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'''Lovewell:''' Any survivors?<br>
 
'''Lovewell:''' Any survivors?<br>
 
'''Nika:''' (drawling) Not much.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' (drawling) Not much.<br>
'''Lovewell:''' I understand.  You can surrender them to me and I’ll take care of ’em. <br>
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'''Lovewell:'''' I understand.  You can surrender them to me and I’ll take care of ’em. <br>
 
'''Nika:''' They’re pretty much dead. We took a couple’uv’em, been all cut up, tried to patch’em up, but … It ain’t getting’ us very far.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' They’re pretty much dead. We took a couple’uv’em, been all cut up, tried to patch’em up, but … It ain’t getting’ us very far.<br>
 
'''Lovewell:''' Uh-huh.  My crew’ll take care of the dead. You got some live ones?<br>
 
'''Lovewell:''' Uh-huh.  My crew’ll take care of the dead. You got some live ones?<br>
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Kiera hadn’t really been looking for different techniques, the wounds being a mite too bloody at the time to note the details and she too busy saving the patient.  Now that the immediate crisis is over, forensic elements can be seen.<br><br>
 
Kiera hadn’t really been looking for different techniques, the wounds being a mite too bloody at the time to note the details and she too busy saving the patient.  Now that the immediate crisis is over, forensic elements can be seen.<br><br>
  
'''Kiera:''' So I take it you know that there’s a particular style?<br>
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'''Kiera: So I take it you know that there’s a particular style?<br>
'''Mountain Man:''' Yeah, these’re … different.  Ships have different … style, I guess you can say.<br>
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'''Mountain Man: Yeah, these’re … different.  Ships have different … style, I guess you can say.<br>
'''Kiera:''' So … more than one ship’s come by and just picked two random people?<br>
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'''Kiera: So … more than one ship’s come by and just picked two random people?<br>
'''Lovewell:''' No.  There’s somethin’ else goin’ on here.<br>   
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'''Lovewell: No.  There’s somethin’ else goin’ on here.<br>   
'''Mountain Man:''' It’s not …  confident cuttin’.  Somebody was usin’ their off-arm, off-hand … to do that work.<br>
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'''Mountain Man: It’s not …  confident cuttin’.  Somebody was usin’ their off-arm, off-hand … to do that work.<br>
'''Kiera:''' So you’re sayin’ it was somebody who’s usin’ either an arm that was not their dominate or a rank amateur who was tryin’ to imitate somethin’.<br>
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'''Kiera: So you’re sayin’ it was somebody who’s usin’ either an arm that was not their dominate or a rank amateur who was tryin’ to imitate somethin’.<br>
'''Mountain Man:''' Hnn, no this ain’t …  This is real Reaver, but … yeah.  Perhaps somebody … (thinks aloud) … Why would a Reaver use his off-arm to do this?<br>
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'''Mountain Man: Hnn, no this ain’t …  This is real Reaver, but … yeah.  Perhaps somebody … (thinks aloud) … Why would a Reaver use his off-arm to do this?<br>
'''Kiera:''' Might’a had the other one gnawed off by his fellow Reavers.<br>
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'''Kiera: Might’a had the other one gnawed off by his fellow Reavers.<br>
'''Mountain Man:''' … They don’t eat each other …<br>
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'''Mountain Man: … They don’t eat each other …<br>
'''Kiera:''' I wouldn’t either.  Nasty.<br>
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'''Kiera: I wouldn’t either.  Nasty.<br>
'''Mountain Man:''' Yeah … you don’t wanna bring these back.<br>
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'''Mountain Man: Yeah … you don’t wanna bring these back.<br>
'''Kiera:''' So in other words … ?<br>
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'''Kiera: So in other words … ?<br>
'''Mountain Man:''' They’re gone.<br>
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'''Mountain Man: They’re gone.<br>
'''Kiera:''' They’re goin’ to get the disease?<br>
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'''Kiera: They’re goin’ to get the disease?<br>
'''Mountain Man:''' Yeah.  That’s one way’a puttin’ it.<br><br>
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'''Mountain Man: Yeah.  That’s one way’a puttin’ it.<br><br>
  
 
Kiera looks over at Arden, who’s standing by and watching everything.<br><br>
 
Kiera looks over at Arden, who’s standing by and watching everything.<br><br>

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