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Rasu-chan was pretty and gifted even before becoming a magical girl. Her mother is wealthy and even her deadbeat dad is well off. Still the family does not avoid all scandals, and her mother passed on the the tradition of pressure, pressure enough to push a more fragile person to the edge. Still she lived up to the presure, even seemed to thrive under it, always scoreing just high enough, but not too high in class, making the right friends, joining the right clubs. Even going on a date with the right boy. | Rasu-chan was pretty and gifted even before becoming a magical girl. Her mother is wealthy and even her deadbeat dad is well off. Still the family does not avoid all scandals, and her mother passed on the the tradition of pressure, pressure enough to push a more fragile person to the edge. Still she lived up to the presure, even seemed to thrive under it, always scoreing just high enough, but not too high in class, making the right friends, joining the right clubs. Even going on a date with the right boy. | ||
| β | Until her younger sister | + | Until her younger sister committed suicide. Believable enough...except Rasu-chan was there, and it wasn't a suicide. It was a Youma. She decided right then and there that she would find a way to fight these monsters no-one else saw. And the cat gave her that way. |
At first she fought to bring back her sister, but she also slowly realized she was _in love_ but not with her date..with the younger girl Miyuki. As the days went by and her mother became less and less there, Rasu-chan became more and more obbsesed with keeping Miyuki safe. Following her when ever she could, slipping though the buildings in Miyuki's neighborhood, killing youma, spying on her friends. | At first she fought to bring back her sister, but she also slowly realized she was _in love_ but not with her date..with the younger girl Miyuki. As the days went by and her mother became less and less there, Rasu-chan became more and more obbsesed with keeping Miyuki safe. Following her when ever she could, slipping though the buildings in Miyuki's neighborhood, killing youma, spying on her friends. | ||
