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He easily snuck back into his room, undetected, and if he had been missed there were no signs of it. As the time passed, no-one came to prepare him for the dinner, so he assumed he had been right in his judgment of his father. It was not until a while later, when the party had most definitely moved into the dining room, that a servant knocked on his door, saying that his presence was required at the table immediatly. Suprised the boy quickly dressed in whatever decent clothes were in arms reach and hurried along.
 
He easily snuck back into his room, undetected, and if he had been missed there were no signs of it. As the time passed, no-one came to prepare him for the dinner, so he assumed he had been right in his judgment of his father. It was not until a while later, when the party had most definitely moved into the dining room, that a servant knocked on his door, saying that his presence was required at the table immediatly. Suprised the boy quickly dressed in whatever decent clothes were in arms reach and hurried along.
  
Once in the dining room apart from his parents and siblings there was the guest of the evening, who turned out to be the very same man he had met earlier in the day. It turned out that the man was a sorceror from the south, whom his father had gotten to know and respect deeply in a recent campaign. It was the man who had made his father call him out to the dinner and for once the son was allowed to sit with his family with guests. While the man had questioned the boy earlier in the day, this time it was the father's turn. The man asked the father of all possible things about the boy, and at the end the man proposed something the boy had never even dreamt of, that he would follow him back to Nexus and become his apprentice.
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Once in the dining room apart from his parents and siblings there was the guest of the evening, who turned out to be the very same man he had met earlier in the day. It turned out that the man was a sorceror from the south, whom his father had gotten to know and respect deeply in his younger years. It was the man who had made his father call him out to the dinner and for once the son was allowed to sit with his family with guests. While the man had questioned the boy earlier in the day, this time it was the father's turn. The man asked the father of all possible things about the boy, and at the end the man proposed something the boy had never even dreamt of, that he would follow him back to Nexus and become his apprentice.
  
 
Two days later the boy packed some of the most interesting books he had not yet read in the library and what little he had in the ways of possessions, took farewell of his family and followed his new master to Nexus. This was the last time the boy saw them. The trip back could have been called uneventful, but hardly for the boy. The world was new and open to him and during the travel back to Nexus the boy felt his curiosity tenfold and the realisation dawn on him how little he knew.
 
Two days later the boy packed some of the most interesting books he had not yet read in the library and what little he had in the ways of possessions, took farewell of his family and followed his new master to Nexus. This was the last time the boy saw them. The trip back could have been called uneventful, but hardly for the boy. The world was new and open to him and during the travel back to Nexus the boy felt his curiosity tenfold and the realisation dawn on him how little he knew.
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Following the advice of his new constant companion Lord of Gold and Ivory started making his way back to the Golden Cave, the Lady's second hideout which no-one but herself had known about. There he gathered the supplies that had been left there and studied as many of the works he could (with tips and instructions from his mental companion). As this time passed the differences between the two became more and more apparent. While both turned out to be rather rash and hot-headed, the Lady showed to be more concerned with direct results and acheiving the goal than the Lord, who rather felt the pain of the people and who was not as willing to sacrifice all for the sake of success.
 
Following the advice of his new constant companion Lord of Gold and Ivory started making his way back to the Golden Cave, the Lady's second hideout which no-one but herself had known about. There he gathered the supplies that had been left there and studied as many of the works he could (with tips and instructions from his mental companion). As this time passed the differences between the two became more and more apparent. While both turned out to be rather rash and hot-headed, the Lady showed to be more concerned with direct results and acheiving the goal than the Lord, who rather felt the pain of the people and who was not as willing to sacrifice all for the sake of success.
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