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While contact with Dell’s World happened only 20 years ago, access to the Ilandria system has been open for nearly a century. Because there was absolutely no indication of an advanced civilization in the system, (no EM spectrum or space vehicles), the common belief was that this was a dead system, destroyed by one of the Ascended during the collapse of the Terran Sphere. So for 80 years, ships would come out of the slipknot, cool down, turn around and fly back through the slipknot on to the next world.
 
While contact with Dell’s World happened only 20 years ago, access to the Ilandria system has been open for nearly a century. Because there was absolutely no indication of an advanced civilization in the system, (no EM spectrum or space vehicles), the common belief was that this was a dead system, destroyed by one of the Ascended during the collapse of the Terran Sphere. So for 80 years, ships would come out of the slipknot, cool down, turn around and fly back through the slipknot on to the next world.
  
It wasn’t till a merchant from Graceland decided to pique his curiosity and actually look around the system while waiting for his ship’s radiators to cool post slip. He took the spectra of the star, Ilandria and found that it had three times the metalicity of other known stars. That got him thinking. Ilandria is a type K star, smaller and cooler than the normal type G stars, so its habitable zone would be closer in. After determining the plane of the system, the merchant scanned the probable habitable zone and then studied it after he slipped to Crimson Fold. In the zone, he found what he was looking for: An Earth-like planet.  
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It wasn’t till a merchant from Graceland decided to pique his curiosity and actually look around the system while waiting for his ship’s radiators to cool post slip. He took the spectra of the star, Ilandria and found that it had three times the metalicity of other known stars. That got him thinking. Ilandria is a type K star, smaller and cooler than the normal type G stars, so its habitable zone would be closer in. After determining the plane of the system, the merchant scanned the probably habitable zone and then studied it after he slipped to Crimson Fold. In the zone, he found what he was looking for: An Earth-like planet.  
  
 
On Crimson Fold, he put together an expedition and returned to Dell’s World with trade goods, an autodoc, catalytic hydrogen cracking generators, and several “security personnel”. Once in orbit, they located the largest city and landed their shuttles outside Tristan, the largest city on Dell’s World and the domain of Dell the First.  
 
On Crimson Fold, he put together an expedition and returned to Dell’s World with trade goods, an autodoc, catalytic hydrogen cracking generators, and several “security personnel”. Once in orbit, they located the largest city and landed their shuttles outside Tristan, the largest city on Dell’s World and the domain of Dell the First.  

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