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Marduk

When I wrote Marduk I used the Hunter Conspiracies as a guide, this included a selection list of charachter concepts; while I was satisfied with the results I cut it for being unsuited to an Antagonist faction. But I'm stashing them here for safekeeping.

You grew up in a remote village until one day people started to act odd. You tried to talk them to their senses but nothing worked, by the time they officially became a cult you barely recognised people you grew up with all your life. You fled, leaving your family behind, and the Marduk Society showed you that you could stop it happening to anyone else.

You were born to walk the corridors of power, a lobbyist or an “advisor” pushing others to the paths you wanted. Then one day the Marduk Society called your number. Now you’re playing in the big leagues.

You were a historian studying fringe religions and you noticed a recurring pattern of cults across centuries cantered around one family. You went to speak with their descendents and you found the cult was alive again; it really was as bad the records claimed. You’re still scared that you are capable of such violence, of committing murder, but the Marduk Society’s therapists are helping.

You’re everything a hero is supposed to be: strong, just, and not bad to look at either. You’ve been protecting humanity for most of your life, the wounds are caching up and age isn’t helping either. But you can’t stop now; you’d never live with yourself if you left decent humans to their mercy.

The blood of the Tribe runs in your family and for all your youth you dreamed of ascending to godhood. Then your brother started changing and you just couldn’t accept your role as a servant. The Marduk Society promised you could take your birthright, until then revenge isn’t bad.

You were an archaeologist and you made the find of a lifetime. Relics older than any civilisation known to man, you had so many questions but your papers never reached the journals, they reached Marduk who offered answers and a job. You don’t go hunting but you respect the people who do, and try to make sure they know what they’re facing.

The Disciples

Will we ever do more with the sky wizards? If we do mythologically appropriate names (I'm thinking 12 of them)

• [Sirsir]
• [Enki]

Seven Seven splat models

I'm not personally too keen on the 5/2 splat model we have now. Mostly its that we have seven Vestages and Seven Vices, I quite want a player splat associated with all seven. That would also leave us room for seven minor splats for a "round the world tour".

PC Splats

PC Should all come from the Ancient Near East For that birth of civilization feel. Currently we have:

• Bahamut: Sloth, Vitality (Awareness, Fecundity, Might)
• Dagon: Pride, Fecundity (Elements, Predation, Sanctity)
• Nu: Gluttony, Elements (Awareness, Sanctity, Vitality)
• Oceanus: Lust, Sanctity (Elements, Might, Predation)
• Tanin: Wrath, Predation (Awareness, Might, Vitality)

That leaves Greed and Evny and the following Channels.

•  ????? Awareness, Fecundity
•  ????? Might, Fecundity

With Predation, Elements, Vitality and Sanctity to divide as wished.

In terms of physical neich:

• Bahamut, Gentle Giant: Fish/Whale/Everything
• Dagon, Just plain weird: Deap Sea Fish/Everhthing (update to Deep Sea Fish/Barnacle/Coral/Everything)
• Nu, The squishy ones: Tadpole/Jellyfish/Other spinless ocean life/Everything
• Oceanus, The pretty ones: Tropical Fish/Marine Mammal/Everything
• Tanin, The pointy ones: ?????/Everything: Tannin's page dosn't actually give any hint to what they look like besides "no weakness" and lots of weapons. Maybe add in Sea Serpent/Whale/Everything?

We don't seem to have crustations at all and while Kraken would go under Nu physically (on it's weakest front) you'd really want them to favor might (it's the ship crushing and the many tenticals one) So maybe Might could have Crustation/Octopus/Squid/Everything as the Might Splat. The Awareness splat could be based around the Benthic hiding on the floor but seeing all.

Names

Lahamu is the Daughter of Tiamat and a being of primordial mud, sounds perfect for a Benthic themed splat. I see her as Awareness (Fecundity,Sanctity,Vitality). With Awareness and Sanctity it would make a good Splat to take over the high social areas from Isonade.

Thalassa Is another from greek myth, which could help bring Oceanus a little closer in. She's also the mother of fishes so that fits Fecundity nicely and is a personification of the seas (Elements). The Crab claw makes a nice way to fit in crustations. Might (Predation, Elements, Fecundity)

NPC Splats

There's actually quite a few mentioned already in chapter one:

• Cipactli. An Aztec deity and a perfect fit for Predation so definitely a really nasty Progenitor.
  • South America, Predation, Gluttony.
• Sanna more commonly known as Senda. Hard to place her in mechanics, Gluttony or Pride both work depending on which story you go for (Pride as Gluttony is taken by Cipactli). Mother of seals may point to Fecundity - that part of the story is a dead match for Womb of Terrors.
  • North America, Fecundity, Pride
• Jormungandr. Not sure about vices but given that it's thing is size and poison: Vitality.
  • Europe, Vitality
• Isonade, one of the two current NPC splats. We gave it might as a Primay: It's myth has it killing people by strikeing the beach. Elements (associated with storms) and Predation (it's a shark) make a good secondary. This drops Scantity which was given because its cults tend to be in human places of wealth a power, I'd suggest giving that trait to Ocean or one of the new guys.
  • Japan/East Asia, Might (Elements, Predation)
• NagaRaja
  • India (yes I know, but with Europe being north Europe and Asia being east asia there's room for an India splat. We can't exactly do Antarctica).
• Tangaroa
  • Oceania
• Arnapkapfaaluk. Sanctity
  • Africa.

One of the things I'm thinking of is that the NPC splats only get a choice of two Vestiages for their second pick, this is because they have a smaller gene pool rather than less power.

Primordial Icons.

