Editing The Thin Pink Line: Kurai Tomomi
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::''While usually upbeat, even Tomomi has her limits. When pushed past them though, she doesn't rage or cause a fuss - she just... stops holding back'' | ::''While usually upbeat, even Tomomi has her limits. When pushed past them though, she doesn't rage or cause a fuss - she just... stops holding back'' | ||
* Appeal to the heart 13 | * Appeal to the heart 13 | ||
β | ::''Tomomi wears her heart on her sleeve, and her honesty tends to bring out the same in others as they're moved | + | ::''Tomomi wears her heart on her sleeve, and her honesty tends to bring out the same in others as they're moved be her heartfelt appeals'' |