Editing Episode 405: Precipitate, Part Two

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'''Rina:''' I just, just … (breathily) Can I just, like … walk where ''he'' walked?<br><br>
 
'''Rina:''' I just, just … (breathily) Can I just, like … walk where ''he'' walked?<br><br>
  
From across the field, Nika sees Rina approach and takes in the line of her and nearly falls down the stairs. What the ''hell'' is going on?  She slows to better watch what’s happening.<br><br>  
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From across the field, Nika sees Rina approach and takes in the line of her and nearly falls down the stairs. What the ''hell'' is going on?  She slows to better watch what’s happening.   
  
For her part, Kiera’s already recognized Rina’s not acting like her normal self.  The redhead has never seen the engineer get starstruck and sexually charged over a celebrity.  Kiera’s not entirely sure if she should yank Rina back from the brink of doing something truly stupid, or facilitate Rina’s scheme by ripping open the woman’s shirt.  She settles for looking like a fellow trial-groupie and hopes she’s on the right track.  Rina steps closer to the guard.  She’s definitely got his attention.<br><br>
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For her part, Kiera’s already recognized Rina’s not acting like her normal self.  The redhead has never seen the engineer get starstruck and sexually charged over a celebrity.  Kiera’s not entirely sure if she should yank Rina back from the brink of doing something truly stupid, or facilitate Rina’s scheme by ripping open the woman’s shirt.  She settles for looking like a fellow trial-groupie and hopes she’s on the right track.  Rina steps closer to the guard.  She’s definitely got his attention.
  
 
'''Rina:''' (glances coyly down, then up) Well … it’s just that … could I just….? Okay, I’ll …. God, ''he’s just so'' … (licks lower lip) … I mean, you could come with me and … and … I just … oh, dammit, I’ll just tell you.  I— <br><br>
 
'''Rina:''' (glances coyly down, then up) Well … it’s just that … could I just….? Okay, I’ll …. God, ''he’s just so'' … (licks lower lip) … I mean, you could come with me and … and … I just … oh, dammit, I’ll just tell you.  I— <br><br>
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'''Kiera:''' Can I come, too? I thought we were together.<br>
 
'''Kiera:''' Can I come, too? I thought we were together.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' (slow grin) Ohhh, you wanna do a three-way?<br>
 
'''Rina:''' (slow grin) Ohhh, you wanna do a three-way?<br>
'''Kiera:''' Always. <br><br>
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'''Kiera:''' Always. <br>
  
 
From afar Nika’s about to lose both eyes, they’re bugging out.<br><br>
 
From afar Nika’s about to lose both eyes, they’re bugging out.<br><br>

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