Just a couple of things I made to flavour the Progenitors.

I got this idea from the Demigod opening video. The art style is supposed to be the same as the icons of the demigods seen around 1 minuet in. Obviously this is not meant to be an accurate description of the progenitors.

[Picture A carved stone wall depicting the progenitors in crude drawings.

In the centre of the carving is an icon of Nu: A slightly deformed circle with a wave symbol in the centre. From the top, anticlockwise are:

Bahamat: A fish 1.5 times the size of the other progenitors.
Dagon: An eal with a fish's head. It's body is positioned like an S, its belly is swollen in pregnancy.
Nagaraga: A huge eye, four tentacles emerge from the corners.
Isonade: A shark who's body curls to make a circle, its tail is disproportionately large.
Oceanus: A dolphin drawn vertically so it crudely approximates a man. It's tail splits at what would be half way between the ankles and knees and its flippers are held apart from the body. It's face looks almost human.
Tanin: The head of a sea serpent with a mighty jaw.

And here's a poem. In the words are hints to the close relationship between Dagon, Oceanus and Isonade (they each share three favoured Channel with eachother) and the primary Channel of each

Once there were seven.
Once three went to the surface and four the depths.
Once Eldest Nu became sea and sky.
Once Unchained Bahamut grew in deep places.
Once Watchful Nagaraja hid beneath and saw all.
Once Unbending Tanin hunted across oceans.
Once Hierarch Dagon birthed and buried multitudes.
Once Enchanting Oceanus called from the rivers.
Once Graceful Isonode broke islands with a blow.
Once there were seven.
Mother Tiamat above all.
Now there are none.

Rituals

Quick question: is mechanical benefits for human sacrifice a step too far?

New Merit. Cult Colony (OOOOO). Requires Zeal (OOO). You're cultists live apart from society, Because they are freed from needing to manage time between worship and the rest of the world you may order far more rituals or tasks, replace per story with per week. However with this you're abandoning any attempt at blending in. It becomes significantly easier for police, Marduk or even worried family to track you down: They get a +1 bonus per dot of numbers to find the location of your colony.

All Leviathan's possess vast psychic powers outside of, certain Vestiges and Birthrights these are unfocused, useless for any practical purpose beyond the blunt instrument of the Wake. But by using their cult as a lens a Leviathan can focus their natural power into a fine scalpel.

Cultists aren't a continent resource that can be brought up for rituals and packed away until they're needed, they have lives and commitments. Performing a Ritual requires planning, a Leviathan gets five “ritual points” per dot of Cult numbers for a story. Performing a ritual takes a number of points equal to its dots. If the time is inconvenient such as a working day charge one extra point, also charge one extra point if the cultists were not given sufficient warning. Assume it takes 24 hours warning per dot of the rituals rank.

Unless stated otherwise all rituals have a dicepool of Sheol + Zeal – rank and take one hour per dot of rank to complete. Attempting a Ritual without a cult requires a Sheol – Rank - 3 roll.

Ritual of Worship (O)

Through the worship of their cultists a Leviathan can send a strand of thought back through their bloodline to connect with their divine heritage and the power that is their birthright.

Dramatic Failure: The Leviathan feels the sting of rejection, being denied their heritage costs a point of Willpower. Failure: The Leviathan reaches with their mind but is unable to find anything. Success: The Leviathan regains Ichor equal to their cult's Zeal + Successes. Exceptional Success: Connecting with their divine heritage reassures the Leviathan of their place in the world. In addition to Ichor the Leviathan regains a point of Willpower or indulge the Vice of Pride. Players choice.

Ritual of Scrying (O)

The leviathan departs their body to spy unseen.

Dramatic Failure: The Leviathan leaves their body but without a thread to guide them home. Lose a point of willpower and roll one die, it takes that many hours to find your way home. Failure: The Leviathan remains within their body. Success: Each success lets the Leviathan travel further. 10 miles for a single success, 100 miles for two successes and so on. Exceptional Success: In addition to the distance a Leviathan gains +1 to all perception rolls during their scrying.

While in this state a Leviathan is in Twilight. The Leviathan is vulnerable to weapons that can affect beings in Twilight using Willpower in place of health, should their last point of Willpower be lost the Leviathan is thrown into deep unconsciousness and will wake when they have rested enough to gain a point of willpower.

Defences against supernatural spying such as a Mage's wards manifest as physical barriers. It takes an Wits + Occult roll to sneak by or an Intelligence + Brawl roll to smash through which may sound the alarm. If perceived the Leviathan appears to be in its Apotheosis form.

Finally the Leviathan cannot benefit from Vestiges that require Ichor, or Vestiges that involve psychic powers: It has travelled too far from its physical brain to make use of them. Purely physical Vestiges such as Mortal Devouring armoury still work but only against other beings in Twilight.

Ritual of Prophecy (OO) Needed for Oroborus' Kin but I'm not sure how to write it.

Ritual to Scry the Rift. (OOO) This ritual allows a Leviathan to scry the rift.

Dramatic Failure: The Leviathan leaves their body but without a thread to guide them home. Lose a point of willpower and roll one die, it takes that many hours to find your way home. Failure: The Leviathan remains within their body. Success: For the duration of this Ritual (three hours) the Leviathan may travel the rift. They are subject to the same limitations on using Vestiges as with the scrying ritual but add their cultists Zeal to all navigation rolls and Tranquillity rolls used for navigation. When the ritual ends the Leviathan has five minuets per dot of Zeal to leave the depths (with their bonuses) otherwise they get lost and suffer the effects of a dramatic failure. Exceptional Success: The Leviathan's bonus rises to Zeal + 1.