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'''Nika:''' I guess it depends on what they tell me, don’t it? <br><br>
 
'''Nika:''' I guess it depends on what they tell me, don’t it? <br><br>
  
Joshua continues strapping the shuttle down.  Arden gives Joshua an annoyed look. <br><br>
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Nika leaves.  Joshua continues strapping the shuttle down.  Arden gives Joshua an annoyed look. <br><br>
  
 
'''Arden:''' ''Why didn’t you give her the card?'' I’ve been trying to get your attention for five minutes, that you give her the card. <br><br>
 
'''Arden:''' ''Why didn’t you give her the card?'' I’ve been trying to get your attention for five minutes, that you give her the card. <br><br>
  
Oh crap.  Joshua slaps his pocket and feels the card through his clothes and wilts.  He leaves the shuttle and runs after Nika and gives it to her. She takes it, shoves it into her pocket with only a glance at it--it's too small for her eyes to read at the moment--and turns back for the stairs. Joshua’s standing there with egg on his face in front of his Captain and Arden just keeps on talking. <br><br>
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Oh crap.  Joshua slaps his pocket and feels the card through his clothes and wilts.  Joshua’s standing there with egg on his face in front of his Captain and Arden just keeps on talking. <br><br>
  
 
'''Arden:''' And this description that it’s a pair of suspicious characters, that’s two and a half of the crew. <br>
 
'''Arden:''' And this description that it’s a pair of suspicious characters, that’s two and a half of the crew. <br>

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