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'''Arden:''' What?<br>
 
'''Arden:''' What?<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' I was actually curious. Were you leaving because of the sheer incompetence involved or are you leaving because of the—I’m pretty sure it’s the incompetence.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' I was actually curious. Were you leaving because of the sheer incompetence involved or are you leaving because of the—I’m pretty sure it’s the incompetence.<br>
'''Arden:''' I didn’t say anybody was incompetent. I was saying I had no problem with any of the actions that were taken whatsoever.<br>
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'''Arden:''' I didn’t say anybody was incompetent. I was saying I had no problem with any of the actions that were taken whatsoever.
 
'''Joshua:''' I guess I’m just trying to get a—I’m not saying anything was wrong or right, to have to say you want to leave, I—<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' I guess I’m just trying to get a—I’m not saying anything was wrong or right, to have to say you want to leave, I—<br>
 
'''Arden:''' None of us communicated well with one another.<br>
 
'''Arden:''' None of us communicated well with one another.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' That’s what I was trying to figure out. Thank you. Because if we can’t clearly define the problem—<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' That’s what I was trying to figure out. Thank you. Because if we can’t clearly define the problem—<br>
 
'''Arden:''' It was fairly obvious that this was the Sheriff and he wanted to search our ship. Which he has every right to do.<br>
 
'''Arden:''' It was fairly obvious that this was the Sheriff and he wanted to search our ship. Which he has every right to do.<br>
'''Joshua:''' Yeah. I know. You don’t have to argue with me on that. I’m in agreement. We’re not communicating particularly well or really at all.<br>
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'''Joshua:''' Yeah. I know. You don’t have to argue with me on that. I’m in agreement. We’re ont communicating particularly well or really at all.<br>
 
'''Arden:''' And the minute the ship got landlocked, all choice is taken out of our hands. I’m glad it worked out the way it did. I don’t ever want to do it again.<br>
 
'''Arden:''' And the minute the ship got landlocked, all choice is taken out of our hands. I’m glad it worked out the way it did. I don’t ever want to do it again.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' Fair enough.<br><br>
 
'''Joshua:''' Fair enough.<br><br>
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'''Kiera:''' You unlocked the doors to the ship? You’re the reason the—?<br><br>
 
'''Kiera:''' You unlocked the doors to the ship? You’re the reason the—?<br><br>
  
Everyone stops a beat to stare.<br><br>
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Everyone stops a beat to stare.<br>
  
 
'''Joshua:''' I’m just going to ignore the fact that you just said that, because it would make—we were agreeing so much and you smoothly moved along and—<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' I’m just going to ignore the fact that you just said that, because it would make—we were agreeing so much and you smoothly moved along and—<br>
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'''Rina:''' Might I make a suggestion?<br><br>
 
'''Rina:''' Might I make a suggestion?<br><br>
  
Her quiet request falls into the banter and everyone falls silent.<br><br>
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Her quite request falls into the banter and everyone falls silent.<br><br>
  
 
'''Nika:''' What?<br>
 
'''Nika:''' What?<br>

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