
 
* Appeal to the heart 13
 
* Appeal to the heart 13
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'''Device: Diamant Licht''' 19
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'''Device: Diamant Licht''' 17
 
:''A crystaline katana, and manifests white fields of photon energy for blades, shields or binding contructs. It's also got some light manipulating abilities. When sealed, it's disguised as a wristwatch.''
 
:''A crystaline katana, and manifests white fields of photon energy for blades, shields or binding contructs. It's also got some light manipulating abilities. When sealed, it's disguised as a wristwatch.''
 
: Voice: <span style='font-family:Andale Mono;color:#9cf'>Andale Mono #9cf</span>. A cool and collected female voice.  
 
: Voice: <span style='font-family:Andale Mono;color:#9cf'>Andale Mono #9cf</span>. A cool and collected female voice.  
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* Photon blade (Melee) 10M
 
* Photon blade (Melee) 10M
 
::''Creates a white, razor-sharp plane of photon energy around the blade of the sword''
 
::''Creates a white, razor-sharp plane of photon energy around the blade of the sword''
* Displacement (Support) 18
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* Displacement (Support) 15
 
::''Shifts Tomomi's image a couple of yards - used for surpise attacks or to help dodging ''
 
::''Shifts Tomomi's image a couple of yards - used for surpise attacks or to help dodging ''
 
* Diamond prison (Binding) 13
 
* Diamond prison (Binding) 13
 
* Diamond shield (Defence) 13
 
* Diamond shield (Defence) 13
* Lightspeed (Flight) 17
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* Lightspeed (Flight) 11
 
::''A sudden burst of ultra-fast movement''
 
::''A sudden burst of ultra-fast movement''
 
 

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